Frybread002 Posted March 31, 2011 Report Share Posted March 31, 2011 Hahahahaha!!! Alright cool. Although I think it's safe too say that your fic had outdone mine...yeah it's suffering from severe inactivity and is dead in about 1 more day...Ahh...all that blasted hard-work gone to waste...*sigh*... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Super Chaos Sonic Posted March 31, 2011 Author Report Share Posted March 31, 2011 Hey don't give it up Fry. I actually liked your fic....it kinda made me want to make this fic. ^^; Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Frybread002 Posted March 31, 2011 Report Share Posted March 31, 2011 hahahaha, actually, I already knew ahead of time that it was going to die sooner or later. If anything, I was pretty confindate that you're fic would outdo mine fromt he very start. Like, when I first planed out the initial drafts of it, I was fully aware that it was not capable of telling a proper story though journals alone. So with that being said, the mere purpose of the [i]Last Report...[/i] was just to bring hype to the role-play we are currently in. Like I'm pretty confidate that you were able to bring in some kind of connections between the characters that The Staff and I creared via. The Last Report series. Example, were you able to bring any kind of connections between the first 4 entries with the role-play? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Super Chaos Sonic Posted April 1, 2011 Author Report Share Posted April 1, 2011 A few...not all of them but I saw a few. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Frybread002 Posted April 1, 2011 Report Share Posted April 1, 2011 alright that's good enough. Besides, I'll let you on a little secret, the Journal Entries are actually predictions. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Super Chaos Sonic Posted April 1, 2011 Author Report Share Posted April 1, 2011 Predictions?? Why would they be that?? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Frybread002 Posted April 1, 2011 Report Share Posted April 1, 2011 sorry fosorry for the late response, I was just making some suggestions to TFF for the sequel: Okay, when [i]REVERSED/rewake[/i] was launched, the original intentions for us as the Staff, was to law down the foundation for our characters. Like, during the process, our characters were never to be the main characters (something that TFF had failed on), but instead, our characters were to be the side characters and help the characters who were submitted by the Player (that would you and the other guys who submited their characters). That's why I never really took any big and decsive steps with Akira. I always let shio lead because he was the star, not my character. But alas, TFF had kinda messed up on that part... Anyway, how that plays into the Last Reports, is that everything I ever written, was never cleared. They still could be molded in any shap or form. Example, most of us had made refrences to characters like Gun Xard, who was never even introduced. At the same time, everything that I had said about Gun Xard's journal entry (Reverse/Reborn), I said that a discord had begun between the Organization and him, which was the begining of everything. My original meaning was to have Gun Xard mention to only person, not the entire organizatio itself. But since none of us had any idea on what was going to happend, I left most of the ideas and thoughts really blank. So that when a person does something specific, I am able to make an connection between that moment, and a journal entry. That kinda make sense? P>S. apologizes, I'm still writting something to TFF Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Super Chaos Sonic Posted April 1, 2011 Author Report Share Posted April 1, 2011 I understand now, thanks Fry. And no worries about the typing to TFF ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Frybread002 Posted April 1, 2011 Report Share Posted April 1, 2011 alright cool. But just to summarize it, I'll be doing a second set (which I already discussed on the OoC thread) which will be including characters who will be in the sequel. Of course, those will be written by them, so I can not promise anything just yet except that the journals written by me will all include predictions about the upcomming sequal and the "Finished Product." Who knows, Shio may have also been refered too in the Last Reports. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Super Chaos Sonic Posted April 1, 2011 Author Report Share Posted April 1, 2011 I hope he would. That would be really great if you did ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Frybread002 Posted April 2, 2011 Report Share Posted April 2, 2011 Hahaha!!! I told you already, he may have already been refered too. It's only a matter of opinion if you wanna see it like that. Remember, when I wrote those Journal Entries, most, if not of them, were really unclear about a lot of things. So if you don't think Shio was refered too, then you're more than welcome to make your own Journal Entry for any character (even if that character isn't from you. So you can make an little Epic Poem about Akira, I wouldn't mind cuz i'm cool like that , but if you're going to do something like say on Xemanon, it may be better if you ask the owner of that character. Like for example, all of those Entries are by me. The only one that was user-submitted was by TSA, "Power." This is just to get you thinking on your feet.) Oh yeah, what do you think of a giant fight breaking out for an ending of the role-play? Like, when the fight is over, everyone is scattered. With this in mind, I think people can highlight all of the major ups and downs for their characters. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Super Chaos Sonic Posted April 2, 2011 Author Report Share Posted April 2, 2011 I'm liking that idea, Fry ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Frybread002 Posted April 3, 2011 Report Share Posted April 3, 2011 alright, cool. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fenrir Posted April 9, 2011 Report Share Posted April 9, 2011 [center][url="http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/topic/244807-fen-darks-fan-fic-reviewing-and-generally-wasting-time/"]Thank you for wasting our time,[/url] [url=http://tindeck.com/listen/jecr]Click here to listen to [b]darkmmxii_2011.04.02.Sat.23.39.55.mp3[/b][/url] [url=http://tindeck.com/listen/ltum]Click here to listen to [b]darkmmxii_2011.04.03.Sun.00.10.42.mp3[/b][/url][/center] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Super Chaos Sonic Posted April 9, 2011 Author Report Share Posted April 9, 2011 @Rarity: XD funny commentary. Thanks for taking time out of your busy schedule to review, comment, etc. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Frybread002 Posted April 13, 2011 Report Share Posted April 13, 2011 Hahahaha!! Boy, Fen and Dark had pretty much demolished your fic. Hahahaha!!! Sad but true...Pretty much everything they were saying...I had to agree with them. But I also enjoyed it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Super Chaos Sonic Posted April 14, 2011 Author Report Share Posted April 14, 2011 Eh, I'm not worrying about it. That's they're way of saying that they enjoyed it.....I think XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Frybread002 Posted April 14, 2011 Report Share Posted April 14, 2011 No...I think that's one way of saying "You owe them 10 bucks (bucks)!!!" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Super Chaos Sonic Posted April 14, 2011 Author Report Share Posted April 14, 2011 I'll probably have to get back to them on that....I'm kinda broke right now. ^^; Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Frybread002 Posted April 14, 2011 Report Share Posted April 14, 2011 Alright-alright, being serious here: If anything, I think the biggest think you could probably do to approve your fic, is too just take your time with each chapter. Like, I don't meant o be rude, but just like Fen and Dark said, the only real development out of the series, were only the characters. Which were hardly developed. So if you are to take your time with it, then I more of an audience may be drawn to it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Super Chaos Sonic Posted April 14, 2011 Author Report Share Posted April 14, 2011 I understand ya, Fry. I'll do what I can do, with the fic. Hopefully it'll be all fixed up and I'll get some more readers. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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