Bloo-D Posted February 2, 2008 Report Share Posted February 2, 2008 Hey, hey. I had some time on my hands, so I decided to make another card. Here is yet another card with the CED acronym: This card cannot be Special Summoned. When this card is Tribute Summoned successfully, remove from play all Spell Cards in your Graveyard, and place 1 Crisis Counter on this card for each card removed by this effect. When a Spell or Trap Card is activated, or the effect of an Effect Monster is activated, that activation is negated and remove 1 Crisis Counter from this card. When there are no Crisis Counters on this card, this card is destroyed. I really enjoyed making this card, and I hope you will enjoy it as well. All constructive criticism is welcomed and appreciated. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rentaworrio Posted February 2, 2008 Report Share Posted February 2, 2008 12/11 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest JoshIcy Posted February 2, 2008 Report Share Posted February 2, 2008 quick burn or stable damage.. A+, 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
barsam Posted February 2, 2008 Report Share Posted February 2, 2008 Wow.... The best card I have saw from you and the first.! Nice Card. 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shaco Posted February 2, 2008 Report Share Posted February 2, 2008 I like it. But I think it's a little overpowered. Perhaps it shouldn't be able to Negate EVERYTHING. Maybe just 1 or 2 of the 3. (effects that can be negated) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
zachy_syko Posted February 2, 2008 Report Share Posted February 2, 2008 there are a few little grammar probs that need fixing but nonetheless an awesome card! 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kid Posted February 2, 2008 Report Share Posted February 2, 2008 9/10 really good job also cool picture Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RiffMaster Alex Posted February 2, 2008 Report Share Posted February 2, 2008 You have alot of potential! The best new member i have ever seen! Just switch some of the text around and it will be perfect! 8/10 Fantastic work!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RestLess-BoTics Posted February 2, 2008 Report Share Posted February 2, 2008 It's a bit overpowered, and even with the nice picture, it would look better, if darkened.I can see the effort put into the making of this card, and you did a really good job. Keep up the good work. :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
(!Death!Reborn!) Posted February 2, 2008 Report Share Posted February 2, 2008 a tiny bit over powerd but great pic 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted February 2, 2008 Report Share Posted February 2, 2008 Very cool picture, and nice effect, ^_^8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RickiMinaj Posted February 2, 2008 Report Share Posted February 2, 2008 not bad for a newcomer9/10 if newcomer7/10 if not Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bloo-D Posted February 2, 2008 Author Report Share Posted February 2, 2008 Thanks for the comments and the scores. ^_^ It may very powerful, but there are ways to get around it. After all, it can only activate once per chain, and a single Treeborn Frog can plow through all the negations and Crisis Counters during a single Standby Phase. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lucas Maximus Posted February 2, 2008 Report Share Posted February 2, 2008 Its a wee bit overpowerd but the picture is really nice and the effect is great, i think you may have some slight OCG/Grammar errors but still this card is brilliant 8.9/10 ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Junk Raver Posted February 2, 2008 Report Share Posted February 2, 2008 Its nice ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mutant Monster RAEG-HAPYP Posted February 2, 2008 Report Share Posted February 2, 2008 100/10 It's awesome Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kizzi Posted February 2, 2008 Report Share Posted February 2, 2008 A bit overpowered, but good nonetheless. ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LightAndDarknessDragon Posted February 2, 2008 Report Share Posted February 2, 2008 the name of the card makes it sound like its a peace-loving dragon, like it eradicates the crisis ;P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JerryFreelance Posted February 2, 2008 Report Share Posted February 2, 2008 Amazing artwork. The effect is too much like light and darkness dragon... Should be worded as so: This card cannot be Special Summoned. When this card is Tribute Summoned successfully, remove from play all Spell Cards in your Graveyard, and place 1 Crisis Counter on this card for each card removed by this effect. Remove 1 Crisis Counter from this card to negate the activation of the effect of a Spell, Trap, or Effect Monster Card (this effect is not optional). When there are no Crisis Counters on this card, this card is destroyed. Not so original... 4/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bloo-D Posted February 2, 2008 Author Report Share Posted February 2, 2008 Amazing artwork. The effect is too much like light and darkness dragon... Should be worded as so: This card cannot be Special Summoned. When this card is Tribute Summoned successfully' date=' remove from play all Spell Cards in your Graveyard, and place 1 Crisis Counter on this card for each card removed by this effect. [b']Remove 1 Crisis Counter from this card to negate the activation of the effect of a Spell, Trap, or Effect Monster Card (this effect is not optional). [/b]When there are no Crisis Counters on this card, this card is destroyed. Not so original... 4/10You are absolutely right, bhim. Here's the problem with your fix: You wrote "negate the activation of the effect of a Spell, Trap, or Effect Monster Card". The thing is, there are very few Spell and Trap cards that allow you to activate its effect. Specifically, most Spell and Traps lets you activate the effect by activating the card. With most Spell and Traps, it goes like this: activate the card, and apply the effect. You do not actually activate the effect. Only Continuous Spell or Traps allow you to activate the effect of the card. For example, take Wave-Motion Cannon. You activate the card. However, since it's effect has a specific activation condition, you cannot immediately begin applying the effect. When the condition is fulfilled, you may then activate the effect, and apply it. With Effect Monsters, however, it goes like this: Summon the card, activate the effect, apply the effect. This is why Light and Darkness Dragon is worded the way it is. If I were to make your fix, then CED would be severely limited in the Spell and Trap cards it can negate. I hope this clears it up. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JerryFreelance Posted February 2, 2008 Report Share Posted February 2, 2008 Whoops Good call lol Nice job catching that. Yeah, I suppose you're right, but it still seems like something is off with the wording... I'll have to do some research or whatnot, and get back to you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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