My First Few Cards

[Dusk_Frenzy]

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[i](Iceago, The Mighty Dragon + Flamargo, The Mighty Dragon)

Effect: This card cannot be destroyed as a result of battle. Destroy this card when it is targeted by the effect of a Spell, Trap or Effect Monster. If this card sucessfully attacks your opponents life points directly, you gain 100 life points.[/i]

[Gabriel Maeso]

Iceago is Overpowered(a level 4 monster with 2000 ATK adn with a good effect?), Flamargo has its errors, and Bellatrim is okay too.

OCG errors:
"(Iceago, The Mighty Dragon + Flamargo, The Mighty Dragon)

[b]Effect: [/b]This card cannot be destroyed as a result of battle. Destroy this card when it is targeted by the effect of a Spell, Trap or Effect Monster. If this card sucessfully attacks your opponents life points directly, you gain 100 life points."

Remove the "Effect: " part

The "flip coins" effects, it only says what happen when you get it right, but what happen if you get it wrong?
I sujest:
"Trow a coin and call Head or Tails, if you get it right [input good effect here], if you get it wrong [input bad effect here]"
and put when you can use theyr effects like on Flamargo's put something like: "This effect can only be used once on your Main Phase.". And on Iceago's "when this card is declared an attack targed flip a coin..."
Overall Score: 8.5/10

[Dusk_Frenzy]

Thanks for your reply, I'll be sure to change them.