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[Spoiler=Neko by somenoobkorean]

Authors note: This one does not have more of that suggested gore that you all wanted sorry, guys I didn’t use gore at all for this one really. I hope you enjoy it either way. I got a lot of good feedback from you guys on my first short story, which I hope you continue to comment and critique. So for this story I added more dialogue and descriptive details (special thx to ipointmaps.com for coordinate locating) that I hope is enough to satisfy you guys. This story was inspired by my tree hugger friend who was complaining to me about how sad it is for all those caged animals in pet stores... and you know I’m not really the kind of person to care about animals. So I made and entertaining story out of it. So without further a due I present to you Neko, enjoy!

Neko

Recipient: George Wilson
File type: transcript of an audio recording
Date received: December 25th 2010
Time received: 11:59pm

December 25th 2010 9:38pm onboard “The kindred”

Master Maxwell Rayburn, at age 34 is one of the youngest yet powerful multi-millionaires in all of Europe’s nations. Despite this he has no fame... At least to the mass media and the general public eye, Master Maxwell is invisible to the outside world. But deeper into unethical grounds he becomes a legendary entity that only affects those that are involved in the many underground businesses that cycle’s wealth through the trades between European nations, with a lack of any public surveillance.

Yet at the prime of his youth and power, he has none but one weakness, his 16 year old daughter, Clair. A bastard child to a mother Salome Bell, who left her child 2 years after birth, unable to take the pain and burden of watching her husband do the unthinkable obligations of an underground emperor.

Some rumored she was caught running away by Maxwell’s henchmen, body chopped to pieces and hidden in the vast sea. Others who were loved her and grew fond of her for her kindness and compassion, had more hopeful thoughts and rumored that she ran away and made it to America... unfortunatly these men and women were silenced immediately the moment there wishful words escaped their mouths.

But that is a story for another day, no today I am here to tell you about an event that happened on this exact day 10 years ago. December 25th 2000, Master Maxwell hosted his 3rd annual Christmas party. He invites the most prestigious underground allies to a very exclusive location, a ship that never docks on piers nor land known as “The Kindred.”

This ship has been anchored in the same spot in the ocean for the past 20 years, exactly 84.706049 latitude and 76.992188 longitudes. This location has no major aircraft traffic paths at any given time and is almost unreachable by any private air transportation. There are occasionally the unfortunate few private aircraft overhead, which would be instantly targeted by the anti-air missile system.

This make’s the location only reachable by boat and everyone is to board before Master Maxwell begins his speech on “Business accomplishments and forgiveness” which begins at 7:30 sharp, which he has never presented late nor early. But on December 25th 2000, he arrived to present his speech at 7:49pm, because earlier that day Master Max’s daughter Mistress Clair received her first pet.

December 25th 2000 3:46pm “loyalty pets”

Maxwell Rayburn was walking down rows of cages with his daughter curiously peering into each cage as they walked down, his hand on her small shoulder.
“What about this one sweetie? This one looks very loyal and clever.” Clair shook her head and moved ahead of her father continuing to look in each cage
“This one looks strong, it can take care of itself.” As Clair’s father beamed down at his suggestion, Clair yet again shook her head and continued to move along
Maxwell started to become impatient “well you have to choose one quickly; you want to make it on time to daddy’s party don’t you?”

Clair wrapped her fingers around the bars of a certain cage, whatever resided within the small entrapment looked up at her from the corner of his cage. “I want that one!” Clair exclaimed.

Maxwell looked down in disgust “but look at it, it looks so weak and useless.”

Clair pouted “no I want that one, look it needs us to take care of him right?”

Clair reminded Maxwell to much of her mother Cindy, and his temper rose “what have I always told you? To get ahead in life you always choose the best and make it even better.” … He made a quick mental note on how he needed to hire a tutor to teach her about self-gain. He would be willing to pay a great deal for that.

“No! I want Neko, or I’m not going to the party! If you don’t ill…ill, ill sink the ship!”

“What?! And what the heck is Neko?” just before Clair could argue further the store owner came by.

“Hey my name is Vinnie, is everything alright?” Maxwell didn’t need to show some Vinnie that he was having daughter issues

“How much is that one over there?” he pointed at into the cage without looking inside of it.

“Neko huh? Hmm I was gonna put him down today too, no one wanted him. I guess today is his lucky day, I’ll give him to you cheap, $150.” Maxwell raised his eyebrows at the shop owner

“Do you realize who I am? Is that the best you can do?” Maxwell’s voice was quite threatening
“Yes sir, I’m sorry sir but I have a family to, I can do $50 but that’s the best I can do sir.” Maxwell’s rage was building, how dare this weak being tells him to pay anything for a useless piece of trash.

“Daddy just pay for him and let’s get him okay?” He started to get annoyed at his daughter as well “please daddy? It’s Christmas after all.” Maxwell was irritated but he was wasting time and he needed to get on a move on. Clair never met her mother once but why does she take after her so much? He thought to himself.
He pulled out two $20’s and handed it to Vinnie “you are a lucky man today $40 is something a person like you will never get from me, so you understand that?” Vinnie knew he was lucky to be alive and instantly put a collar on Clair’s new pet and gave her the leash for her to hold.

“Let’s go, Clair” Maxwell strides ahead while Clair lingered behind on purpose so her voice could not be overheard by her father.
“Hi Neko, my name is Clair, well have lots of fun as my new playmate.” Clair whispered in a friendly tone to Neko
“Hello Mistress Clair, I have served 2 other families for 2 years each and I will be and do whatever you wish.” Neko responded
“Why are you so formal silly? were friends now.” She said as she stuck out her tongue. She then took of Neko's leash of his collar but was too lazy to bother with the collar itself. “How old are you?”
“I apologize Mistress Clair, I Vinnie told me I was 10 years of age, but I do not recall my date of birth exactly.”
Clair giggled “still being formal, I’m only six and I’m still taller than you.” She said proudly as she used her hand to indicate the comparison to superior height. “When we get home I’m gonna make you eat lot’s till your really big, then you can give me piggyback rides.”
“Clair we have our boat departure is in 20 minute we have to get going!” Maxwell shouted behind him not looking
“Let’s hurry!” Clair said, and took Neko’s hand running.

December 25th 2010 11:44pm onboard “The Kindred”

This is how I became a Slave to the Rayburn family, specifically a guardian for Mistress Clair. You will understand why I sent this to you Mr. Wilson, as the head of Europe’s international enforcement, Mistress Clair and I want to take down Master Maxwell Rayburn's empire. I gave you the information and evidence needed to easily capture him.

I am planning to escape Master Rayburn’s hold with Mistress Clair’s assistance, as she wants to become a free woman, as I intend to continue to be her guardian. There is very little time and I can hear the party begin to end, *faint voice “we must get going Neko”* Mistress Clair is beckoning to me at the moment so we may escape tonight. Do not look for us after you have taken down the underground empire…We wish you the best of luck.

[Recording end]

Sender: Unknown
Date sent: December 25th 2010
Time sent: 11:59pm
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[spoiler=untitled by nobeginning]

Authors note: It's a YCM short story so it's based after it. I have another one that was made as an example for those who needed it but they're both very old. This one is the one I made seriously.

An untitled event on YCM

As most stories begin it was a normal day as I walked to the bar. Of course I wasn't alone otherwise that would just bes ad. I was with SSD, who I cleverly gave the nickname of STD. He was my normal drinking buddy and although I normally didn't like him because of his constant boasting of inferior skills he wasn't bad when drunk or even just drinking.

He was wearing his normal attire which was just some crappy looking armor and I was wearing my normal street clothes and a jacket. Odd pair but it was normal in YCM. In fact, I was probably the weird dressing one.

We arrived at Status St. where the bar and a lot of recreational buildings were including an arcade and dance floor. Personally I wasn't a dancer though always getting stuck there for some reason involving the girl I call bubble girl. Well all of this was normally there. We gasped as everything was in shambles. Well the bar like a few other buildings seemed okay other than what seemed like it needed quarantine. STD instantly gasped and ran to his precious bar to make sure it was okay. I urged him not to go but I knew that wasting energy on it wasn't a good idea.

My goal was to look for anybody that can tell me what happened here. It didn't take long to hear the cries of a young girl. I ran to the cries being belted out only to find Hotaru, a young female member, in an alley with most of her clothes ripped off and looking pretty badly beaten. Everything inappropriate was being shown. I respectively averted my eyes and covered her with my jacket.

I calmly said as to not frighten the young girl, "Hot. Tell me. What happened here? Why is Status Street like this? Why are you like this?" Knowing Hotaru I could already guess what was going on.

Hotaru was still crying but managed to say a few words. "T-they were everywhere. They killed all the men and..." she began to trail off skipping the word that came after and. "...all the women..." She collapsed.

"Hot. Hot! What are they?!" I knew there was no point in continuing. She was out cold. I left the alley and was taken away when I saw what looked like an explosion (only excluded fire) come from the bar. I felt rain and looked up. It wasn't rain...rain isn't red...Then the head of my drinking buddy landed in front of me. I stepped back. "W-What the h*** just happened?"

I felt the shaking of earth and heard the cracks of the ground I was stepping on. Whatever just killed SSD was now after me. "S***!" I jumped back as what seemed like a pink telephone pole burst from my previous position. I looked curiously as the pink pole moved around as freely as air. I looked up and down inspecting the odd moving pole. "That's Not A Pole! It's A Freaking Tentacle!" As the tentacle lunged at me like a snake I quickly summoned one of my many gatling guns and opened fire just as the tentacle was an inch from the barrel of my gun.

I didn't, no, wouldn't stop firing until the magazine was emptied and the tentacle ripped to shreds due to the pure power, magazine size, and rapid fire ability of my gatling gun. I dropped the gun in front of me and fell to my knees. I was breathing heavily but not in exhaustion. In excitement. I knew that tentacle monsters have more than just one tentacle. Possibly thousands. A smirk inched across my face. "H*** yeah. This will be fun."

There was more shaking from underneath me. Much more shaking than earlier. I quickly somersaulted to the side as another one came up but I knew that wasn't right. I quickly stood back up ready for whatever. I could hear the cracks underneath me. I sprang up into the air and summoned a large flamethrower this time. I used gravity to help me aim it at the ground. As the tentacles bursted out I pulled the trigger. The tentacles were burnt to cinders in seconds as I was pushed up by the power of my flamethrower.

It was getting to easy and I knew it. Two large tentacles burst through the nearby buildings I forced the flamethrower to be pointed at a 45 degree angle and pulled the trigger again. The power of the flamethrower spun me around. My flamethrower disappeared and in its place was my signature bat. I was still spinning at an incredible rate and I let the forces take my bat to as far as I could while still keeping a good grip. My bat caught the left over fire with me as I spun. I released the fire that had actually become a fireball at one of the tentacles. I yelled as to go with my attack, "Blazing Home Run!!!" It hit dead on turning the tentacle into ashes but the second was what I had to worry about now. It was getting close but the speed of my spin was perfect. My spin slammed under the incoming tentacle bringing it up yet still alive but my spin had stopped. The actual bludgeon part of my bat came off to reveal a sword that extended to be about 1/3 the times larger than the bat. I spun it around in my hands and threw it in the air. The tentacle was cut off and fell to the ground. I fell on top of it glad that it was able to cushion my fall so well even though it got me a little dirty. Unfortunaly the massive amount of spinning did cause me to vomit a bit.

I wasn't the only one getting serious. A forest of tentacles sprung up around me. Instead of shrieking in fear like most people I only laughed like a madman. I knew that I had an opponent to get serious for. Something worth the sweat. A revolver appeared in both my hands. The left one had CERBERUS written along the barrel and the Left one read NULL. I pointed both guns down opposite sides of the streets and quoted TK from my favorite anime Angel Beats although he was really just quoting a song, "I kiss you." I pulled each trigger six times and watched as my greatest creation ripped through tentacles. I threw the guns into the air with chambers out as ammo appeared in my hand. I threw the ammo into the air and it seemed to just fly into the chamber and back into my hands.

I heard another of the cracks from underneath me. I crouched down and pointed the two guns at the ground underneath me and again pulled the triggers. The earth seemed to blow apart as chunks of pink bursted out with me also being flown upward and being forced to do some flips until I settled upside down. Another wave of tentacles came. Larger than the last. They saw this as their oppurtunity...but really their greatest mistake. He spun around rapidly shooting his two revolvers. I let out a hail of bullets as whenever I pulled the trigger I'd spawn the bullets right into the now empty spot. I eventually settled onto the ground. The power of my revolvers being shot managed to slow my descent drastically.

Down the street the was a small burst in the ground. I knew it was just to get my attention. A large spherical pink thing came out of the ground. It thousands of razor sharp tentacles that could slice a tank, demonic horns that could pierce the most dense material with ease, teeth that could chew anything as if it were a stick of gum, and horrifying eyes that could destroy in a man in a single gaze. I looked right into its eyes and it into my eyes. I could tell it feared me. My eyes were giving off a blue glow that seemed to be as if I was the devil himself (except with red eyes because we all know his are red) was looking at the creature but just little ole me.

I knew the outcome of this fight already. I began to walk away turning my back to the beast. The tentacle monster saw it as its opportunity to attack. Its tentacles, horns, and teeth were all ready to tear me apart. As it was a foot away There was what sounded like a large explosion and then chunks flying everywhere.

-5 Minutes Before To Now-

I threw my spinning blade up to cut up the tentacle but that wasn't my real plan. The blade kept going higher and higher and eventually reached the exosphere. Gravity then brought the blade back down and of course into the tentacle monster with the power of a large comet. Tentacle monsters are predictable.

-Now-

I left without my blade. I decided to leave it there to honor those who died. I sighed as I said, "Great. Now I need a shower...and I could still use a drink."[/spoiler]

finnaly up please comment

[Desu the Blue Nerd]

I did enjoy your story. It seemed to have some odd feeling of suspense in it. More just my worry for Vinnie who I felt at any moment might be shot or Clair who I thought would be smacked. It does leave me wanting more.

[WTFauKorean]

[quote name='NoBeginning' timestamp='1297653833' post='5007869']
I did enjoy your story. It seemed to have some odd feeling of suspense in it. More just my worry for Vinnie who I felt at any moment might be shot or Clair who I thought would be smacked. It does leave me wanting more.
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hooray that coming from NB is awesome might as well comment on your altough i read it way before,
non stop madness, although having a good plot is my thing, i guess if i strayed away and just wanted a cheap thrill out of carnage i would enjoy it =D

[Desu the Blue Nerd]

That's what I was going for. It was originally made for Hereh'sMoa upon request. She asked for a fight involving me. I asked her versus what and she said tentacles. If she asked for a drama or something I would have made that. The plot in this is kind of a self explanatory thing. Really, I'd like to think of this whole thing as an inside joke. Hotaru987 is a member that I love to give a hard time with tentacles so I put her in the edited version. The original version had Yggdra instead because I was mad at her at the time.

^How's that for author's notes?

[WTFauKorean]

[quote name='NoBeginning' timestamp='1297655371' post='5007908']
That's what I was going for. It was originally made for Hereh'sMoa upon request. She asked for a fight involving me. I asked her versus what and she said tentacles. If she asked for a drama or something I would have made that. The plot in this is kind of a self explanatory thing. Really, I'd like to think of this whole thing as an inside joke. Hotaru987 is a member that I love to give a hard time with tentacles so I put her in the edited version. The original version had Yggdra instead because I was mad at her at the time.

^How's that for author's notes?
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cool ill stick that in the authors notes and move everything to my first trend