DSS Posted February 1, 2008 Report Share Posted February 1, 2008 So this is a card i did in like 5 minutes,so there myght be some OCG erors and some grammar wrongCheck it out !! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Junk Raver Posted February 1, 2008 Report Share Posted February 1, 2008 Tributing dont say attribute 'can only be summoned' Card your Deck and why repeat deck? also you need to add in spaces Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DSS Posted February 1, 2008 Author Report Share Posted February 1, 2008 Thanks for the Advice Dj - Osiris :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Junk Raver Posted February 1, 2008 Report Share Posted February 1, 2008 Your welcome ^_^ Im bored tonight so i can point out mistakes, the forums abit unactive ^_^ lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jerry OldMaster Posted February 1, 2008 Report Share Posted February 1, 2008 *sigh* OCG 40% :\ 7-8 OCG mistakes, 1-2 grammar mistakes. This card can only be Special Summoned by Tributing 1 WIND monster on your side of the field. When this card is Summoned, you can draw 1 card. If this card is sent to the Graveyard by the effect of a Spell or Trap Card, Special Summon 1 monster with an ATK of 1500 or less from your Deck. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lucas Maximus Posted February 1, 2008 Report Share Posted February 1, 2008 Many OCG errors (Dj pointed them out), I dislike the name; i don't think its very YuGiOh like. But in my own 'lil way, and i'm sure others will disagree, i actually kinda like the picture. Anyway nice card 7.8/10 ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DSS Posted February 1, 2008 Author Report Share Posted February 1, 2008 Thanks for the advice OldMasteri editid it againbut this is a card done in 5 minutes right Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Boss Z Posted February 1, 2008 Report Share Posted February 1, 2008 If you haven't made the changes DJ said... make them... if you have... then good... The pic looks like a real pic aswell... which is cool... ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hyperwater Posted February 1, 2008 Report Share Posted February 1, 2008 It's a pretty strange yet useful card! i like it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DSS Posted February 2, 2008 Author Report Share Posted February 2, 2008 Thanks ^_^ hyperwater and Boos Z well anymore comments or rates Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RiffMaster Alex Posted February 2, 2008 Report Share Posted February 2, 2008 i agree with everyone above me. The pic is cool. 5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zeroshot Posted February 2, 2008 Report Share Posted February 2, 2008 it's all been said before me and Do Not Vote On You Own Card In The Poll! thats not proving anything Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RestLess-BoTics Posted February 2, 2008 Report Share Posted February 2, 2008 Once you improve on your grammar, this card will be about perfect! This card has a great image! Keep up the good work! For effort, you did a pretty good job! Next time, just put in a little more time in making your cards, in order to receive higher ratings and opinions from other members. Again, good job! :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cyber Altair Posted February 2, 2008 Report Share Posted February 2, 2008 were you trying to make a cloudian, so i can rate it properly. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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