Synchronized Posted February 10, 2011 Report Share Posted February 10, 2011 [center][font=Courier New]Since I've returned, I've only posted one card. On that one, the OCG seemed to be okay, but on these three new ones, something tells me it's really, really bad. If you guys could give me some advice on how to fix it without completely ripping it, I'd greatly appreciate it. I intend to use these as a part of my FanFic, which [b]shameless plug[/b] can be found in the FanFic section, but I thought they might have been interesting enough to post. Either way. [IMG]http://i242.photobucket.com/albums/ff244/InvertRemix/SynchronSearch.jpg[/IMG] [i]If you control no face-up monsters, you can pay 500 Life Points to Special Summon 1 "Synchron" monster from your Deck.[/i] [IMG]http://i242.photobucket.com/albums/ff244/InvertRemix/MiracleRescue.jpg[/IMG] [i]You can only activate this card if you have 500 Life Points or lower. Select 1 non-Synchro Monster from your Graveyard and Special Summon it to your field in face-up attack position. The selected monster cannot be used as Synchro Material, and its effect is negated. Destroy the selected monster during the End Phase of this turn.[/i] [IMG]http://i242.photobucket.com/albums/ff244/InvertRemix/CastofShadows.jpg[/IMG] [i]As long as this card remains face-up on the field, neither player can view the contents of their opponents' Graveyard. Once per turn, during their respective turns, each player can discard 1 card from their hand to the Graveyard, not revealing it to their opponent. If you activate this effect, inflict 300 points of damage to your opponent.[/i][/font][/center] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
T3RA PROWL3R Posted February 11, 2011 Report Share Posted February 11, 2011 Been a really long time since I've been on this website, so my OCG might be a little rusty. Synchron Search [Activate this card only if you control no face-up monsters. Pay 500 Life Points to Special Summon 1 "Synchron" monster from your Deck.] I think you should change it to "Activate this card only if your opponent declares an attack and you control no face up monsters". That would make it better. Also, is there a certain position you want the card to be in? Like face-down defense position, or face-up attack? Miracle Rescue [Activate this card only if you have 500 Life Points or less. Select 1 non-Synchro Monster from your Graveyard and Special Summon it to your side of the field in face-up attack position. The selected monster cannot be used as a Synchro Material monster for a Synchro Summon, and its effect is negated. Destroy the selected monster during the End Phase of this turn.] Good enough effect. I can only see it as being a "scapegoat" for a tribute. I also think that you should put the 500 LP up to 1000 or 1500. That will make it easier to use. Cast of Shadows [As long as this card remains face-up on the field, neither player can look at the contents of their opponents' Graveyard. Once per turn, during their respective turns, each player can discard 1 card from their hand to the Graveyard. Inflict 300 points of damage to your opponent each time you activate this effect.] An ok effect. I'm assuming that the burn effect applies for both players? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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