codyguy122 Posted February 13, 2011 Report Share Posted February 13, 2011 [size="7"]monsters[/size] [IMG]http://i1194.photobucket.com/albums/aa372/codyguy122/yugioh/createcard19.jpg[/IMG] [IMG]http://i1194.photobucket.com/albums/aa372/codyguy122/yugioh/createcard16.jpg[/IMG] [IMG]http://i1194.photobucket.com/albums/aa372/codyguy122/yugioh/createcard15.jpg[/IMG] [IMG]http://i1194.photobucket.com/albums/aa372/codyguy122/yugioh/createcard14.jpg[/IMG] [IMG]http://i1194.photobucket.com/albums/aa372/codyguy122/yugioh/createcard13.jpg[/IMG] [IMG]http://i1194.photobucket.com/albums/aa372/codyguy122/yugioh/createcard12.jpg[/IMG] [IMG]http://i1194.photobucket.com/albums/aa372/codyguy122/yugioh/createcard10.jpg[/IMG] [IMG]http://i1194.photobucket.com/albums/aa372/codyguy122/yugioh/createcard9.jpg[/IMG] [IMG]http://i1194.photobucket.com/albums/aa372/codyguy122/yugioh/createcard8.jpg[/IMG] [IMG]http://i1194.photobucket.com/albums/aa372/codyguy122/yugioh/createcard7.jpg[/IMG] [IMG]http://i1194.photobucket.com/albums/aa372/codyguy122/yugioh/createcard6.jpg[/IMG] [IMG]http://i1194.photobucket.com/albums/aa372/codyguy122/yugioh/createcard11.jpg[/IMG] [size="7"]Spells[/size] [IMG]http://i1194.photobucket.com/albums/aa372/codyguy122/yugioh/createcard18.jpg[/IMG] [IMG]http://i1194.photobucket.com/albums/aa372/codyguy122/yugioh/createcard5.jpg[/IMG] [IMG]http://i1194.photobucket.com/albums/aa372/codyguy122/yugioh/createcard3.jpg[/IMG] [IMG]http://i1194.photobucket.com/albums/aa372/codyguy122/yugioh/createcard.jpg[/IMG] [size="7"]Traps[/size] [IMG]http://i1194.photobucket.com/albums/aa372/codyguy122/yugioh/createcard17.jpg[/IMG] [IMG]http://i1194.photobucket.com/albums/aa372/codyguy122/yugioh/createcard2.jpg[/IMG] So what do you think...and b honest Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
codyguy122 Posted February 13, 2011 Author Report Share Posted February 13, 2011 Anybody???Somebody?? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DarkMugen Posted February 13, 2011 Report Share Posted February 13, 2011 Terrible... 1) you didn't make the ritual monster 2) Family Charge is broken. 3) both traps are broken. 4) Your descriptions for the monsters is weak. "The guardian of [insert made-up element here]. Copy Paste the rest here" 5) People need permits to make normal monster archetypes. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
codyguy122 Posted February 13, 2011 Author Report Share Posted February 13, 2011 well...idk what broken means...but my ritual monster is showing on my computer...it might just not have loaded on urs... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
codyguy122 Posted February 13, 2011 Author Report Share Posted February 13, 2011 anybody else? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Commander Covington Posted February 14, 2011 Report Share Posted February 14, 2011 Some words need to be capitalized. Sure, it may say I'm a new member, but I've been studying Yu-Gi-Oh cards for a long time. Some words need to be capitalized: all summon words, opponent, field, and phases. Hope this helps. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
codyguy122 Posted February 14, 2011 Author Report Share Posted February 14, 2011 thanks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
codyguy122 Posted February 14, 2011 Author Report Share Posted February 14, 2011 is it just me or is this ride getting [size="7"]BUMP[/size]y...lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mysteryman429 Posted February 14, 2011 Report Share Posted February 14, 2011 these could possibly be made into a normal monster deck cuz there are already some decent normal monster support cards in addition to these Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BoxAndShrimp Posted February 14, 2011 Report Share Posted February 14, 2011 I like the concept and Broken means over powered or gives unfair advantage basically. Some OCG errors need to be fixed but other this has great potential. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ｍｒ．Ｒｏｂｏｔ Posted February 14, 2011 Report Share Posted February 14, 2011 other than keep bumping this thread, you should really fix the cards dude Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
codyguy122 Posted February 15, 2011 Author Report Share Posted February 15, 2011 alright...and thank yall Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantom-Duelist Posted February 15, 2011 Report Share Posted February 15, 2011 Ur Guardian beasts are dragons. Might need to re think names and type. Gladiator beasts are a good exsample. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
codyguy122 Posted February 15, 2011 Author Report Share Posted February 15, 2011 yea i thought about that...but then i was like well dragons r beasts 2, but yes they do have there own catagory...but usuly when you thing of guardian creatures u think of dragons...well i do anyways lol...but thanks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Jet Posted February 15, 2011 Report Share Posted February 15, 2011 Even if the traps are broken, the monsters are weak. why is guardian air a light monster not a wind monster? and the capacity to summon with this set is weak at best, a deck with these cards would be running on an entirely empty field. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Seth Dawnstrider Posted February 16, 2011 Report Share Posted February 16, 2011 Nothing to see here, in terms of originality (don't get me wrong, my favourite mythological beast is the dragon) but some of the pictures are very good...and some are not, but who gets it all right, right? Anyway, I think the balance is off the canvas - despite some of the overpowered cards, this deck pretty much consists on basic (overused) effects, which can do all but win in an actual duel.Also, there are loads of OCG errors that you really should fix. Despite all of that, like a previous poster wrote, I think you can really make this a set you can be proud of, keep working! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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