Asert333 Posted February 21, 2011 Report Share Posted February 21, 2011 hey these are just a few cards i made, I hope this works... [img]http://img580.imageshack.us/img580/6577/367122j.jpg[/img] [img]http://img267.imageshack.us/img267/3003/367122.jpg[/img] ok here are the new edited editions I hope they are better thx again for the advice! also goodnight you said that i posted these wihtout taking advice, if you will look i posted these at 3:06, the advice was posted at 3:44 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Goodnight Posted February 21, 2011 Report Share Posted February 21, 2011 I urge you to look at other examples of other created cards, or ACTUAL yugioh cards before continuing to make any more cards. There are way too many errors to even note. 0/9999 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Holly and the Ivy Posted February 21, 2011 Report Share Posted February 21, 2011 [quote]I urge you to look at other examples of other created cards, or ACTUAL yugioh cards before continuing to make any more cards. There are way too many errors to even note. 0/9999[/quote] I'll list them for you. World destruction should be a ritual spell card. Your monster should be a ritual monster. You shouldn't put where you got the image from on the card. The most you should give a monster in terms of original ATK and DEF points is 5000. The" This card can only be summoned..." is part of the effect. You need to put what level the monsters you sacrifice should total. Take out the bit in brackets in "Destroyer of Worlds". Instead of "...graveyard and you may..." put "...graveyard. You may...". Use different Set IDs. Finally, the effect is too powerful. Make it so that, for example, "When this card is summoned, your opponent discards 10 random cards from their deck" Which is still powerful but not as insanely powerful. So you know, I am doing this to help you. I don't intentionally find new people and demotivate them. Keep trying and it is quite likely you can make a card better than anyone else's. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Stardust_Rose_Dragon Posted February 21, 2011 Report Share Posted February 21, 2011 World Destruction Should be a Ritual Spell, like this example I made: [spoiler=Ritual Spell][IMG]http://i1108.photobucket.com/albums/h416/AliceTheEgyptianPrincess/Yugioh%20Cards/BackToThePast.jpg[/IMG][/spoiler] And Destroyer of Worlds should be a Ritual/ Effect Monster, like this example I made: [spoiler=Ritual Monster][IMG]http://i1108.photobucket.com/albums/h416/AliceTheEgyptianPrincess/Yugioh%20Cards/PharaohAtem.jpg[/IMG][/spoiler] Also, leave the notes off of the cards and put the effect of Destroyer of Worlds off in normal text as well (Lore). Destroyer of Worlds is REALLY OP'ed though. I just repeated what The Holly and The Ivy said, pretty much. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Holly and the Ivy Posted February 21, 2011 Report Share Posted February 21, 2011 And Goodnight, you didn't have to go for 0/9999. I'd go for 1/10. After all, they are pretty good pictures. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Goodnight Posted February 21, 2011 Report Share Posted February 21, 2011 I wouldn't have normally, but he had already made a thread prior and people in that thread told him what he was doing wrong. Instead of taking advice, he turned around and posted more of the same. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Asert333 Posted February 22, 2011 Author Report Share Posted February 22, 2011 thx for the advice though as for him being too strong i did that on purpose, he wasnt suposed to be very realistic but I will work on them some more. id like to post a few more I made I hope everyone thinks they are good [img]http://img576.imageshack.us/img576/9787/367122t.jpg[/img] [img]http://img814.imageshack.us/img814/3003/367122.jpg[/img] [img]http://img262.imageshack.us/img262/8430/367122v.jpg[/img] [img]http://img208.imageshack.us/img208/3003/367122.jpg[/img] [img]http://img337.imageshack.us/img337/3003/367122.jpg[/img] [img]http://img291.imageshack.us/img291/5867/367122m.jpg[/img] [img]http://img291.imageshack.us/img291/9194/367122g.jpg[/img] [img]http://img252.imageshack.us/img252/3003/367122.jpg[/img] [img]http://img215.imageshack.us/img215/5610/367122q.jpg[/img] [img]http://img823.imageshack.us/img823/3003/367122.jpg[/img] all advice is appriciated thx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Stardust_Rose_Dragon Posted February 22, 2011 Report Share Posted February 22, 2011 I would just like to advise: Giant Golem shouldn't be a Level 5 with 5000 Attack and Defence. If you want to keep Giant Golem's Attack and Defence the same, I would recommend making it a Level 11 or even 12. But if you want to keep its Level at 5, make the Attack/Defence around 2700/2500. I have to admit almost all of them have that problem, but change the Level or ATK/DEF, and you are good to go. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Asert333 Posted February 22, 2011 Author Report Share Posted February 22, 2011 thx i will do that Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Stardust_Rose_Dragon Posted February 22, 2011 Report Share Posted February 22, 2011 They all look great. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AsterikcAde Posted February 22, 2011 Report Share Posted February 22, 2011 Did you made a mistake and forgot to make the second card a Ritual Monster card or what? Because vanillas aren't ritual monsters, and Divine-Beast Type Monsters can't have any other Attribute except for the Divine Attribute. OCG is kinda off and the effects seem too bland, and don't create your own types for your monster cards, if you want the official list of types for monsters, go to Yu Gi Oh Wiki. Since you are a new member I won't be an ass to you, just take my suggestions and work better on your future cards. 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Amis123 Posted February 23, 2011 Report Share Posted February 23, 2011 This is one that I have made: [img]http://img341.imageshack.us/img341/9219/157871v.jpg[/img] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Asert333 Posted February 23, 2011 Author Report Share Posted February 23, 2011 as you can see im a newb so what i say probably doesnt count for much but id give it 7/10 because as Astrikcade said you cant make your own type, that would probably be a sea serpent but as i said im still new too so... plus it looks like it has more than three heads Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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