♫♪GoldenBoy♪♫ Posted February 22, 2011 Report Share Posted February 22, 2011 [center][IMG]http://i756.photobucket.com/albums/xx203/Sawoe/CSD-1.jpg[/IMG] [spoiler=Lore]“Cyber Dragon” + 2 or more Level 5 or higer Warrior-Type monster(s) This card cannot be Special Summoned except by Fusion Summon. This card’s ATK and DEF are equal to the number of Monsters used to Fusion Summon it x900. This card can attack twice per Battle Phase. If this card declares a direct attack on your opponent that Battle Damage is halved. If this card is seleceted as an attack target you pay 1200 Life Points to negate that attack and destroy the attacking monter. When this card is removed from the field add 1 “Cyber Dragon” in your Graveyard to your hand. This card inflicts Piercing Damage.[/spoiler] [color="#C0C0C0"][size="1"][i][b]Image Credit belongs to [url="http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/user/117231-kai-hiwatari/"].:Kai Hiwatari:.[/url][/b][/i][/size][/color] Please comment T.T[/center] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
:bcoe Posted February 23, 2011 Report Share Posted February 23, 2011 First of all its a bit messy, there are way too many effects and specific summoning conditions - 2 level 5 warriors?- (Chimeratech Fortress dragon does this, but better) This card cannot be Special Summoned except by Fusion Summon. - meh This card’s ATK and DEF are equal to the number of Monsters used to Fusion Summon it x900. - basically 2700, if you can get it out - Chimeratech is 1000 per card. This card can attack twice per Battle Phase. - Cyber Twin Dragon - same effect, easier summoning conditions, with 2800 ATK. If this card declares a direct attack on your opponent that Battle Damage is halved. why, this card is impossible to get out - again twin dragon If this card is seleceted as an attack target you pay 1200 Life Points to negate that attack and destroy the attacking monter. Too many offensive effects to add in a defensive effect, your trying to make the card too self contained, let it have some weaknesses and some clear strengths. When this card is removed from the field add 1 “Cyber Dragon” in your Graveyard to your hand. - not bad since the summoning conditions make it really hard to get it out This card inflicts Piercing Damage. - too much. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♫♪GoldenBoy♪♫ Posted February 23, 2011 Author Report Share Posted February 23, 2011 [quote name='aaaaabbbbb' timestamp='1298420848' post='5027669'] First of all its a bit messy, there are way too many effects and specific summoning conditions - 2 level 5 warriors?- (Chimeratech Fortress dragon does this, but better) This card cannot be Special Summoned except by Fusion Summon. - meh This card’s ATK and DEF are equal to the number of Monsters used to Fusion Summon it x900. - basically 2700, if you can get it out - Chimeratech is 1000 per card. This card can attack twice per Battle Phase. - Cyber Twin Dragon - same effect, easier summoning conditions, with 2800 ATK. If this card declares a direct attack on your opponent that Battle Damage is halved. why, this card is impossible to get out - again twin dragon If this card is seleceted as an attack target you pay 1200 Life Points to negate that attack and destroy the attacking monter. Too many offensive effects to add in a defensive effect, your trying to make the card too self contained, let it have some weaknesses and some clear strengths. When this card is removed from the field add 1 “Cyber Dragon” in your Graveyard to your hand. - not bad since the summoning conditions make it really hard to get it out This card inflicts Piercing Damage. - too much. [/quote] This card would be rather easy to get out In your Basic Cyber Warrior Deck (Cyber Dragons + The Warrior Archetype) as you can synchro summon rather quickly to get you Junk Warrior and Such plus Cyber Dragon is rather easy to get out or can simply be replaced Proto-Cyber Dragon. And you also seem to forget Fusion can take cards from the field AND hand. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
†Marksman† Posted February 23, 2011 Report Share Posted February 23, 2011 I see as this would support any 'Cyber' decks. Especially with the card 'Cyber Dragon.' I love this card. I believe the idea of using cyber dragon for even MORE is a good idea. Makes more power of the card. Anywho, I'm going to actually show you how I found this in my rating.. (See bold letters for what you want to see) Name(Don't know why I'm rating): It seems original, I like it. Sounds SUPER cool, if you ask me. 10/10 For sure. Idea: Like I said above, I love the idea of using cyber dragon as fusion material, to become of this card. 10/10, for sure. Picture: One question. Where do you get your pictures? They always match your names and what else is needed to use the card. This meaning of course, I like it. 10/10. For sure... OCG: I don't see as theres any OCG errors on this card, so that won't effect anything. Solid OCG my friend 10/10. [b]Effect: As I said WAYYY above, this supports cyber decks, exclusively the cyber dragon card. So, I love the effect, it's balanced and seems powerful. 10/10, for sure.[/b] [b]Overall: Well, this one is easily found. All of these are 10/10s. You add them together, and you get - 50/50. (Rated 5 things) As it supports so many things, I'm forced to like it. Great job my friend. 10/10.[/b] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♫♪GoldenBoy♪♫ Posted February 23, 2011 Author Report Share Posted February 23, 2011 [quote name='†Marksman†' timestamp='1298425774' post='5027878'] I see as this would support any 'Cyber' decks. Especially with the card 'Cyber Dragon.' I love this card. I believe the idea of using cyber dragon for even MORE is a good idea. Makes more power of the card. Anywho, I'm going to actually show you how I found this in my rating.. (See bold letters for what you want to see) Name(Don't know why I'm rating): It seems original, I like it. Sounds SUPER cool, if you ask me. 10/10 For sure. Idea: Like I said above, I love the idea of using cyber dragon as fusion material, to become of this card. 10/10, for sure. Picture: One question. Where do you get your pictures? They always match your names and what else is needed to use the card. This meaning of course, I like it. 10/10. For sure... OCG: I don't see as theres any OCG errors on this card, so that won't effect anything. Solid OCG my friend 10/10. [b]Effect: As I said WAYYY above, this supports cyber decks, exclusively the cyber dragon card. So, I love the effect, it's balanced and seems powerful. 10/10, for sure.[/b] [b]Overall: Well, this one is easily found. All of these are 10/10s. You add them together, and you get - 50/50. (Rated 5 things) As it supports so many things, I'm forced to like it. Great job my friend. 10/10.[/b] [/quote] Thanks and I got this picture from Kai's image archive Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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:bcoe Posted February 23, 2011 Report Share Posted February 23, 2011 [quote name='.::Gold::.' timestamp='1298422831' post='5027756'] This card would be rather easy to get out In your Basic Cyber Warrior Deck (Cyber Dragons + The Warrior Archetype) as you can synchro summon rather quickly to get you Junk Warrior and Such plus Cyber Dragon is rather easy to get out or can simply be replaced Proto-Cyber Dragon. And you also seem to forget Fusion can take cards from the field AND hand. [/quote] Sorry if I came across a bit cranky in that review, was tired at that stage. Still I stand by what I said, and no, even with the fact you can use material from your hand, its still too awkward and expensive. It would mean discarding loads of cards and having to fill your deck with 5+ monsters. With the tuning mechanic, level 4 and lower monsters are much better and easier. Regardless of its summoning conditions the cards still needs work, you've got too many effects. "[If this card is seleceted as an attack target you pay 1200 Life Points to negate that attack and destroy the attacking monter.] Too many offensive effects to add in a defensive effect, your trying to make the card too self contained, let it have some weaknesses and some clear strengths." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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