-Live- Posted February 21, 2011 Report Share Posted February 21, 2011 [i]The Rise Of Beasts[/i] is my first set. Currently at 18 cards with more on the way in the near future. I'm still new at this so any feedback is greatly appreciated. Thank you for dropping in to look. Pictures are not mine. [spoiler=Vanillas(1)] [spoiler=Raging Beast] [img]http://img340.imageshack.us/img340/9161/357665.jpg[/img] [/spoiler] [/spoiler] [spoiler=Effect Monsters(] [spoiler=Beast of Blue Lightning] [img]http://img524.imageshack.us/img524/9161/357665.jpg[/img] FLIP: All face up monsters with 1400 attack or less are destroyed.[/spoiler] [spoiler= Guardian of the Nearly Dead] [img]http://img267.imageshack.us/img267/9161/357665.jpg[/img] As long as this card is face-up on your field and your Life Points are below 1000 all Beast, Winged Beast and Beast Warrior-Type monsters gain ATK and DEF equal to your remaining Life Points.[/spoiler] [spoiler=Devil's Purr] [img]http://img405.imageshack.us/img405/9161/357665.jpg[/img] Send this card to the Graveyard to deal 600 directly to your opponent.[/spoiler] [spoiler=Beast Hunter] [img]http://img576.imageshack.us/img576/9161/357665.jpg[/img] Destroy a Beast or Winged Beast-Type monster, that your opponent controls. Add 500 ATK.[/spoiler] [spoiler=Many Color Parrot] [img]http://img402.imageshack.us/img402/9161/357665.jpg[/img] During your Main Phase, you can change this card's attribute.[/spoiler] [spoiler=Energy King Lion][img]http://img80.imageshack.us/img80/9161/357665.jpg[/img] This card can be used as a polymerization card.[/spoiler] [spoiler=Beast Summoner][img]http://img576.imageshack.us/img576/6799/357665b.jpg[/img] Once a turn, during your End Phase, you can pay 200 Life Points to search your Deck for a 1600 ATK or less Beast, Winged Beast, or Beast Warrior-Type monster and play it face-up on your field. As long as a Beast, Winged Beast or Beast Warrior-Type card remains in play this card cannot be destroyed by battle.[/spoiler] [spoiler=Zunre - The Magic Cat][img]http://img443.imageshack.us/img443/9161/357665.jpg[/img] Each time a Magic card is activated add 500 ATK.[/spoiler] [/spoiler] [spoiler=Fusion Monsters(1)] [spoiler=Parrot Griffin] [img]http://img412.imageshack.us/img412/9161/357665.jpg[/img] "Many Color Parrot" + "Energy Lion King" You don't need a polymerization to fuse this monster. Whenever your opponent activates an effect you can use the same effect.[/spoiler] [spoiler=Parrot Griffin(Holo)] [IMG]http://i176.photobucket.com/albums/w192/Fristal_Dragon/yugioh/holoparrotgriffon.png[/IMG] "Many Color Parrot" + "Energy Lion King" You don't need a polymerization to fuse this monster. Whenever your opponent activates an effect you can use the same effect.[/spoiler] [/spoiler] [spoiler=Spells(3)] [spoiler=Beast's Eye] [img]http://img441.imageshack.us/img441/9161/357665.jpg[/img] Can only be equipped to Beast, Winged Beast, or Beast Warrior-Type monsters. If the equipped monster is destroyed, destroy "Beast's Eye" instead.[/spoiler] [spoiler=Beast Forest of Awakening][img]http://img257.imageshack.us/img257/9161/357665.jpg[/img] Once a turn you can Special Summon a Beast, Winged Beast, or Beast Warrior-Type monster from your Graveyard. If the ATK is more than 1500, destroy this card.[/spoiler] [spoiler=Temperment Shift] [img]http://img831.imageshack.us/img831/5496/357665y.jpg[/img] Change the Battle Position of the equipped monster. While this card remains in play the equipped monster's Battle Position cannot be changed. [/spoiler] [/spoiler] [spoiler=Traps(4)] [spoiler=Cry for the Lost] [img]http://img831.imageshack.us/img831/9161/357665.jpg[/img] For each monster you control that is destroyed this turn draw 1 card.[/spoiler] [spoiler=False Skin] [img]http://img403.imageshack.us/img403/9161/357665.jpg[/img] Activate when one of the 3 star or less monsters you control is destroyed. Special Summon a 5 star or less monster from your hand.[/spoiler] [spoiler=Karma] [img]http://img403.imageshack.us/img403/6136/357665f.jpg[/img] Activate when your opponent activates an effect. This card now has that effect.[/spoiler] [spoiler=Self Sacrifice] [img]http://img831.imageshack.us/img831/8774/357665d.jpg[/img] Activate this trap when your opponent declares an attack, choose 1 of the monsters you control (except the defending monster) and destroy it to negate the attack.[/spoiler] [spoiler=Protector] [img]http://img831.imageshack.us/img831/4793/357665c.jpg[/img] Activate this trap when your opponent declares an attack, select 1 of the other monsters you control and designate it as the target of the attack. [/spoiler] [/spoiler] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Archwing Posted February 21, 2011 Report Share Posted February 21, 2011 Ho hum [b]Beast of Blue Lightning[/b] Good pic and name but the effect is OPed and suicidal..... Not worth summoning really..... [b]Beast of the Nearly Dead[/b] Exact opposite, Bland boring pic and strange name but interesting effect..... Also im not sure if they are still as strick but they didnt like having blood in pictures... Also if its nearly dead why dose it still have so much ATK? [b]Devil's Purr [/b] OPed effect but decent pic [b]Raging Beast[/b] Wonderful Pic but OPed effect and it needs some OCG work... [b]Beast Hunter [/b] Decent picture but OPed agian... [b]Many Color Parrot[/b] Eh, looks like a normal parrot to me... Why so much ATK? This parrot could kick Silverfangs @$$..... [b]Energy King Lion[/b] Pic is.... useable but the effect could use alot of OCG work [b]Beast Summoner [/b] Other than the logo on it the pic is fine, Effect is good but it could use some OCG work [b]Zunre - The Magic Cat [/b] Cute pic but HORRIBLE Oped effect..... [b]Parrot Griffin[/b] Okay, now i get the parrot thing.... But the Effect could use alot of tweeking..... [b]Beast's Eye [/b] Eh, i dont get it.... How would its eye protect it from death? [b]Beast Forest of Awakening [/b] Decent..... Some OCG work needed [b]Cry for the Lost [/b] Horribly OPed [b]False Skin[/b] Has nothing to do with beasts and could use some OCG work but other than that its fine.... [b]Karma[/b] How dose that have anything to do with karma? Oped anyway.... [b]Self Sacrifice [/b] OCG needs work but i like the pic Overall a [size="4"][color="#FF8C00"]C[/color][/size] Its average but for your first set its great, i would work on your OCG and balance. Other than that its pretty darn good Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Live- Posted February 21, 2011 Author Report Share Posted February 21, 2011 Thanks for the feedback. It's much appreciated. I will work on fixing the OCG and OP issues. When you say tweeking for Parrot Griffin do you mean OCG or the effect in general? The idea for Beast's Eye is that if a beast is observant it is less likely to be killed. Karma or what goes around comes around. When an effect is used on you it comes back to bite your opponent in the butt. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Live- Posted February 21, 2011 Author Report Share Posted February 21, 2011 Updated some of the cards(fixed some OCG and OP issues). Also added 2 new cards, a trap and a spell. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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n8thegr8 Posted February 24, 2011 Report Share Posted February 24, 2011 Good cards. Cept Im pretty sure the OCG is off on a few. Funny I made a set kinda like this. Called beastie set. Come check it out! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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