Skythief Posted February 9, 2011 Report Share Posted February 9, 2011 [center]So I basically got this picture and this is what I made of it. I'm not sure since I have the picture for quite some time now, but I think it came from DeviantArt. [img]http://img440.imageshack.us/i/createcardphpqn.jpg[/img] Lore: Draw 1 card and show it to your opponent. When you activate that card, toss a coin and call it. If you call it right, draw 2 cards. If you call it wrong, that cards effect is negated and it is destroyed, then discard 1 Spell or Trap card. If you can't, take 1500 damage. Any comments on this? hate/rate and give contructive criticism please[/center] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Griffin Posted February 9, 2011 Report Share Posted February 9, 2011 If called right: +1 If wrong: -2/-1 +2000 self burn. That is weighted against you. I'd prefer to stay advantage-safe and not play it in any Deck I can think of. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RickiMinaj Posted February 9, 2011 Report Share Posted February 9, 2011 This could somehow be worked into a barrel behind the door deck... But still not vary advantage safe. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Glоrious Posted February 9, 2011 Report Share Posted February 9, 2011 OCG that needs a fixin': When that card is played = When you activate this card its effect is negated and it is destroyed <-- this part. What is "it"? Whats negated and destroyed? Onto [i]da ca'ad[/i]. I don't understand the point of the first effect. How is it relevant to the card? Anyway, the effect seems to be solely based on WATER Decks. I suppose it could be used in some WATER Decks, although personally, I wouldn't add it (not a fan of gambling cards.) But I like it. I agree with Griffin though. You should provide another effect that puts some more reward if called right. Clearly, you need to edit the card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skythief Posted February 11, 2011 Author Report Share Posted February 11, 2011 [quote name='-Griffin' timestamp='1297284928' post='4999762'] If called right: +1 If wrong: -2/-1 +2000 self burn. That is weighted against you. I'd prefer to stay advantage-safe and not play it in any Deck I can think of. [/quote] Not entirely right. It's a draw to begin with. But I can see your point. [quote name='Glоrious' timestamp='1297287884' post='4999864'] OCG that needs a fixin': When that card is played = When you activate this card [b]Not this card. That card. The card you drew.[/b] its effect is negated and it is destroyed <-- this part. What is "it"? Whats negated and destroyed? [b]The card you played is "it". I will replace it by "that card". [/b] Onto [i]da ca'ad[/i]. I don't understand the point of the first effect. How is it relevant to the card? [b]It's relevant to the card as in this card isn't the trigger for the gamble. It's the card you draw by the first effect that triggers the gamble. That's why it's "that card" and not "this card" in the card lore. [/b] Anyway, the effect seems to be solely based on WATER Decks. I suppose it could be used in some WATER Decks, although personally, I wouldn't add it (not a fan of gambling cards.) But I like it. I agree with Griffin though. You should provide another effect that puts some more reward if called right. Clearly, you need to edit the card. [b]Will think of something.[/b] [/quote] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Griffin Posted February 11, 2011 Report Share Posted February 11, 2011 It is entirely right. The draw is included in the -2/-1. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skythief Posted February 11, 2011 Author Report Share Posted February 11, 2011 Such redonation would render Jar of Greed useless, wouldn't it? And btw, I changed the card already, just waiting for green light from imageshack which is not doing its thing atm. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skythief Posted February 14, 2011 Author Report Share Posted February 14, 2011 Update! Had enough of the automatic upload so uploaded manually @ imageshack.us Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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