CARDS from the DKGN (Dark Generation)

[Darklord Draxon]

[spoiler= "Doom Corruption Virus"][img]http://img508.imageshack.us/img508/6065/254867t.jpg[/img]
This is a card I mad that supports DARK decks and I drew the art.
LORE: [color="#0000FF"]Tribute 1 level 7 or higher DARK monster that you control. Check all monsters that your opponent controls, all cards in your opponent's hand, and all cards he/she draws during your opponent's next 3 turns, and send all 1500 or less DEF monsters to the graveyard.[/color][/spoiler][spoiler= "Dark Dragon Knight"][img]http://img823.imageshack.us/img823/552/254867f.jpg[/img]
This is a DARK deck support card and sorry that I made it too OP'ed.
LORE: [color="#0000FF"]This card can't be special summon from the graveyard. When this card is normal summon, you can discard 1 DARK monster from your deck to the graveyard. Once per turn, you can remove 1 DARK monster that is in your graveyard from play to destroy 1 card your opponent controls. When this card is removed from play, add this card to your graveyard and you can add 1 level 4 or lower DARK monster from your graveyard to your hand.[/color][/spoiler][spoiler= "Dark Volcanic Archer"][img]http://img89.imageshack.us/img89/4514/254867.jpg[/img]
This is the new architype and it happens to be one of my favorite cards.
LORE: [color="#0000FF"]This card can attack your opponent directly by halving this cards ATK until the end phase. You can tribute 1 Fire monster you control to destroy 1 card your opponent controls.. This card is unaffected by your opponent's trap cards.[/color][/spoiler][spoiler= "Dark Volcanic Overlord"][img]http://img84.imageshack.us/img84/4514/254867.jpg[/img]
More Dark Volcanic Support and it packs quite a mean punch.
LORE: [color="#0000FF"]This monster can be tribute summon by tributing 1 Fire monster with 2000 ATK or more. When this card is normal or special summon, you can special summon up to 2 level 4 or lower "Dark Volcanic" monsters from your deck to your field but the monsters summon by this effect can't attack this turn. Once per turn, you can discard 2 Fire monsters from your deck to the graveyard to destroy 1 card on the field. This card is unaffected by your opponent's trap cards.[/color][/spoiler][spoiler= "Amazoness Apprentice"][img]http://img442.imageshack.us/img442/4514/254867.jpg[/img]
Yay! more Amazoness support and this happens to be a core card to the deck.
LORE: [color="#0000FF"]When this card is destroyed by battle, you can special summon 1 level 4 or lower "Amazoness" monster with 1500 or less ATK from your deck in attack mode. Once per turn, you can send 1 Equip Spell card that is equipped to an "Amazoness" monster you control to the graveyard to destroy 1 card on the field.[/color][/spoiler][spoiler= "Iron Chain King"][img]http://img526.imageshack.us/img526/4514/254867.jpg[/img]
YAY! more Iron chain support and this is a NEW synchro.
LORE: [color="#0000FF"]1 "Iron Chain" Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner monsters
When this card is synchro summoned, you can remove any number of "Iron Chain" monsters in your graveyard to discard cards from the top of your opponent's deck to the graveyard equal to the number of cards removed by this effect. Anytime your opponent activates a spell or trap card, discard the top card of their deck to the graveyard.[/color][/spoiler][spoiler= "Dark volcano Dragon"][img]http://img248.imageshack.us/img248/8025/254867i.jpg[/img]
This is the source of strength for the Dark Volcanics. My sig. Dragon.
LORE: [color="#0000FF"]1 DARK OR FIRE Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner DARK or FIRE monsters
When this card destroys a monster by battle, inflict damage to your opponent equal to the destroyed monsters ATK. If this card destroys a monster in defense mode and this cards ATK is higher than the other monsters DEF, inflict the difference as battle damage to your opponent. Once per turn during your main phase, you can pay 2000 life points to send all cards on the field to the graveyard, except this card but you can't conduct your next battle phase. When this card is destroyed and sent to the graveyard, you can remove 1 other FIRE monster from your graveyard to special summon this card during the end phase. This card is unaffected by your opponent's trap card effects.[/color][/spoiler][spoiler= "Universa, Dragon of Dark World"][img]http://img833.imageshack.us/img833/4514/254867.jpg[/img]
Oh look finally some Dark world support that is actually pretty high leveled.
LORE: [color="#0000FF"]This card can't be normal summoned or set. This card can only be special summoned by removing 3 "Dark World" monsters from your graveyard. If this card would be destroyed by a card effect, you can add this card to your hand instead of it being sent to the graveyard. Once per turn, you can add 1 "Dark World" monster from your graveyard to your hand and you draw 1 card. If you use this effect, this card can't attack this turn.[/color][/spoiler][spoiler= "Pot of Deception"][img]http://img513.imageshack.us/img513/4514/254867.jpg[/img]
A NEW pot that happens to be a little better than Pot of Duality.
LORE: [color="#0000FF"]Pick up the top 3 cards of your deck and reveal them to your opponent. Your opponent selects 1 of those cards and adds the selected card to your hand. The rest of the cards go to the bottom of your deck and then discard the top 2 cards of your deck and draw 1 card. You can only activate 1 "Pot of Deception" per turn.[/color][/spoiler][spoiler= "Dark Dragon of Black Chaos"][img]http://img263.imageshack.us/img263/4514/254867.jpg[/img]
More DARK support and It's a little like Machina Fortress.
LORE: [color="#0000FF"]This card can't be normal summon or set. This card can only be special summon from your hand or graveyard by discarding DARK monsters from your hand until the combined level of the sent monster(s) equals 10 or more. Once per turn, you can discard 1 DARK monster from your hand to special summon 1 DARK monster from your graveyard. This card can attack all monsters your opponent controls once each but this card can't attack your opponent directly that turn.[/color][/spoiler]

[Lily Deliroso]

The OCG on your Doom Corruption Virus is a bit archaic, however it is correct. Newer OCG uses the term "Release" instead of "Tribute" now. The artwork isn't exactly the greatest I've seen, but it does convey what the card is and does.

Dark Dragon Knight is definably better, but there are several OCG errors. "Normal Summoned" is capitalized as such. "...you can search your deck for 1 DARK monster, send the selected card to the Graveyard." you wouldn't ever say "Discard 1 card from your Deck" because discarding ONLY takes place in your hand. "...you can Remove from play 1 DARK monster in your Graveyard to destroy 1 card on your opponents side of the field." Is much better than saying "Remove 1 DARK moster from play" because "Remove from play" is all one term and cannot be separated in proper OCG. Also saying "on your opponents side of the field." would be used when you're talking about Spell and Traps, or ALL cards on their side of the field. "your opponent controls." Is best suited for cards that specifically target only their monsters. "When this card is Removed from play, send this card to the Graveyard instead. Then add 1 Level 4 or lower DARK monster from your Graveyard to your hand." Is the correct form at the last effect. "Removed from play" is always written as such, the "Remove" being capitalized and the "from play" written as is. Also, you cannot Add card to your Graveyard, simply say "..send this card to the Graveyard instead.".

Anyways that's enough of my jabbering about OCG. Overall, I can tell that the main strategy of these cards would be Sending DARK monsters to the Graveyard and Remove from play. This can really be a devastating deck with just a few more cards in the set. So, being as I'm a perfectionist and like to grade in a 100 scale, let the Grading begin!

Doom Corruption Virus = 82
Dark Dragon Knight = 77
Dark Volcanic Archer = 45 (No pic)
Dark Volcano Dragon = 45 (Also no pic, however good OCG. UNGODLY BROKEN EFFECT!! The 45 points came completely from the OCG category)
Iron Chain King = 66
Universa, Dragon of the Dark World = 82
Pot of Deception = 72

Overall, i grade this set a 67, not great and still needs improvement, but you still had several cards that are actually worth something in there. Sorry if my grading seems harsh, I'm just answering honestly. Anyways, if you wonder about cards at all, feel free to throw a PM my way. I know i'm new here and all, but when it comes to Balance and OCG, i know what I'm talking about.

Love ya~ and see you around
- Lily Deliroso

[Darklord Draxon]

Thanks for your comments there is more to this set its just i only had time to put up ten of them i got more. and yes OCG is specific on how a monster's card effect is. But here is some last cards I will show that is from the same set.
[Spoiler= "DES monsters"][img]http://img507.imageshack.us/img507/6581/254867p.jpg[/img]
LORE: [color="#0000FF"]FLIP: Discard the top 3 cards of your opponent's deck to the graveyard. When this card is destroyed by battle and sent to the graveyard, you can special summon up to 2 "Des Crocodile" monsters from your deck in face down defense position.[/color]
[img]http://img207.imageshack.us/img207/4514/254867.jpg[/img]
LORE: [color="#0000FF"]FLIP: Your opponent draws 3 cards and discard all the monsters your opponent drew to the graveyard immediately When this card is destroyed by battle and sent to the graveyard, you can special summon up to 2 "Des Iguana" monsters from your deck in face down defense position.[/color][/spoiler]
I also edited a little bit from the above post. But wait there is more!
[spoiler= "Destiny Hero Monsters"][img]http://img524.imageshack.us/img524/4514/254867.jpg[/img]
LORE: [color="#0000FF"]This card can't be normal summon or set. This card can only be special summon from your hand or graveyard by removing 3 "Destiny Hero" monsters in your graveyard from play. When this card attack a monster in defense mode and this cards ATK is higher than the defense monsters DEF, inflict the difference as battle damage to your opponent. If this card battles a monster that has 2000 or less ATK, destroy that monster without any damage calculation.[/color]
[img]http://img411.imageshack.us/img411/6424/254867k.jpg[/img]
LORE: [color="#0000FF"]Once per turn, you can tribute 1 "Destiny Hero" monster to destroy 1 card on the field. If this card destroys a monster by battle, you can special summon that monster in defense mode at the end of the battle phase.[/color]
[img]http://img412.imageshack.us/img412/6424/254867k.jpg[/img]
LORE: [color="#0000FF"]This card can be special summon from your hand by tributing 1 "Destiny Hero" monster you control. When this card destroys a monster by battle, you can special summon 1 "Destiny Hero" monster that is level 4 or lower from your graveyard at the end of the battle phase. If this card is in your graveyard during your standby phase, you can remove 1 other DARK monster in your graveyard to special summon this card.[/color]
[img]http://img89.imageshack.us/img89/6581/254867p.jpg[/img]
LORE: [color="#0000FF"]Once per turn, you can destroy 1 monster on the field with 2000 or more ATK. When a "Destiny Hero " monster is special summon to your field, you can remove that monster from play until your next standby phase and draw 1 card. While this card is face-up on the field, it is the only attack target your opponent can choose.[/color][/spoiler]
[spoiler= "The Heavens Cards"][img]http://img705.imageshack.us/img705/7972/254867w.jpg[/img]
LORE: [color="#0000FF"]This card can't be normal summon or set. This card can be special summon from your hand or graveyard by removing 2 monsters in your graveyard that are level 7 or higher. All LIGHT Fairy-type monsters cannot be affected by your opponent's monster effects and All monsters your opponent controls lose 500 ATK. Once per turn, you can tribute 1 monster you control to gain lifepoints equal to its ATK. (This effect can be used on either players turn)[/color]
[img]http://img692.imageshack.us/img692/4514/254867.jpg[/img]
LORE: [color="#0000FF"]This card can't be normal summon or set. This card can be special summon from your hand or graveyard when 2 or more monsters on your field were destroyed. Once per turn, you can discard 1 spell card from your hand to special summon 1 monster from your graveyard but it can't attack this turn. If this card destroys a monster by battle, you gain lifepoints equal to the destroyed monsters ATK.[/color][/spoiler][spoiler= "Spells and traps"][img]http://img593.imageshack.us/img593/4514/254867.jpg[/img]
LORE: [color="#0000FF"]You can only activate this card if you control 2 or more DARK monsters on your field. Tribute 1 DARK monster you control to draw 2 cards. You can remove 1 DARK monster from your hand to draw 2 cards. You can remove 1 DARK monster from your graveyard to draw 1 card. You can only activate 1 "Cards of Darkness" per turn. During the end phase, discard all the DARK monsters from your hand to the graveyard. After this card's effect has resolved, remove it from play.[/color]
[img]http://img594.imageshack.us/img594/4514/254867.jpg[/img]
LORE: [color="#0000FF"]Discard 1 Dark monster from your hand and remove 1 Dark monster from your graveyard to special summon 1 monster from either players graveyard. You can only activate 1 "Dark Monster Reborn" card per turn. You can remove this card and 1 other level 5 or higher Dark monster from your graveyard to special summon 1 monster from your graveyard. You cannot activate both effects on the same turn this card was activated.[/color]
[img]http://img337.imageshack.us/img337/1193/254867q.jpg[/img]
LORE: [color="#0000FF"]Select 1 monster that you and your opponent controls and change their battle positions from attack to defense mode and vis versa. Your opponent draws 2 cards and your opponent's next battle phase is skipped.[/color]
[img]http://img402.imageshack.us/img402/7972/254867w.jpg[/img]
LORE: [color="#0000FF"]When an "Iron Chain" monster is destroyed by battle, you can special summon 1 "Iron Chain" monster from your graveyard that is level 4 or lower during your next standby phase. Once per turn, you can special summon 1 "Iron Chain" monster from your hand if you control less monsters than your opponent.[/color]
[img]http://img257.imageshack.us/img257/4514/254867.jpg[/img]
LORE: [color="#0000FF"]You can pay 2000 lifepoints to special summon 1 Dark monster you have removed from play and add 2 Dark monster you have removed form play to your deck. Then you can add 1 card you have removed from play to your hand but that card can't be summon, set, or activated this turn.[/color][/spoiler]
Ok thats it for now but i do have more its just I don't want to reveal the whole pack.

[Lily Deliroso]

I love your cards, I'm just a but sad that you don't have pictures for them. Though i'm sure you don't want to show the pictures until the full deck is done, correct?

[Darklord Draxon]

yea thats correct I am just gonna create the cards and then when I get a chance I will draw all the pictures for them and make the pack DKGN (Dark Generation) I am also working on 2 more packs after this one its gonna be Elemental War (ELWA) and Dawn of the Duelist (DOTD). I only got one question and that is What is your favorite card out of all that i created? My favorite is the DARK VOLCANO DRAGON! Dark Volcanics will be the next big thing since Blackwings.
and The promo card for this pack DKGN is one of the cards used to summon 1 out of the 2 counter parts of myself
[spoiler= "Sneak peak DKGN promo"][img]http://img403.imageshack.us/img403/4514/254867.jpg[/img]
LORE: [color="#0000FF"]You can tribute this card to special 1 "Dark Overlord of the Underworld - Diablo" or "The Chaos Dragon Hero - Draxon" from your hand, ignoring the summoning conditions. Once per turn, you can discard 1 Dark monster from your hand to draw 2 cards from your deck When this card is destroyed, you can add 1 level 4 or lower Dark monster from your deck to your hand.[/color][/spoiler][spoiler= "Dark Overlord of The Underworld - Diablo"][img]http://img402.imageshack.us/img402/1193/254867q.jpg[/img]
LORE: [color="#0000FF"]When your opponent destroys a DARK Fiend-type monster you control by battle, you can special summon this card from your hand. This cards ATK and DEF are equal to the number of Dark monsters in your graveyard and removed from play x 300. This card can't be destroyed by battle. When this card is destroyed by a card effect and sent to the graveyard, you can remove 2 other Dark monsters in your graveyard to special summon this card during the end phase. Once per turn, you can tribute 1 Dark monster you control to take control of 1 monster your opponent controls until your end phase. When this card destroys a monster by battle, remove that monster from play.[/color][/spoiler][spoiler= "The Chaos Dragon Hero - Draxon"][img]http://img705.imageshack.us/img705/7558/254867n.jpg[/img]
LORE: [color="#0000FF"]This card can't be normal or set. This card can only be special summon by removing 1 LIGHT,1 DARK, and 1 Dragon -type monster from your graveyard from play. This card is also treated as a DARK monster. This cards ATK and DEF become the number of cards in your graveyard x 300. When this card inflicts battle damage, you can special summon 1 monster from your deck that is level 4 or lower in defense mode. Once per turn, you can discard the top 3 cards of your deck to the graveyard to negate the effect of a spell or trap card and destroy it. If this card is targeted by a monster effect, you can discard 5 monsters from your deck to the graveyard to negate its effect and send that card to the graveyard.[/color][/spoiler]