Lewk Posted February 8, 2011 Report Share Posted February 8, 2011 [center][size="5"][b][u]Original Thread:[/u][/b] http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/topic/239059-malefic-kuriboh/ [b][u]Full Size Artwork (from my DA Account):[/u][/b] http://lewkthefrog.deviantart.com/art/Malefic-Kuriboh-196667428[/size] [img]http://img148.imageshack.us/img148/2915/malefickuriboh.png[/img] This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by removing from play 1 "Kuriboh", "Winged Kuriboh" or "Kuribon" from your Deck. There can only be 1 face-up "Malefic" monster on the field. During your opponents Battle Phase you can tribute this card to inflict 1500 points of damage to your opponent. Once per duel, during your Draw Phase (before you draw) you may remove this card from play from your Graveyard to add one card from your Deck to your hand with "Kuriboh", "Kuribon" or "Mokey Mokey" in its name. You cannot draw any cards from your deck until your next turn. Shuffle your deck afterwards. [spoiler=TV Show Style][img]http://img684.imageshack.us/img684/7754/nonameq.png[/img][/spoiler][spoiler=Evolution Style][img]http://img265.imageshack.us/img265/997/malefickuriboh1.png[/img][/spoiler][spoiler=Zotoshi Style][img]http://img573.imageshack.us/img573/4211/malefickuriboh2.png[/img][/spoiler][spoiler=CBG Style][img]http://img525.imageshack.us/img525/6231/malefickuriboh3.png[/img][/spoiler][/center] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Manpole Posted February 8, 2011 Report Share Posted February 8, 2011 Add the lore if you want more comments, some people don't like trying to read small font. Overall its effect is pretty nice, but its effect that lets you remove it from the Graveyard to the out of play zone to draw a "Kuriboh" or "Mokey Mokey" monster may be OP, because that effect is good, and it still allows you to draw during that Draw Phase. The only change I would make to that effect would be that [b]if you use it, you cannot draw during that Draw Phase.[/b] The ocg all seems correct from my read through, except for a few capitalization issues. [b]Deck and Graveyard[/b] both need to be capitalized. Overall a pretty cool card, but could use a little better image. (mainly because the monster is holding a gun... what?) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lewk Posted February 8, 2011 Author Report Share Posted February 8, 2011 [quote name='Manpole' timestamp='1297192284' post='4997529'] Overall a pretty cool card, but could use a little better image. (mainly because the monster is holding a gun... what?) [/quote] I drew it with a gun (and all the anime references) because I was trying to make some badass amalgamation. I'll add a lore and fix that minor ocg as well as decrease it from being so OP'd. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
judedudemude Posted February 8, 2011 Report Share Posted February 8, 2011 if you have 2 kuriboh and 2 malefic kuriboh you can deal 3000 points of direct damange to your opponer easy (plus cards like dark room and scerrect barrel also help) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ninja Jonathan Posted February 8, 2011 Report Share Posted February 8, 2011 Thank you for making this lewk 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lewk Posted February 9, 2011 Author Report Share Posted February 9, 2011 [center][b]BUMP[/b] FOR GREAT JUSTICE[/center] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Manpole Posted February 9, 2011 Report Share Posted February 9, 2011 One thing I forgot to add, don't most Malefic monsters require there to be a field spell on the field or its destroyed? maybe you should add that. Because like judemude pointed out, you can deal quick damage pretty easily. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lewk Posted February 9, 2011 Author Report Share Posted February 9, 2011 [quote name='Manpole' timestamp='1297288822' post='4999894'] One thing I forgot to add, don't most Malefic monsters require there to be a field spell on the field or its destroyed? maybe you should add that. Because like judemude pointed out, you can deal quick damage pretty easily. [/quote] Malefic BEWD didn't have it, so I just went of that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Black W Mage Posted February 10, 2011 Report Share Posted February 10, 2011 this is crap. Kuriboh on his own is an awful card, as well as all the support for him. IMO, this card should be a lv1 Tuner with the following effect "If you control a face-up "Kuriboh" monster, you can special summon this card from your hand. Once per turn, you can special summon all "kuriboh" monsters in your graveyard that were discarded by their own effect." And then the remove from play thing should be instead "If this card was sent from the field to the graveyard, at the End Phase of that turn you can remove from play this card as well as one "Kuriboh", "Winged Kuriboh", or "Kuribon" from your graveyard to add 1 card with "Kuriboh" in it's name from your deck to your hand." If there are any OCG mistakes, . IDC if it's OPd, the worst you can ever do is make 3 Formula Synchrons. Or you know, take away the once per duel part of the last effect and take away the no drawing portion and I will give this an easy 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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