thanonyx Posted February 21, 2011 Report Share Posted February 21, 2011 Every protagonist in the Yu-Gi-Oh! series has fused a card with one of their friends except Yusei. Examples include B. Skull Dragon (Yugi & Joey), Dragon Master Knight (Yugi & Kaiba), Dark Flare Knight (Yugi & Joey), Mirage Knight (Yugi & Joey), UFOroid Fighter (Jaden & Syrus), and Rainbow Neos (Jaden & Jesse). But Yusei has none so I made one. I fused his signer dragon with Jack's to create a card that symbolizes their bond. [img]http://img831.imageshack.us/img831/5267/61958a.jpg[/img] [spoiler=lore]"Stardust Dragon" + "Red Dragon Archfiend" When a card effect is activated that destroys a card(s) you can negate and destroy it. When this card successfully destroys a monster in battle destroy all monsters your opponent controls. During the End Phase destroy all face-up monsters you control that did not attack this turn.[/spoiler] If there is anyway to make this card better please do not hesitate to tell me in the comments, I want this card to be perfect beyond all reason, so go ahead and critique, critique, critique. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantom-Duelist Posted February 21, 2011 Report Share Posted February 21, 2011 Good idea but name and effect needs work 5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
thanonyx Posted February 21, 2011 Author Report Share Posted February 21, 2011 [quote name='Phantom-Duelist' timestamp='1298306070' post='5023615'] Good idea but name and effect needs work 5/10 [/quote] Thank you but details man, details! Where in the effect and name needs work? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CDDRodrigo Posted February 21, 2011 Report Share Posted February 21, 2011 Star Red Dragon sounds cooler. The effect is too simple for a fusion of two Synchros. You could add other effect(s). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
thanonyx Posted February 21, 2011 Author Report Share Posted February 21, 2011 [quote name='CDDRodrigo' timestamp='1298313226' post='5023831'] Star Red Dragon sounds cooler. The effect is too simple for a fusion of two Synchros. You could add other effect(s). [/quote] O.K., O.K., good, good. Originally I wanted to call it Red Star Dragon but that had certain....implications. O.K. I tweaked it a little, how is it now? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
thanonyx Posted February 21, 2011 Author Report Share Posted February 21, 2011 bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Near Rivers Posted February 21, 2011 Report Share Posted February 21, 2011 Well, I think you need to work on the effect a bit. First of, why make it's attribute a Dark-Wind combination? The way I see it, that holds no such relevence. I would just keep it Dark. And as for the negating part: Where you trying to mimic Stardust Dragon without making it the same? Cause ya know, you put down that you can Negate the card then destroy 1 card your opponent controls, meaning it can be a completely different card. For example: Opponent summons an EI, and also has 1 monster face-down. You summon Star Red Dragon and attack the face-down. Opponent activates Sakuretsu Armor. You negate it, and destroy the EI. If I was your opponent, I'd be calling Bull. Also, you basically gave it an upgraded version of Red Dragon Archfiend's effect, minus the drawbacks to you. I would adjust it a bit. Great idea, though. I would also work on the name. I would've chosen Red Star Dragon, but you already stated you didn't want that, this really isn't a better option, and doesn't look like much thought was put into it. You could try experimenting with other possibilities, such as "Red Dragon of the Stars." j/s. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
thanonyx Posted February 22, 2011 Author Report Share Posted February 22, 2011 Tweaked it again. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
thanonyx Posted February 23, 2011 Author Report Share Posted February 23, 2011 [font="Arial Black"][size="7"][u][i][b]bump[/b][/i][/u][/size][/font] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Lightray Daedalus- Posted February 23, 2011 Report Share Posted February 23, 2011 Crisom Star Dragon First effect is Broken Second is RDA's effect pasted in.... Make something original twist them like they do in their Evolved froms (/Busters; Savior; Scar-Red; Shooting) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
judedudemude Posted February 23, 2011 Report Share Posted February 23, 2011 please add lore or i will not rate (sorry not my policy just judedudemude policy) you just combined the 2 effects together (non orignal idea really) picture is really lame (but you are forgiven on that) make it were it can only be summon by fusion summon (as a way to balanced it) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
thanonyx Posted February 24, 2011 Author Report Share Posted February 24, 2011 lore added Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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