ElChe7192 Posted February 2, 2008 Report Share Posted February 2, 2008 Hi, I am new here, and i am new at making cards, so they may not come out as good as some of the stuff around here, but here is my first card, based after the mechanic heartless from kingdom heartshope you guys like it: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Megayanma Posted February 2, 2008 Report Share Posted February 2, 2008 This should maybe be moved. Very good card though, good pic, some OCG errors, but very good overall! 8.1/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ElChe7192 Posted February 2, 2008 Author Report Share Posted February 2, 2008 thanks, it goes int he pop culture section right? sorry xDi feel like such a newb Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
zachy_syko Posted February 2, 2008 Report Share Posted February 2, 2008 no id count this as realistic so i think its in the right sec. not bad at all. just with the effect state what type of summon, eg. normal, special, ritual, etc. besides from that 7/10 great for a newbie :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Megayanma Posted February 2, 2008 Report Share Posted February 2, 2008 Probably Normal Summoned or Set. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kid Posted February 2, 2008 Report Share Posted February 2, 2008 pretty good Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lucas Maximus Posted February 2, 2008 Report Share Posted February 2, 2008 Hey i just posted a comment on this thread in the other section? Well, it seems to me that you have posted this thread twice, in two different sections.Still, i'll say it again this card is really nice. ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ElChe7192 Posted February 2, 2008 Author Report Share Posted February 2, 2008 yea, i was confused as to where to put it, cause i didn;t see the pop culture thread, and i posted on here firstbut then zachy said that it belonged here, and it was all so confusing! xD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
werid090 Posted February 2, 2008 Report Share Posted February 2, 2008 ok the wrong section who cares and its not that bad of a card keep up the good work i like it and the pic!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ElChe7192 Posted February 2, 2008 Author Report Share Posted February 2, 2008 how's this one:its a knight heartless, with a twista little customized, so enjoy: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Megayanma Posted February 2, 2008 Report Share Posted February 2, 2008 The new one is awsome! 9.6/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ElChe7192 Posted February 2, 2008 Author Report Share Posted February 2, 2008 My first trap card:If i made any mistakes with the wording of the effect, let me know =] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
werid090 Posted February 2, 2008 Report Share Posted February 2, 2008 ok just get rid of the trap it suck then stop putting things as an attchement its annoying and im lazy lol get a photobucket and use the img code lol then the other one has some ocg errors but the effect is about the same and the pic is not too good so 2/10 but good try i like that lol and ur just right there but need to get alittle better Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Megayanma Posted February 2, 2008 Report Share Posted February 2, 2008 It is a bit overpowered. It should say something like "Special Summon one Monster with "Heartless" in it's name with 1500 ATK or less." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RestLess-BoTics Posted February 2, 2008 Report Share Posted February 2, 2008 A little plain, but I can see the effort put into this. Also, try editing the picture to remove the words, which gives you higher ratings from other members. For effort, you did a pretty good job! Keep up the great work! If you need any help, or if you have any questions, feel free to private message me. :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ElChe7192 Posted February 2, 2008 Author Report Share Posted February 2, 2008 how about this:i know, a bit repetitive with the effect, but its sort of like a trend, to capture the illusion that the heartless never stopped coming, like in then gamei will remove the trap then Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Megayanma Posted February 2, 2008 Report Share Posted February 2, 2008 Very very good! 9.8/10! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Junk Raver Posted February 2, 2008 Report Share Posted February 2, 2008 Yes this is the wrong section Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kizzi Posted February 2, 2008 Report Share Posted February 2, 2008 Really cool! Except for the broken trap... :/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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