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the spell card is a contradiction in itself. it cancels out its own effect
the second card is much too high of an attack power for just 2 tributes and also even if you did manage to use it someone would just use bottomless to pop it right off the field
OCG is off but im not gona go into that
also when you are making a monster card with an effect theres an option for effect monsters
all in all its about halfway there. my rating 5/10 especially bc i can tell you put some work into this
im not an expert in OCG so dont ask me how to explain the errors but if you want send me a PM anytime and ill help the best i can. i know some good ppl on the site who would be more than happy to help you
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