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(My First Set) Elemental Lords (please rate)


SlackJaw

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Alright, first of all, make sure to add a lore to this card and any other future card you post. (Lore is a copy of the effect/description of the card written below card) So, please do add that. That's out of the way, so - Onto the card. Lot's of OCG errors, which I'm going to fix on the bottom of this post. The picture has been used many times before, but I don't really mind - picture is cool looking. The effect is pretty cool though, and it [i]Seems[/i] to be balanced. So, I give it 8/10. Newbie bonus makes it a 9/10. Good job my friend!


[b]Proper OCG: [/b]
This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by Tributing 1 Thunder-Type monster whose level is equal too 8. This card can attack your opponent directly. During the End Phase this card attacked your opponent directly, switch this card's position to face-up defense.


Side note: I believe it might be underpowered, your tributing a level 8 for a card with only 2300 ATK and 0 def, first time you attack too you set it in def. So, Might want to give more power, if you ask me.
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[quote name='SlackJaw' timestamp='1297996363' post='5015637']
Ok thanks! Umm I just wanted to point out it's not one monster it's multiple as long as the stars equal 8
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Oh, That makes sense. You might want to attempt to explain that in the effect though, so people don't get confused - as I did. =3



EDIT: If it is multiple, also add how many.
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