ttodd1031 Posted February 24, 2011 Report Share Posted February 24, 2011 [img]http://img338.imageshack.us/img338/5932/368742.jpg[/img] Booster- [img]http://img651.imageshack.us/img651/5932/368742.jpg[/img] The aid card [img]http://img695.imageshack.us/img695/5932/368742.jpg[/img] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
n8thegr8 Posted February 24, 2011 Report Share Posted February 24, 2011 Ok lets get started. For the first one usuall light monsters aren't fiends so I would maybe make it a warrior or something like that. The first two pics aren't that good. Try to get higher quality ones like the last one with a better background. For the second card the OCG is ok except for [b]When it is, [/b] just take that out. the third card doesn't make a lot of sense. Why would you discard cards to destroy your own monster? So I would change it to [b]This card cannot be destroyed as a result of battle. This card can also not be used as a tribute for a Tribute summon.[/b] (Im not the best at OCG so the second sentence might be wrong.) But for a newer member these aren't too bad. I mean unique idea. so 5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AsterikcAde Posted February 24, 2011 Report Share Posted February 24, 2011 LOL! I made a Rabbit monster card too! It's in my FEED YOUR HEAD post, you can go check it out if you want to! Anyways, your OCG is...meh...these cards to me IMO seem too plain, they need a spark to them for me to give you a nice constructive comment, I see no creativity here at all and I usually rate on creativity of the effects so...4/10, keep working on it. ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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