DSS Posted February 17, 2011 Report Share Posted February 17, 2011 First time doing this and also after a 3 years pause (i think) i once again stepped into the Realistic section. So please let me know if the ocg is horrible, if its op and if its anything else wrong with it please let me know . [center][center] [IMG]http://i52.tinypic.com/33kf1ok.jpg[/IMG] [u][u]Lore[/u][/u] [b][b]2 Level 4 DARK monster Once per turn , you can remove 1 Exceed Material Monster to activate an Equip Spell Card from your Graveyard. When this card is removed from the field, deal damage to your opponent's Life Points equal to the amount of Spell Cards your opponent has in his Graveyard x100..[/b][/b][/center][/center] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ieyasu Tokugawa Posted February 17, 2011 Report Share Posted February 17, 2011 Well your excess ocg seems find, but it should be "[b]an[/b] Equip Spell Card from [b]your[/b] Graveyard" I don't know why you put hand, since you don't need a monster effect to do so. You also forgot to put how much damage you do to the opponent, unless you only meant for the card to do 5 to 7 damage Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DSS Posted February 17, 2011 Author Report Share Posted February 17, 2011 [quote name='Metagross386' timestamp='1297986196' post='5015200'] Well your excess ocg seems find, but it should be "[b]an[/b] Equip Spell Card from [b]your[/b] Graveyard" I don't know why you put hand, since you don't need a monster effect to do so. You also forgot to put how much damage you do to the opponent, unless you only meant for the card to do 5 to 7 damage [/quote] tsk i knew i've forgotten something thanks for the comment , i'll go edit the card now Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The True Ace Attorney Posted February 18, 2011 Report Share Posted February 18, 2011 Great effect Good OCG Awesome card You get an 8/10. Just so you know, you missed a "c" in Exceed and this card allows you to remove any Exceed Material Monster, though that may be deliberate. Also, what font(s) did you use? I can't figure it out. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DSS Posted February 18, 2011 Author Report Share Posted February 18, 2011 [quote name='The True Ace Attorney' timestamp='1297987296' post='5015238'] Great effect Good OCG Awesome card You get an 8/10. Just so you know, you missed a "c" in Exceed and this card allows you to remove any Exceed Material Monster, though that may be deliberate. [b]Also, what font(s) did you use? I can't figure it out.[/b] [/quote] thanks ^^. And the fond i used huh...well the defaul one that came with the MSE Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The True Ace Attorney Posted February 18, 2011 Report Share Posted February 18, 2011 See, that's where I was going wrong. Damn thing kept deleting all the text when I did anything. Fixed it now though... Somehow... Anyway, make some more. We need to plague the site with Exceed Monsters now. Sort of like Synchro Monsters... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DSS Posted February 18, 2011 Author Report Share Posted February 18, 2011 If I'll get inspiration for more unique effects maybe i'll make more Exceed cards. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ieyasu Tokugawa Posted February 18, 2011 Report Share Posted February 18, 2011 OCG is a lot bettery now, but I'm still confused as to why its effect lets you activate an Equip Spell from the hand, unless you're able to use it during your opponent's turn. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DSS Posted February 18, 2011 Author Report Share Posted February 18, 2011 [quote name='Metagross386' timestamp='1297998209' post='5015697'] OCG is a lot bettery now, but I'm still confused as to why its effect lets you activate an Equip Spell from the hand, unless you're able to use it during your opponent's turn. [/quote] edited for the 12th time i think because i always messed up or missed some text XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DSS Posted February 18, 2011 Author Report Share Posted February 18, 2011 bump ._. i need a couple more opinions on this ._." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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