A Glass Cannon Card

[H3SE]

[size="4"]These are a pair of new cards I have invented to suite an undesirable situation. Please give constructive criticism, rate and offer ideas on how to improve or balance the designs. [/size]

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[i][size="3"]Dragon of Recalescent Origins[/size][/i]
For each Card Zone that is empty increase this card's ATK by 100, Monster Card Zones occupied by "Dragon of Recalescent Origins" are treated as empty (excluding the Monster Card Zone occupied by this card). If your opponent has 7 or more empty Card Zones, this effect is negated until the next Standby Phase.

[i][size="3"]Anachronistic Arrival[/size][/i]
If 2 or more Dragon-Type monsters you control are destroyed in 1 turn as a result of an opponent's card(s), you may add 1 "Dragon of Recalescent Origins" to your hand. If 3 or more Dragon-Type monsters you control would be destroyed by separate card effects, you may Special Summon 2 "Dragon of Recalescent Origins" from your Deck.

[mysteryman429]

first of all your trap is quickplay..which doesnt exist..

i like arrival cause its kind of like starlight road but for dragon deck

but imo, the dragon is kind of underpowered by itself .. other than having an attack increase that may go over 2000.. maybe.. thats about it to the card... it really would just be used when combined with arrival to use it to bring it out when ur cards are destroyed

decent combo tho

[H3SE]

@mysteryman429: Thank you for your contribution. I have modified the ATK on Dragon of Recalescent Origins to better balance the card. In addition I have repaired the faulty Quick-play "Trap" into a Counter Trap as it was intended.