Token Generator

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EDIT: I've decided to leave it so that you can tribute this monster or use it as synchro material. The reason is that if you summon a monster to the field using this monster the effect doesn't activate because it requires 5 empty monster card zones for the tokens.

Lore: Once this card is summoned to the field, the controller of this card cannot send it to the graveyard by any card effect. Pay 500 life points during each of your standby phases, if you cannot, remove this card from play. When this card is sent from the field to the graveyard, special summon 5 "machine" tokens to your side of field, one for each level between 1 and 5 in face up attack position. (Machine-type/EARTH/Level ?/ATK 1200/DEF 500)



Constructive criticism appreciated.
Please do not [u]just[/u] criticize the OCG unless its a case that you really don't understand what I am trying to say.

[biraj321]

First of all you posted your cards wrong, second of all the effect contradicts itself.

To post a card you have to click on the card in Card Maker and copy and paste the link on the bottom. (It is not working for me, I dont know if the system is down or they changed the rules or something but you have to do that to post a card

Is it a monster? Or a spell?


EDIT Sorry the computer didn't load the picture.


Ok the lets see the OCG problem.

It says it cannot be removed by ANY effect but then it can be REMOVE it from play. So that doesn't work. Next of all it is overpowered because if I tributed a 1500 ATK monster and then it gets destroyed, it instantly summons 5 other 1500 ATK tokens that can also be tributed. And I also wouldn't use it because once you summon it, your opponent can just wait, while you take 500 damage each turn.

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[quote name='biraj321' timestamp='1297897983' post='5012889']
First of all you posted your cards wrong, second of all the effect contradicts itself.

To post a card you have to click on the card in Card Maker and copy and paste the link on the bottom. (It is not working for me, I dont know if the system is down or they changed the rules or something but you have to do that to post a card

Is it a monster? Or a spell?


EDIT Sorry the computer didn't load the picture.


Ok the lets see the OCG problem.

It says it cannot be removed by ANY effect but then it can be REMOVE it from play. So that doesn't work. Next of all it is overpowered because if I tributed a 1500 ATK monster and then it gets destroyed, it instantly summons 5 other 1500 ATK tokens that can also be tributed. And I also wouldn't use it because once you summon it, your opponent can just wait, while you take 500 damage each turn.
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You can tribute the monster but its effect wouldn't activate because it requires 5 empty monster zones. Its 5 or none.

Anyways I edited it to avoid confusion.

Its a stall card which puts your opponent in control, they could decide to do nothing and let your life points deplete (500 per turn would take a while) or they could wait a few turns until they have enough cards to take out all the tokens, since for its effect to work you can't have any other monsters on the field.

I nerfed the tokens a bit so that they aren't too powerful (even though at 1500 ATK they could all be bottomlessed)