Dusk_Frenzy Posted February 9, 2011 Report Share Posted February 9, 2011 Alright, This has been edited fully. Cards have been editied since the last comments ^^. First off, [u][b]Image Credit goes to JazinKay[/b][/u] And now for the cards; [spoiler=4 stars and lower] [img]http://img80.imageshack.us/img80/9291/358994.jpg[/img] Lore: [i]You can Special Summon this card from your hand. If you do this, your opponent can Special Summon 1 monster from their Graveyard.[/i] [img]http://img513.imageshack.us/img513/8660/358994hg.jpg[/img] Lore: [i]Discard 1 card from your hand during Main Phase 1. This monster can attack twice during the Battle Phase of any turn this effect is used.[/i] [img]http://img703.imageshack.us/img703/9291/358994.jpg[/img] Lore: [i]When this card is Normal Summoned, if your opponent controls a monster, you can Special Summon 1 "Underworld" monster that is Lvl 4 or below from your hand.[/i] [img]http://img215.imageshack.us/img215/9291/358994.jpg[/img] Lore: [i]For the cost of 200 life points, you can take the top 5 cards on your opponents Deck, look at them and discard any 2. Return the rest to the top. This effect works only once.[/i] [img]http://img80.imageshack.us/img80/4713/358994s.jpg[/img] Lore: [i]For the cost of 700 Life Points, you can attack your opponent's Life Points directly.[/i] [/spoiler] [spoiler=Lvl 5 and above] [img]http://img833.imageshack.us/img833/5038/358994r.jpg[/img] Lore: [i]When this card is sent from the field to the Graveyard by your opponent's card (including by battle, card effect, or by being destroyed), return 1 "Underworld" monster from your Graveyard to your hand. If there are no "Underworld"monsters in your graveyard, increase your lifepoints by 1000[/i] [img]http://img337.imageshack.us/img337/2544/358994w.jpg[/img] Lore: [i]During battle between this attacking card and a Defence Positioned monster whose DEF is lower than the ATK of this card, inflict the battle difference as Battle Damage to your opponent's Life Points.[/i] [img]http://img517.imageshack.us/img517/7716/358994c.jpg[/img] Lore: [i]If you control at least 1 face-up monster and have no monsters in your Graveyard, you can Special Summon this card from your hand. [/i] [img]http://img524.imageshack.us/img524/9291/358994.jpg[/img] Lore: [i]This card can not be Normal Summoned or Set. This card canot be Special Summoned escept by the effect of "Sacrifice to the Underworld". If this card is Special Summoned successfully, select 1 card on the field and destroy it. [/i] [img]http://img341.imageshack.us/img341/9291/358994.jpg[/img] Lore: [i]This card can only be Special Summoned by removing 3 "Underworld" monsters from your hand to the Graveyard.[/i] [/spoiler] [spoiler=Spell/Traps] [img]http://img411.imageshack.us/img411/1916/358994o.jpg[/img] Lore: [i]This card is activated when your opponent declares an attack. The attacking monster is destroyed and your opponent takes 1000 points Battle Damage.[/i] [img]http://img593.imageshack.us/img593/9291/358994.jpg[/img] Lore: [i]Activate this card by offering 1 face-up "Volatar, King of the Underworld" on your side of the field as a Tribute. Special Summon 1 "Zuvales, Diety of the Underworld" from your hand, Deck or Graveyard.[/i] [/spoiler] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cyber94 Posted February 9, 2011 Report Share Posted February 9, 2011 Wow. Nice cards. I love the graphics, cards are balanced. 9/10 You have a bright future Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dusk_Frenzy Posted February 9, 2011 Author Report Share Posted February 9, 2011 [quote name='Cyber94' timestamp='1297253712' post='4999051'] Wow. Nice cards. I love the graphics, cards are balanced. 9/10 You have a bright future [/quote] Thanks for that man, appreciate it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dusk_Frenzy Posted February 11, 2011 Author Report Share Posted February 11, 2011 Bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Y2Jgrave Posted February 11, 2011 Report Share Posted February 11, 2011 [center]OCG fix -Grueler When this card is Normal Summoned while your opponent control a monster, you can Special Summon 1 Level 4 or lower "Underworld" monster from your hand. [quote]Effect is quite decent considering most it's DARK monster but yeah..kinda generic so it's a 5/10[/quote] -Zulex If you control 1 or more face-up monster while you have no monsters in your Graveyard, you can Special Summon this card from your hand. When this card is Special Summoned this way, this card's original ATK and DEF become 2000. [quote]Quite oped(over powered) considering it's an easy monster to summon, I reckon you should just get rid of the 2000 power attack gain...but pretty decent so a 4.5/10[/quote] -Voltar When this card is destroy by battle or by a card effect,return 1 "Underworld" monster from your Graveyard to your hand. If there are no "Underworld"monsters in your graveyard, increase your Life Points by 1000. [center]Probably the best card on this set? so yeah 8/10[/center] -Leegus This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set.This card cannot be Special Summoned except by Tributing 3 "Underworld" monsters. When this card is sucessfully summoned, you can attack your opponent's life points directly. [quote]This is godzilla's size op man, a 3000 direct attack, I hate to face this guy so either make a drawback or just remove the direct attack thinggy so yeah a 3.5/10 [/quote] -Zalin When this card is destroyed as a result of battle, you can Special Summon 2 Level 6 or lower "Underworld" monster from your Deck, Graveyard or hand. [quote]This is crazy broken actually, just not fair so broken/10[/quote] -Zuvales This card cannot be Normal Summoned or set.This card cannot be Special Summoned except by removing 1 "Zalin, God of the Underworld", 1 "Zulex, Judge of the Underworld" and 1 "Voltar, King of the Underworld" from play. When this is sucessfully summoned, return all "underworld"monster in your Graveyard back to your Deck and Shuffle it. [quote]Considering it's pretty hard to Special Summon this dude, I think it's quite fair..so yeah a 6.5/10[/quote] -Harades This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by Tributing 4 Level 4 or lower "underworld" monster you control on the field. [quote]Quite generic but it's not madly op but considering the trouble you get to bring this guy to the field, I would expect more but yeah..a 7/10 [/quote] Overall, ocg need some working but considering it's your 1st set or is it? I'll give it a 7/10.[/center] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dusk_Frenzy Posted February 11, 2011 Author Report Share Posted February 11, 2011 [quote name='Y2JgraveVStheWORLD' timestamp='1297419640' post='5002379'] -Grueler When this card is Normal Summoned while your opponent control a monster, you can Special Summon 1 Level 4 or lower "Underworld" monster from your hand. -Zulex If you control 1 or more face-up monster while you have no monsters in your Graveyard, you can Special Summon this card from your hand. When this card is Special Summoned this way, this card's original ATK and DEF become 2000. -Voltar When this card is destroy by battle or by a card effect,return 1 "Underworld" monster from your Graveyard to your hand. If there are no "Underworld"monsters in your graveyard, increase your Life Points by 1000. [center]Probably the best card on this set? so yeah 8/10[/center] -Leegus This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set.This card cannot be Special Summoned except by Tributing 3 "Underworld" monsters. When this card is sucessfully summoned, you can attack your opponent's life points directly. -Zalin When this card is destroyed as a result of battle, you can Special Summon 2 Level 6 or lower "Underworld" monster from your Deck, Graveyard or hand. -Zuvales This card cannot be Normal Summoned or set.This card cannot be Special Summoned except by removing 1 "Zalin, God of the Underworld", 1 "Zulex, Judge of the Underworld" and 1 "Voltar, King of the Underworld" from play. When this is sucessfully summoned, return all "underworld"monster in your Graveyard back to your Deck and Shuffle it. -Harades This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by Tributing 4 Level 4 or lower "underworld" monster you control on the field. Overall, ocg need some working but considering it's your 1st set or is it? I'll give it a 7/10.[/center] [/quote] Thanks Heaps for that Y2JgraveVStheWORLD, It sorta is my first set, I have posted around 4 or more cards but I have recieved like 1 reply on each and that hasnt really helped much, and sorta set me back a bit. I agree with a few effects being a bit over the top, after posting them I thought they would need a change, but I wanted opinions on them first. Ill make sure to edit them, Thanks again Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shadow the Hedgehog fan#1 Posted February 11, 2011 Report Share Posted February 11, 2011 really good cards! hope the really come out with these!! the are really good in pic, atk and stuff like that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dusk_Frenzy Posted February 11, 2011 Author Report Share Posted February 11, 2011 [quote name='Shadow the Hedgehog fan#1' timestamp='1297424321' post='5002418'] really good cards! hope the really come out with these!! the are really good in pic, atk and stuff like that. [/quote] Thanks for that Shadow Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shadow the Hedgehog fan#1 Posted February 11, 2011 Report Share Posted February 11, 2011 [quote name='Jmaac1' timestamp='1297424786' post='5002431'] Thanks for that Shadow [/quote] welcom. so, you said this was your first set? i really wish they where real. i do for all cards in rc and pcc. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dusk_Frenzy Posted February 11, 2011 Author Report Share Posted February 11, 2011 [quote name='Shadow the Hedgehog fan#1' timestamp='1297426026' post='5002442'] welcom. so, you said this was your first set? i really wish they where real. i do for all cards in rc and pcc. [/quote] No worries. Yeh this sorta is my first proper set. I have posted, like I said to Y2J, a few times and have got a minimal amount of feedback whcih hasnt helped alot. I wish they were real aswell I have a few more on the way plus edited versions of the ones above. Thanks Again Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Y2Jgrave Posted February 12, 2011 Report Share Posted February 12, 2011 [center]No sweat dude..only helping a member out After the ocg fixing and maybe tone some of the op cards pm me and I'll love to check it out. Anyway, check mine out, and it's not the best or perfect of all sets but yeah..so just click the link in my signature...it's been a while since someone comment on it[/center] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dusk_Frenzy Posted February 13, 2011 Author Report Share Posted February 13, 2011 [quote name='Y2JgraveVStheWORLD' timestamp='1297525478' post='5004400'] [center]No sweat dude..only helping a member out After the ocg fixing and maybe tone some of the op cards pm me and I'll love to check it out. Anyway, check mine out, and it's not the best or perfect of all sets but yeah..so just click the link in my signature...it's been a while since someone comment on it[/center] [/quote] Thanks Again. I reviewed your flames from beyond set. More cards should be up soon, Im trying out different effects with them so it may take a while ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Billy Batson Posted February 16, 2011 Report Share Posted February 16, 2011 So ok I check this out but since my friend Y2J already fix the ocg I don't think I need to talk about that part. Overall about the set,it good but could be better well maybe until it's been fix so until then a 6.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ginko Posted February 16, 2011 Report Share Posted February 16, 2011 you have too many powerful monsters to be a successful deck. that and Hades is a god, not a titan, that and you basically have 3 different rulers of this underworld of yours. i like my underworld monsters better, lol overall a good set though, 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dusk_Frenzy Posted February 17, 2011 Author Report Share Posted February 17, 2011 [quote name='Booger' timestamp='1297896837' post='5012832'] you have too many powerful monsters to be a successful deck. that and Hades is a god, not a titan, that and you basically have 3 different rulers of this underworld of yours. i like my underworld monsters better, lol overall a good set though, 7/10 [/quote] Thanks for that. I've been working hard to get these cards right so hopefully soon they are up ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dusk_Frenzy Posted February 20, 2011 Author Report Share Posted February 20, 2011 [b][u]BUUUMP! tHE WHOLE SET HAS BEEN REVAMPPED[/u][/b] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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