Queen Moon Posted February 2, 2008 Report Share Posted February 2, 2008 got better quality pictureplease tell me if there are any ocg errors Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lucas Maximus Posted February 2, 2008 Report Share Posted February 2, 2008 The picture is not very good and the effect is really badly worded with bad OCG and Grammar errors all over the shop. Still ok attempt. 4.1/10 ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Queen Moon Posted February 2, 2008 Author Report Share Posted February 2, 2008 The picture is not very good and the effect is really badly worded with bad OCG and Grammar errors all over the shop. Still ok attempt. 4.1/10 ^_^ ill try to fix the pic but could you tell me osme of the ocg erros Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
zachy_syko Posted February 2, 2008 Report Share Posted February 2, 2008 the ocg should be something like (im not sure if its 100% correct, but its an improvement at least :) )Once per turn, during your Attack Phase, you can remove 1 DARK monster in play on your side of the field and add 1 "Shadow Counter" card to 1 DARK monster. This card increases the monster's ATK by 400 points. When this card is destroyed, all monsters with "Shadow Counter" equipped on the field are destroyed.Its not perfect but hey its a start :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lucas Maximus Posted February 2, 2008 Report Share Posted February 2, 2008 ^_^ I dont need to tell you the OCG errors, i think zachy just did it all, lol. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Queen Moon Posted February 2, 2008 Author Report Share Posted February 2, 2008 the ocg should be something like (im not sure if its 100% correct' date=' but its an improvement at least :) )Once per turn, during your Attack Phase, you can remove 1 DARK monster in play on your side of the field and add 1 "Shadow Counter" card to 1 DARK monster. This card increases the monster's ATK by 400 points. When this card is destroyed, all monsters with "Shadow Counter" equipped on the field are destroyed.Its not perfect but hey its a start :)[/quote']Attack Phase does not exist Shadow Counter does not need " look at a vemon monster plus the the cards gain 400 ATK per counter Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
zachy_syko Posted February 2, 2008 Report Share Posted February 2, 2008 the ocg should be something like (im not sure if its 100% correct' date=' but its an improvement at least :) )Once per turn, during your Attack Phase, you can remove 1 DARK monster in play on your side of the field and add 1 "Shadow Counter" card to 1 DARK monster. This card increases the monster's ATK by 400 points. When this card is destroyed, all monsters with "Shadow Counter" equipped on the field are destroyed.Its not perfect but hey its a start :)[/quote']Attack Phase does not exist Shadow Counter does not need " look at a vemon monster plus the the cards gain 400 ATK per counter told ya it wouldn't be perfect. and you really didn't explain it. is shadow counter another card cause if it is u need quotations, just like on a fusion card or special summon card. and i misread the part bout the 400 pts sorry but i toldya it wasnt 100% perfect :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RestLess-BoTics Posted February 2, 2008 Report Share Posted February 2, 2008 Once you improve on your grammar and use of pictures, your card will be about perfect! For effort, you did a pretty good job! Next time, just put in a little more time in making your cards, in order to receive higher ratings and opinions from other members. Keep up the good work! :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
werid090 Posted February 2, 2008 Report Share Posted February 2, 2008 lol tunr nice but 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Junk Raver Posted February 2, 2008 Report Share Posted February 2, 2008 They all said it ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cyber Altair Posted February 2, 2008 Report Share Posted February 2, 2008 it would be better if it was a field, but then again it would be a bit more overpowered. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
James13 Posted February 2, 2008 Report Share Posted February 2, 2008 this is a pretty good card 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bloo-D Posted February 2, 2008 Report Share Posted February 2, 2008 OCG errors, grammatical errors, spelling errors, and you replaced Shadow "Conter" with Dark Counter. 5/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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