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Ｍｒ．Ｒｏｂｏｔ Newbie

Ｍｒ．Ｒｏｂｏｔ

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[center]After reading a book about the Seven Deadly Sin so I decided to make a set based around them but instead of putting all 7 in one, I'll make a set for each with first being [color="#0000FF"][b]WRATH[/b][/color]. Just like Wrath itself, this set would be fast, uncontrollable by your opponent and as alway..a beatstick!
[spoiler='Interpretation of Wrath']Wrath (Latin, ira), also known as anger or "rage", may be described as inordinate and uncontrolled feelings of hatred and anger. Anger, in its purest form, presents with self-destructiveness, violence, and hate that may provoke feuds that can go on for centuries. Anger may persist long after the person who did another a grievous wrong is dead. Feelings of anger can manifest in different ways, including impatience, revenge, and vigilantism.[/spoiler] All image credits goes to .:Kai Hiwatari:.,Jazinkay and Deviantart

[color="#0000FF"][b]LOW LEVEL MONSTERS[/b][/color]
[spoiler='Wrath Soldier'][img]http://img814.imageshack.us/img814/6861/293373l.jpg[/img]
[quote]LORE
This card gains 100 ATK for each face-up "Wrath" monster you control, except this card. When a "Wrath" monster you control, other than this card, attacks a Defense Position monster, if the ATK of the attacking monster is greater than the DEF of the Defense Position monster it battles, inflict the difference as Battle Damage to your opponent.[/quote][/spoiler] [spoiler='Wrath Beast'][IMG]http://img191.imageshack.us/img191/2838/wcard1.jpg[/IMG]
[quote]LORE
While face-up in the field, this card is also treated as a Beast-Type monster.If this card attacks while you have 3 or more "Wrath" monster in your Graveyard, your opponent cannot activate Spell or Trap Cards until after the Damage Step.[/quote][/spoiler] [spoiler='Wrath Archfiend'][IMG]http://img651.imageshack.us/img651/1336/45g6fd7s8.jpg[/IMG]
[quote]LORE
While face-up on the field, this card is also treated as a Fiend-Type monster.You can Special Summon this card when a Synchro Monster is Summoned to your opponent side of the field. All Synchro Monsters on your opponent's side of the field cannot attack. Each time a Synchro Monster is removed from the field, you can send 1 Thunder-Type monster from your Deck to your Graveyard. This card can attack your opponent directly if they control a Synchro Monster.[/quote][/spoiler] [spoiler='Wrath Embodiment LV3'][img]http://img266.imageshack.us/img266/6931/293373i.jpg[/img]
[quote]LORE
If this card attacks an opponent's monster with an ATK less than 1500, destroy that monster immediately with this card's effect without applying damage calculation. If this card destroys a monster by this effect, You can tribute this card to Special Summon 1 "Wrath Embodiment LV5" from your hand or deck during your next Standby Phase.[/quote][/spoiler]

[color="#0000FF"][b]MID LEVEL MONSTERS[/b][/color]
[spoiler='Wrath Champion Beast'][IMG]http://img121.imageshack.us/img121/2838/wcard1.jpg[/IMG]
[quote]LORE
When you take 2000 or more battle damage from a direct attack, you can Special Summon this card and 1 Level 3 or lower "Wrath" monster from the Graveyard and negate their effect(s). This effect can only be activated once per Duel.While this card is face-up on the field, it is also treated as a Beast-Type monster.[/quote][/spoiler] [spoiler='Wrath Embodiment LV5'][img]http://img823.imageshack.us/img823/3760/293373r.jpg[/img]
[quote]LORE
This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set, this card can only be Special Summoned by the effect of "Wrath Embodiment LV3". If this card destroys an opponent's monster by battle. You can tribute this card to Special Summon 1 "Wrath Embodiment LV7" from your hand or Deck during your next Standby Phase[/quote][/spoiler]

[color="#0000FF"][b]HIGH LEVEL MONSTERS[/b][/color]
[spoiler='Wrath Embodiment LV7'][img]http://img265.imageshack.us/img265/5546/293373.jpg[/img]
[quote]LORE
This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set, this card can only be Special Summoned by the effect of "Wrath Embodiment LV5." This card cannot declare and attack during the turn it was summoned. If this card attacks a face-up Defense Position monster, destroy the monster with this card's effect without applying damage calculation, during the End Phase you used this card's effect, you can tribute this to select 1 Synchro Monster in either player's Graveyard, and Special Summon it.[/quote] [/spoiler]

[color="#2E8B57"][b]SPELLS[/b][/color]

[color="#FF00FF"][b]TRAPS[/b][/color]
[spoiler='Spirit Of Redemption'][IMG]http://img535.imageshack.us/img535/9146/wrathk.jpg[/IMG]
[quote][LORE
Activate only when your opponent activates a Spell Card, Trap Card, or Effect Monster's effect, if you control a face-up Attack Position "Wrath" monster and have 3 or more cards in your hand. Negate the activation and destroy that card.[/quote][/spoiler]

[color="#0000FF"][b]EXTRA DECK[/b][/color]
[spoiler='Wrath Roush The Ultimate'][img]http://img192.imageshack.us/img192/5546/293373.jpg[/img]
LORE
[quote]1 Wrath Tuner + 1 or more non Tuner Monsters
This card gains 100 ATK for each face-up "Meklord" monster you control, except this card. You can remove from play 1 "Junk" monster in your Graveyard to select 1 face-up monster your opponent controls. It loses ATK equal to the removed monster's ATK. [/quote][/spoiler]


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Renzoku Kira- Newbie

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Okay lets see.
1.)Pic on 2&3 are good pic for card number 1 is bad.
2.) okay in card number one I understand that its a typo on Wrathl. I think it is OP'd since another monster can inflict damage from an attack from this card.
3.) card number two I see nothing wrong with it.
4.)card number 3. I like this card. You can use its effect to summon a high level monster next turn, but you will be out 2k LP.

I rate card number 1 5.6/10
I rate card number 2 8.9/10
I rate card number 3 7.5/10
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1. First off, bad pic. A good card though, if this is OP then what is [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Enraged_Battle_Ox"]Enraged Battle Ox[/url]?
8/10

2. Bad. You have to show your opponent your hand, which is never an advantage. Make it refer to the field or maybe to the graveyard, but please not to the hand.
5.5/10

3. A tuner but no synchros. Guess those are yet to come. Raise its DEF a bit as it's just too increadibly weak for a level 5, even if it's a tuner. btw, isn't that a lightsworn square I see in the background of the pic? But nvm that. The effect is good and will aid for fast synchro summoning. Most creative card of the 3.
8.5/10

Overall 22/30 or 73%. Good job, but could be better.
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Renzoku Kira- Newbie

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Okay on the new card.
1.) Did you mean to say removed from play or sent to the Graveyard.
2.) Playability I give about 2/5 since if I had a Synchro Deck there is no point to have this card since my Synchro can't attack.
3.) What is the point of sending 1 Machine-Type monster from my deck to the graveyard?
4.) While face-up on the field, this card is also treated as a Fiend-Type monster.[b]You can Special Summon this card when a Synchro Summon occurs.[/b][b]Synchro Monsters cannot attack the turn this effect is activated[/b]. [b]Each time a Synchro Monster is destroyed, you can send 2 Machine-Type monster from your Deck to your Graveyard to Special Summon the destroyed monster.[/b] This card can attack your opponent directly if they control a Synchro Monster.

(The bold area is what I changed. Just an idea to fix the effect.)

Overall: without the changes I give 5/10 because it hardly seems usable, and the effect is confusing. With some changes 8/10. Good Job though :D

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Bronzegoldquake Newbie

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[quote name='Aequeo' timestamp='1297978454' post='5014940']
yknow i wouldnt use a OCG card pic unless im making a remake. Masked Knight LV~ is bad for copying, since its already an amazing card.
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I agree. I have no problem with using images from other card games but using images of sparkman, masked knight and whatever that dark tuner...I just don't like it
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