HombreDeOro Posted February 20, 2011 Report Share Posted February 20, 2011 [list] [*]Monster Cards [list=1] [*]Normal Monsters [img]http://img101.imageshack.us/img101/5847/359356.jpg[/img] Lore:This mechanical giant is powerful enough to defeat creatures larger than itself and small armys. [img]http://img219.imageshack.us/img219/5847/359356.jpg[/img] Lore:A Golem made completely out of junk and spare parts. [img]http://img820.imageshack.us/img820/5847/359356.jpg[/img] Lore:Just a Rusty Old Robot. Watch out for tetanus. [img]http://img408.imageshack.us/img408/5847/359356.jpg[/img] Lore:This robot is equipped with twin turbo engines and various lightweight weaponry. It is designed to pursue fleeing targets. [*]Effect Monsters [img]http://img408.imageshack.us/img408/4390/359356y.jpg[/img] Lore:When attacked this monster has 200 Additional ATK Points. During your Standby Phase, by sending this face-up card to the Graveyard, Special Summon 1 "SQX Tortoise Mark 3 LV5" from your hand or Deck. [img]http://img406.imageshack.us/img406/5847/359356.jpg[/img] Lore:By Sacrificing One Mechanical monster destroy one of your opponents monster whose levels are less than or equal to the sacrificed monster. During the End Phase of a turn that this card destroyed a monster, by sending this card to the Graveyard, Special Summon 1 "SQX Tortoise Mark4 LV7" from your hand or Deck. [img]http://img254.imageshack.us/img254/5847/359356.jpg[/img] Lore:This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by the effect of "SQX Tortoise LV5". Sacrifice 1 Monster Card from your hand to the Graveyard to destroy any face-up monster on your opponent's side of the field with an ATK equal to or less than the ATK of the sacrificed monster. [img]http://img259.imageshack.us/img259/5847/359356.jpg[/img] Lore:For every Mechanical monster on your side of the field this card gains 200 ATK and DEF. Sacrifice 1 monster, destroy one monster on your opponent's side of the field. This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by Tributing 1 "SQX Tortoise Mark 4 LV7" on your side of the field. [img]http://img822.imageshack.us/img822/5847/359356.jpg[/img] Lore:This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned from the Deck by Tributing "Steel Titan" equipped with "Liquify" When this monster is destroyed in battle the attacking monster is also destroyed. [img]http://img513.imageshack.us/img513/5847/359356.jpg[/img] Lore:This monster can attack your opponent directly. [img]http://img87.imageshack.us/img87/5847/359356.jpg[/img] Lore:As long as this monster is in play neither player can special summon from the graveyard. This monster can only be destroyed in battle. [/list] [*]Spell / Trap Cards [list=1] [*]Spell Cards [img]http://img593.imageshack.us/img593/3553/359356k.jpg[/img] Lore:Equip this card to a Level 4 or less Mechanical type monster you control. It gains 300 ATK and 500 DEF. If the monster would be destroyed in battle you can send this card to the graveyard instead. [img]http://img402.imageshack.us/img402/1945/359356x.jpg[/img] Lore:Draw a card from your deck. Shuffle your deck afterwords. [img]http://img577.imageshack.us/img577/5847/359356.jpg[/img] Lore:Equip this card onto a Level 4 Or Lower Mechanical type monster you control. That monster can attack your opponent directly. [img]http://img341.imageshack.us/img341/7712/359356c.jpg[/img] As long as this card remains face up all Mechanical type monsters have their levels lowered by 1. [*]Trap Cards [img]http://img517.imageshack.us/img517/5847/359356.jpg[/img] Lore:Equip this card to a face up monster. The Equipped monster gains 200 DEF. When the equipped monster is attacked if it would be destroyed in battle you can destroy this card instead. [img]http://img513.imageshack.us/img513/3029/359356d.jpg[/img] Lore:When your opponent declares an attack on any Mechanical type monster on your side of the field the attacking monster is destroyed and your opponent receives 200 Direct Damage. After activation equip this card onto a Mechanical type monster you control. It Gains 500 DEF. [img]http://img253.imageshack.us/img253/5847/359356.jpg[/img] Lore:Select 1 Monster with atleast 1 Gear-Counter on your opponent's side of the field and take control of that monster. During each of your End Phases Remove 1 Gear-Counter from that controlled monster. If All Gear-Counters are removed destroy the monster and shuffle this card into your deck. [/list] [/list] I worked alot on these cards and would appreciate some feedback as to what corrections may need to be made in both ocg and effects. Suggestions and idle chatter are also appreciated. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Falconclaw Posted February 20, 2011 Report Share Posted February 20, 2011 You're quite creative, but some cards aren't [u]realistic[/u], since "Mechanical" isn't a Type. You can make it an Archetype by the way. And the first card - Steel Titan - is really OP. You should make it LV8, or give it a nasty side-effect which hurts the owner. Junk Golem is also a little OP. There are also a few OCG errors, like : deck=Deck Level4 Or Lower= level 4 or less type= Type It's better to put the Archetype effects first. And also, the effects that would happen first, you write at the beginning. You wrote: For every Mechanical monster on your side of the field this card gains 200 ATK and DEF. Sacrifice 1 monster, destroy one monster on your opponent's side of the field. This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by Tributing 1 "SQX Tortoise Mark 4 LV7" on your side of the field. I'd write: This card cannot be Special Summoned or Set, except by Tributing 1 "SQX Tortoise Mark 4 LV7" on your side of the field. This card gains 200 ATK and DEF for every "Mechanical" monster (if it is an archetype) on your side of the field. You can tribute 1 monster to destroy 1 monster your opponent controls. But you have made quite a nice (arche)type. You could make one effect, all monsters share, and which are reinforced by the Spell and Trap Cards. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HombreDeOro Posted February 20, 2011 Author Report Share Posted February 20, 2011 Thanks appreciate the feedback ill try and fix up those errors Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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