Phoenix Beast Fiyru

[mysteryman429]

possible support for burn/stall deck?

feedback please

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This card cannot declare an attack. Once per turn, you can reduce the ATK of this card by 500 (permanently) to activate 1 of the following effects:
- Destroy 1 face-up Spell or Trap Card your opponent controls.
- Inflict 500 damage to your opponent's Life Points.

[mysteryman429]

bumpity bump bump

[Skythief]

You bump to fast. You're only allowed to bump once a day.
OCG should (I think) be like this:
This card cannot attack. Once per turn, you can reduce this cards ATK by 500 to activate 1 of the following effects:
- Destroy 1 face-up Spell or Trap card your opponent controls.
- Inflict 500 damage to your opponent.

Card seems very UP, "cannot attack" clause grades his ATK down to the worth of DEF, just not being in defence position. And the effects aren't worth much.

[mysteryman429]

well if you know anything bout good stall/burn decks is that you dont need to attack at all to win ...

so when u play this you can either destroy good face up spells/traps ur opponent has like royal decree, oppresion, call of haunted , field spells like necrovalley , etc.... probably the card that would screw this over would be skill drain hehe but then again this card would be able to attack then

or inflict 500 damage and since it permanently takes off 500 ATK u can do it max 4 times until it reaches 0 ATK (well unless it has equip card that raises it)

the cannot attack part isnt really an issue cuz of the deck it can played in...

but if ur opponent somehow destroys cards that prevent them from attackin ...this card can be destroyed easier the more it used its effect, which is the only real drawback i used for this card to balance out what it can do

[:bcoe]

Its a good card, but like skythief said there shouldn't be lines separated within the text.

Being able to destroy a spell or trap once per turn is a bit too much, even if he can't attack and especially since its a second effect. Replace it with something burn orientated or even remove it, without it its still a usable card.

[mysteryman429]

if it put any spell/trap your opponent controls, then it would be a problem... but it says just face-up which not every duelist has on the field all the time

and if you dont choose that effect you can use the burn

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i added drawbacks to the card ..not able to attack and having to permanently lose ATK, which makes it easier to destroy in battle if effect is used , like i said before ...so i dont see how its not balanced

[Schrödinger]

Make the DEF 200 so it's at least playable in a Raging Flame Sprite//Ultimate Baseball Kid//Rekindling style deck.

[Azphreal]

OCG fix.

This card cannot declare an attack. Once per turn, you can reduce the ATK of this card by 500 (permanently) to activate 1 of the following effects:
- Destroy 1 face-up Spell or Trap Card your opponent controls.
- Inflict 500 damage to your opponent's Life Points.

If no one believes me that 'permanently' is a valid word, take a look at Drill Warrior.

[Skythief]

Drillwarrior? You mean like in the 10 year old Drillwarrior? One of the first things I learned is not to take old cards for OCG.
If you don't want to attack why give him 2000 ATK instead of 2200 DEF, which is not only better but also a normal value, while 2000 ATK isn't, but can also allow him to be summoned with UFO turtle.

[mysteryman429]

i edited the card a bit...

o and 2000 ATK i did for a reason... it becomes a beatstik if skill drain is on field


o and no, he means this below

..which is not old

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[mysteryman429]

BUMP

feedback on edit?