Valkyrus Posted February 25, 2011 Report Share Posted February 25, 2011 I decided to make a Trap Monster card deck focused on Trap cards similar to "Embodiment of Apophis" but with more variants and supporting cards~ I've only got a few cards ready but I hope they seem promising. so here they are~ [img]http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb278/mario1092/kyuurinb.jpg[/img] [img]http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb278/mario1092/seca.jpg[/img] [img]http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb278/mario1092/cb.jpg[/img] [img]http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb278/mario1092/SG1.jpg[/img] [img]http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb278/mario1092/chibola.jpg[/img] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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SgtExell Posted February 26, 2011 Report Share Posted February 26, 2011 Why are the cards so massive.... anyway I like them. Not overpowered, OCG may be a little off like with "the opponent recieves damage", I guess thats to the life points? I havent done this in a while but yeh nice 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Valkyrus Posted February 26, 2011 Author Report Share Posted February 26, 2011 [quote name='SgtExell' timestamp='1298712138' post='5035692'] Why are the cards so massive.... anyway I like them. Not overpowered, OCG may be a little off like with "the opponent recieves damage", I guess thats to the life points? I havent done this in a while but yeh nice 7/10 [/quote] Thanks! Well, they're that big because of the template I used and I just forgot to resize them~ And yeah, the damage is to the life points ^^ thanks for the rating~[quote name='SgtExell' timestamp='1298712138' post='5035692'] Why are the cards so massive.... anyway I like them. Not overpowered, OCG may be a little off like with "the opponent recieves damage", I guess thats to the life points? I havent done this in a while but yeh nice 7/10 [/quote] Thanks! Well, they're that big because of the template I used and I just forgot to resize them~ And yeah, the damage is to the life points ^^ thanks for the rating~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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Lexadin Posted February 27, 2011 Report Share Posted February 27, 2011 [center]HOLY! These cards are WAY too big. Anyway, lets start rating them. [b]Kyuurin the Tin Doll[/b] Besides being creepy the pic's fine. The "The" in the name should be uncapsed though. [i]Opponent[/i] = [i]opponent[/i]. BEside that the OCG looks fine. The effect is kinda UP, as it is formilated in such a matter that you'll have too discard Trap Cards every turn, giving you a severe hand disadvantige. If you would make that a choice, it should be fine, can give your opponent quite the scare. A 8/10, after fixes. [b]Verana Seca, Empress of Terra[/b] Img and name are fine. OCG fix: [i]Increase this cards' ATK by 100 for each Spell or Trap Card on the field. Once per turn, you can treat this card's ATK and DEF to 0, to add 3 cards to your hand. During each of your End Phases, if you have cards in your hand, remove this card from play.[/i] Ok this aswell is severly UP. The Spell/Trap boost is pretty nice, however the hand limit is rediculous. The 2 tributes needed for this card's Summon should be enough ballancing. A 7.9/10 after fixes. [b]Chroniac Berserker[/b] Img is good. And the name is fitting. [i]trap card[/i] = [i]Trap Card[/i]. Otherwise the OCG looks ok. I really like this card, it's both enoing as ballanced. Nothing to note about it. A 9.5/10 after fixes. [b]Speed Gambit[/b] Excelent img. And a perfectly fitting name. [i]deck[/i] = [i]Deck[/i], ...[i]to bring back this card in face-up position on your side of the field.[/i] = [i]to return this card to your side of the field in face-up Attack Position.[/i] I like the idea, it's a handy Trap Monster returner, and the riveval option isn't bad either. A 10/10 after being fixed. I'll skip the ritual, since it has no Ritual Spell. [/center] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Valkyrus Posted February 28, 2011 Author Report Share Posted February 28, 2011 [quote name='Lexadin' timestamp='1298824379' post='5038393'] [center]HOLY! These cards are WAY too big. Anyway, lets start rating them. [b]Kyuurin the Tin Doll[/b] Besides being creepy the pic's fine. The "The" in the name should be uncapsed though. [i]Opponent[/i] = [i]opponent[/i]. BEside that the OCG looks fine. The effect is kinda UP, as it is formilated in such a matter that you'll have too discard Trap Cards every turn, giving you a severe hand disadvantige. If you would make that a choice, it should be fine, can give your opponent quite the scare. A 8/10, after fixes. [b]Verana Seca, Empress of Terra[/b] Img and name are fine. OCG fix: [i]Increase this cards' ATK by 100 for each Spell or Trap Card on the field. Once per turn, you can treat this card's ATK and DEF to 0, to add 3 cards to your hand. During each of your End Phases, if you have cards in your hand, remove this card from play.[/i] Ok this aswell is severly UP. The Spell/Trap boost is pretty nice, however the hand limit is rediculous. The 2 tributes needed for this card's Summon should be enough ballancing. A 7.9/10 after fixes. [b]Chroniac Berserker[/b] Img is good. And the name is fitting. [i]trap card[/i] = [i]Trap Card[/i]. Otherwise the OCG looks ok. I really like this card, it's both enoing as ballanced. Nothing to note about it. A 9.5/10 after fixes. [b]Speed Gambit[/b] Excelent img. And a perfectly fitting name. [i]deck[/i] = [i]Deck[/i], ...[i]to bring back this card in face-up position on your side of the field.[/i] = [i]to return this card to your side of the field in face-up Attack Position.[/i] I like the idea, it's a handy Trap Monster returner, and the riveval option isn't bad either. A 10/10 after being fixed. I'll skip the ritual, since it has no Ritual Spell. [/center] [/quote] Oh! Thank you so much for the review! ^^ About Kyuurin the Tin Doll, yeah, I don't know why I forgot to add it's a choice whether you want to discard trap cards from your hand but that was my general idea! About Verana Seca, yeah I guess you're right...ummm, maybe if it said if those three cards are still in your hand? Instead of all of the cards in your hand? This way you'd just have to use those 3 cards the same turn or destroy the monster. Thanks for the high ratings on the other ones too! ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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