n8thegr8 Posted February 12, 2011 Report Share Posted February 12, 2011 Give me some feedback! [IMG]http://i53.tinypic.com/2qxb58h.jpg[/IMG] This monster gets the following effect(s) while there is a monster(s) with the following Attribute(s) excluding this card on the field: *DARK: This card gains 500 ATK points. *LIGHT: Look at one set card on your opponents side of the field. [IMG]http://i53.tinypic.com/30syss2.jpg[/IMG] This monster gets the following effect(s) while there is a monster(s) with the following Attribute(s) excluding this card on the field: *FIRE: Increase the ATK of this card by 500 points. *EARTH: If this card destroyed your opponent's monster as a result of battle, it can attack once again in a row. [IMG]http://i55.tinypic.com/2r2b3m0.jpg[/IMG] This monster gets the following effect(s) while there is a monster(s) with the following Attribute(s) on the field: *LIGHT: This card gains 500 ATK. *DARK: Look at your opponents hand. [IMG]http://i54.tinypic.com/j0bmvp.jpg[/IMG] This monster gets the following effect(s) while there is a monster(s) with the following Attribute(s) excluding this card on the field: *EARTH: Increase the ATK of this card by 500 points. *WATER: If this card destroyed your opponents monster as a result of battle, gain life points equal to half of the destroyed monster's original ATK [IMG]http://i56.tinypic.com/2vsrgj9.jpg[/IMG] This monster gets the following effect(s) while there is a monster(s) with the following Attribute(s) excluding this card on the field: *WATER: Increase the ATK of this card by 500 points. *WIND: If this card is destroyed and sent to the graveyard by an opponent's card effect, you may pay 500 life points to shuffle it back into your deck. [IMG]http://i53.tinypic.com/15h0ps5.jpg[/IMG] This monster gets the following effect(s) while there is a monster(s) with the following Attribute(s) excluding this card on the field: *WIND: Increase the ATK of this card by 500 points. *FIRE: If this card destroys an opponent's monster as a result of battle, inflict damage to your opponent equal to half of the destroyed monster's original ATK. [IMG]http://i51.tinypic.com/s4wbxu.jpg[/IMG] This card cannot be normal summoned or set. This card can only be special summoned by tributing three monsters with "Elemental Sorceress" in its card name from your side of the field or your hand. As long as this card remains on the field, all monsters on your side of the field gain 500 ATK points. [IMG]http://i56.tinypic.com/efp937.jpg[/IMG] This card is treated as an "Elemental Sorceress". This card can be special summoned from your hand to the field by sending one "Elemental Sorceress" from your side of the field to the graveyard. [IMG]http://i52.tinypic.com/2v80mdx.jpg[/IMG] This card is treated as an "Elemental Sorceress". If an "Elemental Sorceress would be destroyed, you can destroy this monster instead. [IMG]http://i51.tinypic.com/314q7n6.jpg[/IMG] Once per turn you can change the Attribute of one face-up monster on the field. [IMG]http://i55.tinypic.com/5u4eih.jpg[/IMG] Activate only when an opponent's monster attacks an "Elemental Sorceress" on your side of the field. Discard one monster from your hand that is the same Attribute as the attacking monster to negate and destroy it. [IMG]http://i52.tinypic.com/sm4q4i.jpg[/IMG] As long as this card remains face up on the field, every "Elemental Sorceress" gains 500 ATK. [IMG]http://i52.tinypic.com/2644dbc.jpg[/IMG] By paying 800 life points, you can special summon one "Elemental Sorceress" from your graveyard. [IMG]http://i56.tinypic.com/28aut75.jpg[/IMG] If you control one "Elemental Sorceress", you can special summon one other card with "Elemental Sorceress" in its card name from your deck with 1500 or less ATK. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Catman25 Posted February 12, 2011 Report Share Posted February 12, 2011 Not bad. Effects are a bit simple, but nothing wrong with that. And you're missing the "types" of the monsters. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
n8thegr8 Posted February 12, 2011 Author Report Share Posted February 12, 2011 aaa forgot and thanks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
beefman Posted February 12, 2011 Report Share Posted February 12, 2011 Nice cards, only a couple of OCG mistakes, like ATK points (which should be minus the points) and other, but good. good. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
legolover09 Posted February 12, 2011 Report Share Posted February 12, 2011 I=The mistake I see is that they all go gain 500 ATK if (attribute) is in the field and then they are always that attribute. For example, the light one says that it gains 500 ATK if a light monster is on the field. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CDDRodrigo Posted February 12, 2011 Report Share Posted February 12, 2011 They are not creative, have some OCG errors, but are not bad at all. I`ll give a 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
n8thegr8 Posted February 12, 2011 Author Report Share Posted February 12, 2011 [quote name='legolover09' timestamp='1297540110' post='5004947'] I=The mistake I see is that they all go gain 500 ATK if (attribute) is in the field and then they are always that attribute. For example, the light one says that it gains 500 ATK if a light monster is on the field. [/quote] I thought about that and I wrote excluding this monster if you read the effect.[quote name='CDDRodrigo' timestamp='1297540290' post='5004954'] They are not creative, have some OCG errors, but are not bad at all. I`ll give a 6/10 [/quote] Thanks for giving me feedback. What could I do to make them hve better effects cuz I wanted themt to still be powerful enough on their own that they could survive awhile. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
legolover09 Posted February 12, 2011 Report Share Posted February 12, 2011 Ah, but the light elemental doesn't have that bit. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
n8thegr8 Posted February 13, 2011 Author Report Share Posted February 13, 2011 oh your right. I guess I forgot to change it. Thanks! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
n8thegr8 Posted February 13, 2011 Author Report Share Posted February 13, 2011 bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Glоrious Posted February 13, 2011 Report Share Posted February 13, 2011 Elemental Dragon is too close of a name to Element Dragon (a real card). Some of these cards are missing stats (like first one is missing atk/def. I like the effects though. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
n8thegr8 Posted February 14, 2011 Author Report Share Posted February 14, 2011 thanks.AAAAAAA another mistake. I definetly need to chcek them better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Schrödinger Posted February 15, 2011 Report Share Posted February 15, 2011 Decent cards, I see a lot of these getting censored by Konami though xD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
1SDAN Posted February 15, 2011 Report Share Posted February 15, 2011 Well, 4 the English atleast. Japanese have WAY different ideas 4 wat's "appropriate." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
n8thegr8 Posted February 15, 2011 Author Report Share Posted February 15, 2011 hahaha sorry couldn't find any good pics. thanks! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
n8thegr8 Posted February 19, 2011 Author Report Share Posted February 19, 2011 bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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