Kocrow17 Posted February 1, 2008 Report Share Posted February 1, 2008 Since we have traps that turn into monsters, here is one of those, a monster that turns into a spell, and a spell that turns into a trap. I may create more, but I don't know for sure. Each card is based of a Disney Villain. Be the first to properly name all 3 to win 1 rep. ~ Over! The winner is Dj Osiris! XD I'm giving these cards to a character named Sidney in my fanfic when she shows up. EDIT: I accidently copyrighted the cards for 2007 instead of 2008, lol. Just thought I'd point that out. Thanks, Yankee! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lucas Maximus Posted February 1, 2008 Report Share Posted February 1, 2008 Brilliant cards, i like all of them well done, and welcome back to the forums. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted February 1, 2008 Report Share Posted February 1, 2008 Cool card Kaze, but on the 2nd card, you say"When this card s effect resolves.....notice the s? lolAnyway, they are good, maybe the 2nd is a bit stong, but good ^_^9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Austinspencerman Posted February 1, 2008 Report Share Posted February 1, 2008 BLOODY BRILLIANT!!!!!! 100%!!!!I RARELY GIVE OUT 100s!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! nobody ever comes up with ideas like you!!!!!!!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted February 1, 2008 Report Share Posted February 1, 2008 Well, it's God Kaze, what do you expect? lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kocrow17 Posted February 1, 2008 Author Report Share Posted February 1, 2008 Brilliant cards' date=' i like all of them well done, and welcome back to the forums.[/quote']Thanks^^. It's good to be back. Cool card Kaze, but on the 2nd card, you say"When this card s effect resolves.....notice the s? lolAnyway, they are good, maybe the 2nd is a bit stong, but good ^_^9/10 That's because when I copy "Card's" from wordperfect and paste it into the card maker, it comes out as "Card s" for some reason, the ' being invisible. I can go back and change it, but I often forget to. BLOODY BRILLIANT!!!!!! 100%!!!!I RARELY GIVE OUT 100s!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! nobody ever comes up with ideas like you!!!!!!!!!! Thanks^^. I know, I am brilliant. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Junk Raver Posted February 1, 2008 Report Share Posted February 1, 2008 Jafar? (Aladdin) Hades? (Hercules) and i would say the monster with spiders in his hair from Nightmare be4 christmas lol or the boogeyman himself ^_^ Oogie boogie man ^_^ SIDNEY LOL Kaze, thats just cheesey ;) Very nice cards ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kocrow17 Posted February 1, 2008 Author Report Share Posted February 1, 2008 You got all three right! Jafar, Hades, and Oogie Boogie are all correct. A rep for you. What's wrong with Sidney? Here's an advanced copy of her pic: P.S. "I am the one hiding under your bed, teeth ground sharp and eyes glowing red!" XD I love that song. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Junk Raver Posted February 1, 2008 Report Share Posted February 1, 2008 Moi to ^_^ And its just a cheesy anagram lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kocrow17 Posted February 1, 2008 Author Report Share Posted February 1, 2008 This thread is dead already? I worked hard on these cards. Oh, well. Stay tuned for my Storm Rider set tomorrow! GK is back ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Junk Raver Posted February 1, 2008 Report Share Posted February 1, 2008 Threads die easily nowadays, if you ever need a bump Kaze just messege me ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JerryFreelance Posted February 1, 2008 Report Share Posted February 1, 2008 You guys can take your cheesy anagrams and whatever side-conversations you are having to the PMs. This thread is for rates of the cards. Djinni: A couple of errors... First off, it's LV3... So Gbind and level limit cower in the corner. Secondly, it has 1600 ATK. The highest LV3 monster [to my acknowledgement] is Sonic Bird with 1700 ATK and no effect. So basically it's a baby beatstick. Already has deck openings. But then, once it dies, it recycles to be a spell card. A spell card that gives you a new card. So when it goes to the graveyard after activation, you can premature burial/MSE [depending on what it is in the grave... Specify please?] it. Limited to broken... I'd say... Meh, 6/10 Deal with Hades: SOOOOOOOOO many errors. Seriously, proofread before you post. The idea is good though, and it would probably be limited =/ 6/10 Nightmare: More errors... Meh, pretty useless... First, it's during your main phase, so they can't activate the card anyways [most likely] and thus, it's essentially just a monster... A normal monster at that... Don't like it much, only really works in an RFG deck, and then, it's still not very good =/ 3/10 The biggest problem I see with your cards is that you do not proofread. After you write the effect, PROOFREAD PROOFREAD PROOFREAD your card. Otherwise, you lose so many points in ratings... The ideas are not too bad though. Average: 5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kocrow17 Posted February 2, 2008 Author Report Share Posted February 2, 2008 Thanks for the tips. I appreciate the the indepth review. For reference, how would you word the second card? EDIT: Forgot to mention, I'll lower Djinni's ATK to 1400. It's necesary, plot-wise, for its level to remain 3. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JerryFreelance Posted February 2, 2008 Report Share Posted February 2, 2008 Not a huge difference, there were just a few cap'ing errors and whatnot... But here: "Special Summon 1 Level 4 or lower monster from your hand. When this effect resolves, you can flip it face-down and treat it as a Normal Trap Card (this effect can only be used once per Duel). When this Trap Card is activated, destroy 1 monster on your opponent controls. Your opponent then Special Summons a different monster from their Graveyard in face-up Defense Position." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
barsam Posted February 2, 2008 Report Share Posted February 2, 2008 Good Job! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kocrow17 Posted February 2, 2008 Author Report Share Posted February 2, 2008 Not a huge difference' date=' there were just a few cap'ing errors and whatnot... But here: "Special Summon 1 Level 4 or lower monster from your hand. When this effect resolves, you can flip it face-down and treat it as a Normal Trap Card (this effect can only be used once per Duel). When this Trap Card is activated, destroy 1 monster on your opponent controls. Your opponent then Special Summons a different monster from their Graveyard in face-up Defense Position."[/quote']Thanks for the help. I just posted chapter 8 if you want to check it out. I (hopefully) improved my grammar, though you may not like how this chapters ends. 0.0 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rentaworrio Posted February 2, 2008 Report Share Posted February 2, 2008 they are okay 9/11 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RestLess-BoTics Posted February 2, 2008 Report Share Posted February 2, 2008 Absolutely incredible.The picture quality and uniqueness could improve, but the effects are just unbelievable.Keep up the great work. :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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