†Marksman† Posted February 8, 2011 Report Share Posted February 8, 2011 Hello people of YCM! Today I have just started a new set type thingy...Anyhow, It is called the rise of the magician. So far I have ordered and received a booster pack for said set, and have made a few cards. Now as the title says, I am currently working on this, and when finished - Will be posted in finished sets subforum. +Reps are given to constructive comments, and OCG fixes. As I am new here, I will probably have OCG errors. Before, I have ended up having effects matching REAL card's effects. I will now make sure that I am making [b]100%[/b] original ideas. Anyhow, this is my first set, So i am not totally sure how this will end up. First off, I want to show you the only booster pack I have gotten for this set, hence the name of the set, I have named this starter-pack, Rise of the magician. Let's get to this said pack. [img]http://img155.imageshack.us/img155/6375/order44.png[/img] [img]http://img4.imageshack.us/img4/5259/stemp3.png[/img] More packs will be added, as the set continues on. Okay, Now - that we have the pack out of the way, let's get to the cards. I have to say though, I will probably focus more on monsters than spells/traps etc.. Enough chit-chat, too the cards. =3 (Might add story, Don't know if theres a point to though..) [size="5"][b]Enjoy![/b][/size] [Spoiler=Monsters 10/??] Unarmored Magician(S) have crap pictures, Beware. [Spoiler=Unarmored Magician] [img]http://img824.imageshack.us/img824/7830/353548s.jpg[/img] Lore: Once per turn, during the Standby Phase this card is summoned to the Field, if you have a Spellcaster-Type monster that is in your graveyard, you may return that card to your hand. [/Spoiler] [Spoiler=Unarmored Magician Girl] No idea why I made a 'Girl' Version... Lore: Increase this card's ATK and DEF by 300 for every "Unarmored Magician" in either player's Graveyard. (Sorry, Basically DARK MAGICIAN GIRL card...Had a brain fart..) [/Spoiler] [Spoiler=Magician of Water] Lore: Once per turn, you can Tribute 1 WATER monster on your side of the field to Special Summon one Spellcaster-Type monster from your Deck in Attack position. When that card is destroyed, inflict 500 damage to your opponent. [/Spoiler] [Spoiler=Magician of Fire] Lore: Return 1 "Magician" card on your field to your hand to Special Summon 1 FIRE monster from your Graveyard in Attack position. [/Spoiler] [Spoiler=Magician of Earth] Lore: Once per turn, select 1 EARTH-Attribute monster from your Deck and send it to your side of the Field in face-up attack position. In the next 2 End Phases, destroy that card. [/Spoiler] [Spoiler=Magician of Light] Lore: You can activate this card's effect once during your Main Phase. Draw 2 cards during the End Phase. If you drew 1 LIGHT monster, Special Summon it in Attack Position. That card cannot be destroyed except by this card's effect. When this card is removed from the field, destroy that card. [/Spoiler] [Spoiler=Magician of Darkness] Lore: Once per turn, if this card is selected as an attack target, Tribute 1 level 4 monster from your Hand or your side of the field to negate the attack. When this card is destroyed, inflict 500 damage to your opponent. [/Spoiler] [Spoiler=Magician of Wind] Lore: Flip: When this card is Set, if you have another Spellcaster-Type monster on your side of the Field, inflict 800 points of damage to your opponent's Life Points. When this card is Set, if you don't have another Spellcaster-Type monster on your side of the field, inflict 800 points of damage to yourself. [/Spoiler] [Spoiler=Magician Synchron] Lore: This card can only be used as Synchro Material if you Synchro Summon "Magician of All Elements." Once per turn, add 1 Spellcaster-Type monster from your Deck to your hand, and end your turn. [/Spoiler] [Spoiler=Magician of All Elements] Lore:"Magician Synchron" + 1 non-Tuner monster Once per turn, take control of 1 Spellcaster-Type monster on your opponent's field. When this card is destroyed, return all monsters you took control of by this card's effect to your opponent and inflict 800 damage to your opponent for each. [/Spoiler] [/Spoiler] [b][size="5"]CnC Appreciated, And rewarded![/size][/b] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
†Marksman† Posted February 9, 2011 Author Report Share Posted February 9, 2011 *Bump!* Added 1 new monster! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
duelistxynam Posted February 9, 2011 Report Share Posted February 9, 2011 Unarmored Magician Girl LORE: This card gains 300 ATK for each "Unarmoed Magician" in either player's Graveyard. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
†Marksman† Posted February 10, 2011 Author Report Share Posted February 10, 2011 *Bump* Added 7 new monsters....Going to make spells/traps soon! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dandelo Posted February 10, 2011 Report Share Posted February 10, 2011 Well, they're slightly underwhelming, especially the cards that require Tribute. They're stats alone will get them pummeled, and their effects aren't exactly exciting or... effective either. They're not bad cards, per say, just weak cards. Keep up the card making, mate. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
†Marksman† Posted February 11, 2011 Author Report Share Posted February 11, 2011 [quote name='Dandelo' timestamp='1297334595' post='5000712'] Well, they're slightly underwhelming, especially the cards that require Tribute. They're stats alone will get them pummeled, and their effects aren't exactly exciting or... effective either. They're not bad cards, per say, just weak cards. Keep up the card making, mate. [/quote] Thanks for the criticism, Going to think about giving them a [size="1"]small[/size] amount of power. Don't want any underpowered cards, Do we? Anyhow, When updating them i'll try to make them more effective.. I know I'm capable of doing it though, I'm very creative. Anyhow, Thanks, and i'll make more PRONTO. EDIT: Adding the same booster pack idea, Just different RENDER etc...I think it's better, But you decide which one is better. You tell me, and i'll erase the one that is bad. Anyhow, Seeya! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rias Gremory Posted February 11, 2011 Report Share Posted February 11, 2011 The pic for Magician Of Light has been already used on an OFFICIAL Yu-Gi-Oh card. Its called "Arcanite Magician" and so is the pic for the Magician Of All Elements. It has been already used for an OFFICIAL Yu-Gi-Oh card, its called "Rapid Fire Magician". [spoiler=Proof] Rapid Fire Magician [img]http://store.timezonegaming.com/images/Rapid-FireMagicianDR04-EN-R.png[/img] Arcanite Magician [img]http://images.wikia.com/yugioh/images/8/82/ArcaniteMagicianCRMS-EN-SR-1E.png[/img] [/spoiler] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Communityreborn Posted February 11, 2011 Report Share Posted February 11, 2011 Don't forget that booster packs not only contain a featured archtype, but other un-related cards/archtypes as well. You can borrow a few from me: 1 monster, two traps Card Shark(Dark, Level 4, Fish, 0 ATK and DEF): This card cannot be destroyed by battle, and you take no battle damage from battles involving this Card. During your Draw Phase, instead of Drawing 1 Card, you can select one card from your Deck and add it to your hand. During your Standby Phase, pay 2000 Life Points or destroy this card. Aim...(Normal Trap) This card cannot be activated unless "...Fire!" is set face-down on your side of the field ...Fire!(Normal Trap) This card cannot be activated unless the card "Aim..." is activated on your side of the field. Inflict 1500 damage to your opponent. I like the cards though. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
†Marksman† Posted February 11, 2011 Author Report Share Posted February 11, 2011 [quote name='White Devil Daniela' timestamp='1297464759' post='5003194'] The pic for Magician Of Light has been already used on an OFFICIAL Yu-Gi-Oh card. Its called "Arcanite Magician" and so is the pic for the Magician Of All Elements. It has been already used for an OFFICIAL Yu-Gi-Oh card, its called "Rapid Fire Magician". [spoiler=Proof] Rapid Fire Magician [img]http://store.timezonegaming.com/images/Rapid-FireMagicianDR04-EN-R.png[/img] Arcanite Magician [img]http://images.wikia.com/yugioh/images/8/82/ArcaniteMagicianCRMS-EN-SR-1E.png[/img] [/spoiler] [/quote] I had a HUGE feeling that those pictures were used in real cards, As they look professional. Anyhow, Thanks for telling me, I'm assuming that means i have to remove them though, Right? Anyhow, Thanks! [quote name='Communityreborn' timestamp='1297465379' post='5003217'] Don't forget that booster packs not only contain a featured archtype, but other un-related cards/archtypes as well. You can borrow a few from me: 1 monster, two traps Card Shark(Dark, Level 4, Fish, 0 ATK and DEF): This card cannot be destroyed by battle, and you take no battle damage from battles involving this Card. During your Draw Phase, instead of Drawing 1 Card, you can select one card from your Deck and add it to your hand. During your Standby Phase, pay 2000 Life Points or destroy this card. Aim...(Normal Trap) This card cannot be activated unless "...Fire!" is set face-down on your side of the field ...Fire!(Normal Trap) This card cannot be activated unless the card "Aim..." is activated on your side of the field. Inflict 1500 damage to your opponent. I like the cards though. 8/10 [/quote] What do you mean, use card's that are yours? You mean for this set...Or what? P.S. Which booster is better? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rias Gremory Posted February 11, 2011 Report Share Posted February 11, 2011 [quote name='†Marksman†' timestamp='1297466081' post='5003234'] I had a HUGE feeling that those pictures were used in real cards, As they look professional. Anyhow, Thanks for telling me, I[b]'m assuming that means i have to remove them though[/b], Right? Anyhow, Thanks! [/quote] Sadly Yea. Either change the pics or remove the cards. You cant post cards with pics that had already been used for real cards [quote name='†Marksman†' timestamp='1297466081' post='5003234'] P.S. Which booster is better? [/quote] Hmm I like the one on the Left better Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
†Marksman† Posted February 11, 2011 Author Report Share Posted February 11, 2011 [quote name='White Devil Daniela' timestamp='1297466826' post='5003262'] Sadly Yea. Either change the pics or remove the cards. You cant post cards with pics that had already been used for real cards [/quote] Alrighty...Time to look. >.> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rias Gremory Posted February 11, 2011 Report Share Posted February 11, 2011 I will help you look for some pics for the Magician Of Light. I found one. Its ok if you dont like it. I can keep looking [spoiler=Pic] [img]http://i127.photobucket.com/albums/p122/windofanime/anime%20types/Mage%20and%20Sorcerer/dde1c625.jpg[/img] [/spoiler] You can use this pic for Magician Of Earth if you want to. I can look for a better one though [spoiler=Earth Magician] [img]http://i759.photobucket.com/albums/xx231/ninetailed001/Anime%20worriors/Females/Tarot_card___The_Magician_by_asuka1.jpg[/img] OR! [img]http://img3.lln.crunchyroll.com/i/spire1/04232008/e/6/3/2/e6326187eb5fd0_full.jpg[/img] [/spoiler] EDIT 2: I am giving you different pics because Yugioh cards are suppose to have "Anime-Like" pics. Some of your pics arent. Its just a suggestion. Here is an Anime Fire Magician [spoiler=Pic] [img]http://img683.imageshack.us/img683/8131/firemage.png[/img] [/spoiler] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
†Marksman† Posted February 12, 2011 Author Report Share Posted February 12, 2011 [quote name='White Devil Daniela' timestamp='1297468536' post='5003319'] 1. [b]I will help you look for some pics for the Magician Of Light.[/b] = Yes, I'll use the first one. 2. [b]You can use this pic for Magician Of Earth[/b] = Yes, Thanks. =3 Thanks much, Appreciate it. +Rep for you! [/quote] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rias Gremory Posted February 12, 2011 Report Share Posted February 12, 2011 Thanks for the +rep I have made like 40 Magician Cards that I havent even posted cause too lazy. So I have LOTS of Magician Pics on my Computer and also know the right place to look for them. P.S: Glad I could help. Edited the post above (added a Fire Mage Pic) and putted another Earth Mage pic. Pic the one you like the most! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Judαs Posted February 12, 2011 Report Share Posted February 12, 2011 Whoa, OCG problems much. Fixed using expert OCG (it may also help to check the sticky in case you doubt me here ) : Unarmored Magician - What does its effect mean? Unarmored Magician Girl - [b]UNDERPOWERED[/b] [quote name="Original"]Raise this card's ATK and DEF by 300 for every "Unarmored Magician" in either player's graveyard. [/quote] [quote name="Fixed"][i]Increase [/i]this card's ATK and DEF by 300 for every "Unarmored Magician" in either player's [b]G[/b]raveyard. [/quote] Water [quote name="Original"]Once per turn, You may tribute 1 WATER-Attribute monster on your side of the Field to Summon one Spellcaster-Type monster from your Deck to the Field in face-up Attack position. When that card is destroyed, Inflict 500 damage to your opponent's Life Points.[/quote] [quote name="Fixed"]Once per turn, [i]y[/i]ou can [i]T[/i]ribute 1 [i]WATER [/i]monster on your side of the [i]f[/i]ield to [i]Special[/i] Summon one Spellcaster-Type monster from your Deck in Attack position. When that card is destroyed, [i]i[/i]nflict 500 damage to your [i]opponent[/i].[/quote] Fire [quote name="Original"]Return 1 'Magician' card on your side of the Field to your hand to Special Summon 1 FIRE-Attribute monster from your Graveyard to your side of the Field in face-up attack position.[/quote] [quote name="Fixed"]Return 1 [i]"Magician"[/i] card on [i]your field[/i] to your hand to Special Summon 1 [i]FIRE [/i]monster from your Graveyard in [i]A[/i]ttack position.[/quote] Darkness: same as a few before, damage is inflicted [i]to the opponent[/i] in newer cards, not Life Points, [b]T[/b]ribute, [b]f[/b]ield, and im not sure but I think it's [i]A[/i]ttack [i]T[/i]arget. Wind: Weird effect IMO, since the effect says "when the card is set" but if a card is Set face-down its effect cannot activate. My suggestion: change it to FLIP: or any other Light - I think it's SUPER overpowered, since every turn you draw 2 cards aswell as special summon? My suggestion: When this card is Tribute Summoned... a la Monarchs. Also, the lore says the spcSummoned card will be destroyed when Mag. of Light is destroyed. So if Mag. of Light is sent to the Graveyard/Tributed/returned to hand etc that card remains on the field? So I changed this in the fixed OCG [quote name="Original"]During the End Phase this card's effect was activated, Draw 2 cards. If one of those two were LIGHT monsters, Special Summon it in face-up attack position on your side of the field. That card cannot be destroyed except when this card is destroyed.[/quote] [quote name="Fixed"][i]You can activate this card's effect once during your Main Phase. Draw 2 cards during the End Phase. If you drew 1 LIGHT monster, Special Summon it in Attack Position. That card cannot be destroyed except by this card's effect. When this card is removed from the field, destroy that card.[/i][/quote] I've sent the rest by message since I cant post too many quotes here Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
†Marksman† Posted February 12, 2011 Author Report Share Posted February 12, 2011 Alright, +Rep sent to touma, Of course. Anyhow, I made TONS of OCG fixes and picture changes. (Thanks to Touma and White Devil Daniela) All the pictures of the edited cards are on hold, As my YCM is freakin' out. (Keeps saying i can't use that image extension, and i can't do straight upload from card maker...) So, If you didn't see the cards before...Then you'll be dissapointed, as theres only one card on there...So, anyway - Just an update and I will be trying again soon! Thanks everybody for your feedback and help! =3 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
†Marksman† Posted February 13, 2011 Author Report Share Posted February 13, 2011 *BumP* Still, can't get my card-uploading to work....Hopefully it'll work sometime soon...Anyhow, Have a spell card to add. Sadly it's an equip card though... Anyhow, Sorry for no pictures at the moment..Still trying to get them to upload... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
†Marksman† Posted February 20, 2011 Author Report Share Posted February 20, 2011 HUMONGOUS *BUMP* (Had to go to 10th page to find this thread. :3) Poll Update: First Booster Pack to reach ten votes wins. So far the guy is winning. >.> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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