†Marksman† Posted February 18, 2011 Report Share Posted February 18, 2011 Well, I wanted to make some sort of set with a DARK theme. Didn't want to just do random names with DARK attribute, so I made a whole DARK archetype. This archetype is called 'Shadow.' I just got MSE though, So all these are made with MSE. (I Believe it's better than the Card Maker here, No offence YCM) Anyhow, this is what I came up with so far : [Spoiler=Effect Monsters 6/??] [Spoiler=Shadow Knight] [center][img]http://img249.imageshack.us/img249/4886/shadowid.jpg[/img] [b]Lore[/b] [i]This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by Tributing 1 DARK monster whose level is equal to 4. Once per turn, select 1 LIGHT monster on your opponent's side of the field. That card's ATK is then reduced to 0. [/i] [/center] [/Spoiler] [Spoiler=Shadow Beast] [center][img]http://img823.imageshack.us/img823/2368/shadowbeast.jpg[/img] [b]Lore[/b] [i]This card cannot be Set. When this card is Summoned, you may destroy 1 LIGHT monster with an ATK equal to 2000 or less your opponent controls. If your opponent does not control any LIGHT monsters when this card is Summoned, Inflict 100 points of damage to yourself.[/i] [/center] [/Spoiler] [Spoiler=Shadow Magician] [center][img]http://img262.imageshack.us/img262/8769/shadow3.jpg[/img] [b]Lore[/b] [i]Once per turn, Remove from play 1 DARK monster from your Graveyard to Special Summon 1 'Shadow' Monster from your Deck to your side of the field in face-up attack position.[/i] [/center] [/Spoiler] [Spoiler=Shadow Synchron] [center][img]http://img210.imageshack.us/img210/7017/shadows1.jpg[/img] [b]Lore[/b] [i]When this card is sent to the Graveyard for a Synchro Summon, remove from play 1 level 4 monster from your Graveyard to to return this card from your Graveyard to your Hand. (Synchro Summon is still performed)[/i][/center] [/Spoiler] [Spoiler=Shadow Demon] [center][img]http://img838.imageshack.us/img838/3571/shadows3.jpg[/img] [b]Lore[/b] [i]This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by removing from play 1 DARK monster in your Graveyard. During the End Phase this card is Special Summoned, pay 400 Life Points to send the monster you removed from play to Special Summon this card to your Hand.[/i][/center] [/Spoiler] [Spoiler=Shadow Scout] [center][img]http://img201.imageshack.us/img201/1193/shadowss.jpg[/img] [b]Lore[/b] [i]Once per turn, you can send 1 monster from your Hand to your Graveyard to send 1 monster that is removed from play to your Hand. After you use this card's effect 4 times, remove this card from play.[/i][/center] [/Spoiler] [/Spoiler] [Spoiler=Other Monsters 1/??] [Spoiler=Evil Shadow] [center][img]http://img192.imageshack.us/img192/4893/shadowss2.jpg[/img] [b]Lore[/b] [i]Once per turn during your main Phase, if you control this card on the field, you can equip it to any of your 'Shadow' monsters as an Equip Card, or unequip the Union equipment and Special Summon this card in face-up Attack Position. While equipped to a monster by this card's effect, increase the ATK of the equipped monster by 1000 points. (1 monster can only be equipped with 1 Union monster at a time, if the equipped monster is destroyed as a result of battle, destroy this card instead.[/i][/center] [/Spoiler] [/Spoiler] [Spoiler=Fusion/Synchro Monsters 2/??] [Spoiler=Shadow Beast-Knight] [center][img]http://img834.imageshack.us/img834/7220/shadow1r.jpg[/img] [b]Lore[/b] [i]"Shadow Knight" + "Shadow Beast" This can only be Fusion Summoned with the above Fusion Material monsters. Remove from play 1 'Shadow' monster from your Graveyard to Special Summon 1 DARK monster whose level stars are equal too 4 or less.[/i] [/center] [/Spoiler] [Spoiler=Shadow Executioner] [center][img]http://img233.imageshack.us/img233/7679/shadows2.jpg[/img] [b]Lore[/b] [i]1 Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner monsters You can tribute 1 'Shadow' monster you control to inflict damage to your opponent. The amount of damage sent to your opponent is decided by the destroyed monster's ATK by 300.[/i][/center] [/Spoiler] [/Spoiler] [Spoiler=Spells/Traps 3/??] [Spoiler=Evolving Shadow] [center][img]http://img190.imageshack.us/img190/4486/shadowset.jpg[/img] [b]Lore[/b] [i]This card cannot be equipped to any 'Shadow' monsters. The equipped monster's name is than treated as a 'Shadow' monster. When the equipped card is destroyed, send this card to the Graveyard instead.[/i][/center] [/Spoiler] [Spoiler=Casting Shadow] [center][img]http://img571.imageshack.us/img571/5217/shadowss3.jpg[/img] [b]Lore[/b] [i]The effect of "Casting Shadow" can only be activated twice per duel. Return 2 'Shadow' cards from your Graveyard to your hand.[/i][/center] [/Spoiler] [Spoiler=Shadow Battle Enhancer] [center][img]http://img148.imageshack.us/img148/1443/shadowss1.jpg[/img] [b]Lore[/b] [i]Activate this card only when your opponent declares an attack with a 'Shadow' monster you control. The 'Shadow' monster wins the battle, ignoring ATK and DEF of each cards.[/i] [/Spoiler] [/Spoiler] [b]Rate/Hate/Comment[/b] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
monty1394 Posted February 18, 2011 Report Share Posted February 18, 2011 hmm, i like these. but i only have 1 concern...if you can automatically destroy 1 Light monster with shadow beast...i could easily dominate a blue-eyes with it. that would be fun for me, but used against me, i would be ticked. maybe change it to 2300 ATK or less or something? some sort of cap....cuz this could also take out a blue-eyes ultimate too. i do like shadow knight, kinda like Chaos Sorcerer but without the remove from play effect. The fusion is awesome, sorta op'd attack wise but a good card. Shadow magician has a good effect too; very usable :3 9/10 for now =D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Azo Posted February 18, 2011 Report Share Posted February 18, 2011 I think the pictures are nice, plus your OCG is effective 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
†Marksman† Posted February 18, 2011 Author Report Share Posted February 18, 2011 [quote name='monty1394' timestamp='1297996506' post='5015646'] hmm, i like these. but i only have 1 concern...if you can automatically destroy 1 Light monster with shadow beast...i could easily dominate a blue-eyes with it. that would be fun for me, but used against me, i would be ticked. maybe change it to 2300 ATK or less or something? some sort of cap....cuz this could also take out a blue-eyes ultimate too. i do like shadow knight, kinda like Chaos Sorcerer but without the remove from play effect. The fusion is awesome, sorta op'd attack wise but a good card. Shadow magician has a good effect too; very usable :3 9/10 for now =D [/quote] Now that I think of it, I wasn't thinking when I made it. Your right, at the moment it's free to destroy any LIGHT monster. It could destroy stuff like Dragon Master Knight [5000/5000] which makes it WAY overpowered. So, I will do as you suggested - Make an ATK limit. :3 I also tried to make the fusion stronger, as the fusion material monsters were fairly high in the ATK stat. Anyhow, I believe the solid rating (for now) is 9/10, which is a like for me. Thanks for the feedback everybody, I'm going to edit and make new cards right now. (When this post is up) Anyhow, thanks guys! Hope you guys keep commenting. :3 [quote name='Azo' timestamp='1298000437' post='5015745'] I think the pictures are nice, plus your OCG is effective 9/10 [/quote] Thanks for the rating, but have any feedback? EDIT: Added 4 new cards! 1 Spell, 4 monsters. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
†Marksman† Posted February 19, 2011 Author Report Share Posted February 19, 2011 *BUMP* (Know it isn't 24 hours, but it was on 2nd page.) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
†Marksman† Posted February 19, 2011 Author Report Share Posted February 19, 2011 *BUMP* Any Comments? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
†Marksman† Posted February 19, 2011 Author Report Share Posted February 19, 2011 *BUMP* 3 bump streak. Wow, That means I need to make a new attraction. That attraction is, new cards! Added 4 new cards. 1 spell/1 trap, and 2 monsters. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MORPHINGJARFORTHEWIN Posted February 19, 2011 Report Share Posted February 19, 2011 cool Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
†Marksman† Posted February 19, 2011 Author Report Share Posted February 19, 2011 [quote name='My mom' timestamp='1298156776' post='5019066'] cool [/quote] Just a small [size="1"]Thanks[/size]. I appreciate the comment, but I don't totally appreciate it when people come by an type something like, "Cool." If you have any feedback, please do share, but if you don't - Next time when you come please put a little thought into what you type. Please do not take any of this offense, I'm trying to enforce NOT to have comments as this. Anyhow, thanks for the comment I guess. >.> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dusk_Frenzy Posted February 20, 2011 Report Share Posted February 20, 2011 Ok, these are good ^^ Effect Monsters: What is there to say....they all are good. The effects seem great on [b]Shadow Beast [/b]and [b]Shadow Knight[/b], even though you need Light monsters to make them effective, they are pretty good. The rest of the effect monsters [b]Shadow Magician, Shadow Synchron, Shadow Demon[/b] and [b]Shadow Scout[/b] are also great. I dnt know if it is just me but I dont get the effect on Shadow Demon [i]This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by removing from play 1 DARK monster in your Graveyard. [b]During the End Phase this card is Special Summoned, pay 400 Life Points to send the monster you removed from play to Special Summon this card to your Hand[/b].[/i] That last part is sorta consfusing to me. Although it may be just me . Anyway moving on.... [b]Evil Shadow[/b] I like this one. Increasing a monsters ATK by 1000 pretty much makes this card valuable. [b]Shadow Beast-Knight [/b] and [b]Shadow Executioner [/b] Both worth their weight in gold. Being Fusion and Synchro few people make them OP'd due to the circumstances surrounding their summon but you have made them balanced, which i like. [b]Evolving Shadow, Casting Shadow and Shadow Battle Enhancer[/b] Nothing wrong with these cards, the effects are good Ok so here we go: Overall Set/Deck: 9/10 Overall Pictures: 7/10 Overall Effects: 9/10 Overall Flow: 9.5/10 Overall: 9.5/10 ^^ keep em coming Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
†Marksman† Posted February 20, 2011 Author Report Share Posted February 20, 2011 [quote name='Jmaac1' timestamp='1298161393' post='5019267'] Ok, these are good ^^ Effect Monsters: What is there to say....they all are good. The effects seem great on [b]Shadow Beast [/b]and [b]Shadow Knight[/b], even though you need Light monsters to make them effective, they are pretty good. The rest of the effect monsters [b]Shadow Magician, Shadow Synchron, Shadow Demon[/b] and [b]Shadow Scout[/b] are also great. I dnt know if it is just me but I dont get the effect on Shadow Demon [i]This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by removing from play 1 DARK monster in your Graveyard. [b]During the End Phase this card is Special Summoned, pay 400 Life Points to send the monster you removed from play to Special Summon this card to your Hand[/b].[/i] That last part is sorta consfusing to me. Although it may be just me . [i][b]You know the monster you remove from play when you Special Summon the card? You pay the life points to return that card to your hand. (Now that I think about that, you can't. Its REMOVED FROM PLAY. Wow...)[/b][/i] Anyway moving on.... [b]Evil Shadow[/b] I like this one. Increasing a monsters ATK by 1000 pretty much makes this card valuable. [b]Shadow Beast-Knight [/b] and [b]Shadow Executioner [/b] Both worth their weight in gold. Being Fusion and Synchro few people make them OP'd due to the circumstances surrounding their summon but you have made them balanced, which i like. [b]Evolving Shadow, Casting Shadow and Shadow Battle Enhancer[/b] Nothing wrong with these cards, the effects are good Ok so here we go: Overall Set/Deck: 9/10 Overall Pictures: 7/10 Overall Effects: 9/10 Overall Flow: 9.5/10 Overall: 9.5/10 ^^ keep em coming - [i][b]I will. I've actually REALLY enjoyed this set so far. I appreciate everyone so far has to. [/b][/i] [/quote] (Most of comments on this post is in the quote! :3) Thanks for the post, defiantly deserves a +Rep. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dusk_Frenzy Posted February 20, 2011 Report Share Posted February 20, 2011 [quote name='†Marksman†' timestamp='1298163081' post='5019362'] (Most of comments on this post is in the quote! :3) Thanks for the post, defiantly deserves a +Rep. [/quote] No worries just helping out ^^ I see where i went wrong now haha i read it wrong ^^. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
†Marksman† Posted February 20, 2011 Author Report Share Posted February 20, 2011 *BUMP* (Once again, it's on 2nd page.) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♠>:Stick-Man:<♠ Posted February 20, 2011 Report Share Posted February 20, 2011 I like the idea and whole card concepts you got going on through this cards and Tributing, but I see a flaw in my view of them. The Fusion Monster seems like it would be a bit difficult to summon since you need 2 specific monster. What I would do is either make were the Fusion Monster has different Fusion Materials, such as 1 "Shadow" Monster and 1 "Shadow Knight" or "Shadow Beast". Or you could make a Spell or Trap Card that brings out both "Shadow Knight" & "Shadow Beast" on the field so they will be ready to be fused into the Fusion Monster. Great cards nonetheless though, 9' Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
†Marksman† Posted February 20, 2011 Author Report Share Posted February 20, 2011 [quote name='♠>:Stick-Man:<♠' timestamp='1298218261' post='5020770'] I like the idea and whole card concepts you got going on through this cards and Tributing, but I see a flaw in my view of them. The Fusion Monster seems like it would be a bit difficult to summon since you need 2 specific monster. What I would do is either make were the Fusion Monster has different Fusion Materials, such as 1 "Shadow" Monster and 1 "Shadow Knight" or "Shadow Beast". Or you could make a Spell or Trap Card that brings out both "Shadow Knight" & "Shadow Beast" on the field so they will be ready to be fused into the Fusion Monster. Great cards nonetheless though, 9' [/quote] Hate to admit it but, I'm totally lost. I read this several times and I don't get what you'd do with the fusion. >.> Could you rephrase? Sorry. Anyhow, I believe that the thought that you put into this counts. +Rep to you. P.S. I said it in the post but, Could you rephrase? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
†Marksman† Posted February 21, 2011 Author Report Share Posted February 21, 2011 I will never give up on this set! *BUMP* (Will edit this saying when i finish 4 new cards...) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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