Ichigo6000 Posted February 26, 2011 Report Share Posted February 26, 2011 I made this card on my other account as well but the picture was diffrent and my OCG was off too ( hopefully I did better this time) [img]http://img641.imageshack.us/img641/9171/369878.jpg[/img] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nicο Posted February 26, 2011 Report Share Posted February 26, 2011 The life points should be Life Points, maybe you should say "This card gains ATK equal to the amount of Life Points the controller of this card loses." Not too sure about the second effect but i'm trying here. "A monster that destroys this card as a result of battle cannot attack for your opponents next 3 turns." This is only what I believe to work better and now that I think about it, I probably made the second effect better, I am not sure about the first one. Awesome Pikachu card! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ichigo5000 Posted February 26, 2011 Report Share Posted February 26, 2011 [quote name='StarS 4' timestamp='1298735141' post='5036110'] The life points should be Life Points, maybe you should say "This card gains ATK equal to the amount of Life Points the controller of this card loses." Not too sure about the second effect but i'm trying here. "A monster that destroys this card as a result of battle cannot attack for your opponents next 3 turns." This is only what I believe to work better and now that I think about it, I probably made the second effect better, I am not sure about the first one. Awesome Pikachu card! [/quote] Well Pikachu seems to be awesomly strong when his friends need him the most so that's the point I'm trying to make with the first effect thanks for telling me how I can correct it[quote name='Ichigo6000' timestamp='1298679645' post='5034414'] I made this card on my other account as well but the picture was diffrent and my OCG was off too ( hopefully I did better this time) [img]http://img641.imageshack.us/img641/9171/369878.jpg[/img] [/quote] [img]http://img88.imageshack.us/img88/818/369867.jpg[/img] here's the fixed version for some reason I can't edit that post Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nicο Posted February 26, 2011 Report Share Posted February 26, 2011 You forgot to take out part of the quotation, but great! Maybe because your using a 5000 acount and not a 6000 one. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lightning Posted February 26, 2011 Report Share Posted February 26, 2011 [quote name='StarS 4' timestamp='1298739244' post='5036214'] You forgot to take out part of the quotation, but great! Maybe because your using a 5000 acount and not a 6000 one. [/quote] Well the 5000 one was the one I made first but it would'nt work for some reason so I made a 6000 one both these will be deleated soon this is my original account I had trouble remembering my username and password which is why I made a new account but I spoke with a super moderator about it so hopefully this will all be streghtned out by tommorow Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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