Dragon_Creater Posted February 22, 2011 Report Share Posted February 22, 2011 [center][size="3"][img]http://img443.imageshack.us/img443/4599/353401a.jpg[/img][/size][/center] This card cannot be Special Summoned Except by Tributing any number of Monster cards from your field. This card stays on the field for the number of cards used to Special Summon this card. This cards ATK is equal to the number of Monsters cards Tributed to Summon this card x1000. When this card destroys a Monster as a result of battle your opponent takes damage equal to halve the monsters original ATK. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
n8thegr8 Posted February 22, 2011 Report Share Posted February 22, 2011 The picture looks great and the effect is unique. I like how you balanced it out by making it only last by how many monsters were tributed to summon it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dementuo Posted February 22, 2011 Report Share Posted February 22, 2011 Quick suggestion for better OCG. For every monster tributed to summon this card, place one Tribute counter on this card. During each of your End Phases, remove a Tribute Counter. If you cannot, then send this card to the Graveyard. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dragon_Creater Posted February 22, 2011 Author Report Share Posted February 22, 2011 [quote name='Dementuo' timestamp='1298355081' post='5025684'] Quick suggestion for better OCG. For every monster tributed to summon this card, place one Tribute counter on this card. During each of your End Phases, remove a Tribute Counter. If you cannot, then send this card to the Graveyard. [/quote] i still like what i have i like your suggestion but i still like it but i dont like it 1. that if it were real it would kinda be messy lol and 2 it can work for some spell and trap cards right away if the cards are in your graveyard so im not saying its bad just i would rather keep the one already on it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Boss Z Posted February 22, 2011 Report Share Posted February 22, 2011 [quote name='Isaac_cardmaker5' timestamp='1298411566' post='5027189'] i still like what i have i like your suggestion but i still like it but i dont like it 1. that if it were real it would kinda be messy lol and 2 it can work for some spell and trap cards right away if the cards are in your graveyard so im not saying its bad just i would rather keep the one already on it [/quote] WRONG, listen to the wolf thingy with the magical paintbrush and stuffz I'm not a master with OCG, but you are WRONG in thinking what you have is good... you do not have to have counters but it would be much easier to write proper OCG for this card if you do use counters This card cannot be Special Summoned Except by Tributing any number of Monster cards from your field. [b]Place 1 "??? Counter" on this card for each monster used to Tribute Summon this card. Once per turn, during your End Phase remove 1 "??? Counter" from this card. When there are no "??? Counters" on this card, this card is destroyed. [i](this last sentence could be changed for "If you can not, this card is destroyed")[/i][/b] This cards ATK is equal to the number of Monsters cards Tributed to Summon this card [b]x 1000[/b]. When this card destroys a Monster as a result of battle your opponent takes damage equal to halve the monsters original ATK. Then it would be much more OCG correct... but that is not perfect because my OCG isn't perfect, lol I used "???" for the counter because you need to name them... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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