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Starter Deck: Eternal Devoution


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Eternal Devoution introduces the "Eternal" Archetype, considered to be God's deck, a deck of many strengths, made up cards of the heavens, the earth, and the hell. This deck is said to evolve as the person using it grows stronger with each duel. Each monster is based on different mythos and tales, and each with an effect activated based on a certain condition:

LIGHT: Card controlled in one's Spell/Trap Card Zone
EARTH: You control another "Eternal" monster
DARK: An "Eternal" monster is in your Graveyard

I also made sure to include a small bit of general support instead of just all archetype support. And yes I know the wording on the Synchros is slightly different than the other monsters, I had a reason

So tell me what you think

PS, don't mind the Scr-y-ed references
Monsters:

[IMG]http://i53.tinypic.com/5vq74p.jpg[/IMG] [IMG]http://i54.tinypic.com/2uylkdu.jpg[/IMG] [IMG]http://i55.tinypic.com/o9gy2b.jpg[/IMG]
[IMG]http://i55.tinypic.com/16hvqtj.jpg[/IMG] [IMG]http://i56.tinypic.com/hsv0cp.jpg[/IMG] [IMG]http://i52.tinypic.com/10qa2jp.jpg[/IMG]
[IMG]http://i55.tinypic.com/s6m1is.jpg[/IMG] [IMG]http://i56.tinypic.com/30bz9kj.jpg[/IMG] [IMG]http://i55.tinypic.com/2qbdczq.jpg[/IMG]
[IMG]http://i56.tinypic.com/10rp9gi.jpg[/IMG] [IMG]http://i55.tinypic.com/2h2gv9f.jpg[/IMG] [IMG]http://i53.tinypic.com/e5kaz4.jpg[/IMG]
[IMG]http://i56.tinypic.com/vztzbn.jpg[/IMG] [IMG]http://i52.tinypic.com/von9dw.jpg[/IMG] [IMG]http://i54.tinypic.com/260ek9j.jpg[/IMG]
[IMG]http://i56.tinypic.com/14kfg5w.jpg[/IMG] [IMG]http://i54.tinypic.com/15qysno.jpg[/IMG] [IMG]http://i56.tinypic.com/2rmsflv.jpg[/IMG]

Spells:
[IMG]http://i52.tinypic.com/avk65g.jpg[/IMG] [IMG]http://i51.tinypic.com/2z6un9g.jpg[/IMG] [IMG]http://i51.tinypic.com/kafntl.jpg[/IMG]
[IMG]http://i53.tinypic.com/esqotu.jpg[/IMG] [IMG]http://i52.tinypic.com/2ds3029.jpg[/IMG] [IMG]http://i56.tinypic.com/2ekqczo.jpg[/IMG]
[IMG]http://i55.tinypic.com/2502yoj.jpg[/IMG] [IMG]http://i55.tinypic.com/dsk6w.jpg[/IMG] [IMG]http://i55.tinypic.com/1z2gjrr.jpg[/IMG]
[IMG]http://i52.tinypic.com/95ya6o.jpg[/IMG] [IMG]http://i56.tinypic.com/mtqr9s.jpg[/IMG] [IMG]http://i54.tinypic.com/22jiwg.jpg[/IMG]
[IMG]http://i52.tinypic.com/1sh7rt.jpg[/IMG] [IMG]http://i56.tinypic.com/j6mydg.jpg[/IMG] [IMG]http://i52.tinypic.com/14df5oj.jpg[/IMG]

Traps:
[IMG]http://i55.tinypic.com/nmi6qf.jpg[/IMG] [IMG]http://i54.tinypic.com/30k6h6r.jpg[/IMG] [IMG]http://i51.tinypic.com/14j9v15.jpg[/IMG]
[IMG]http://i54.tinypic.com/2f0f2mx.jpg[/IMG] [IMG]http://i55.tinypic.com/4so2tw.jpg[/IMG] [IMG]http://i54.tinypic.com/97ob47.jpg[/IMG]
[IMG]http://i52.tinypic.com/htxx6t.jpg[/IMG]

Synchro Monsters:
[IMG]http://i55.tinypic.com/vnme03.jpg[/IMG] [IMG]http://i56.tinypic.com/6r3j37.jpg[/IMG]
[IMG]http://i52.tinypic.com/2rc3lw0.jpg[/IMG]
Card Lore:
1 "Eternal" Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner monsters
If you have any face-down cards in your Spell & Trap Card Zone, this card, this face-up card is unaffected by the effects of Spell and Trap Cards. If you control an "Eternal" monster, any monster this card destroys by battle is removed from play. When this card is removed from field, it is removed from play, and Special Summon all monsters removed from play by this card's effect to your opponent's side of the field. If you have an "Eternal" monster in your graveyard, this card gains 100 ATK for each "Eternal" monster in your graveyard.

I'm already thinking of updating this archetype with new cards and even more support and general support, any suggestions would be appreciated.
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[quote name='Kage (Shadow)' timestamp='1298721146' post='5035815']
Considering you're a new member these cards are absolutely brilliant. I also love the images, where did u get them? 10/10.
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I agree with Kage but the last monster you have on the post its picture has been used many times so i suggested you get a new picture
and when you are putting the lore you should have it in a "spoiler" for example.
[spoiler=Example]This is the example.[/spoiler]
To make a spoiler follow these steps bellow.
1. type [spoiler="insert spoiler name here"]
2. type whatever will be in the spoiler for example, a card picture: [img]http://img860.imageshack.us/img860/1363/147167.jpg[/img]
3. type the last part (in side of the last part there will be a space that does not belong so fix it) [/ spoiler]
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A big mistake u made: ''If you control an ''Eternal'' monster..'' this means that the monster which resolves this effect is treated as the ''Eternal'' monster you control. What i mean is that the EARTH monsters gain their effects through themselves because they are ''Eternal'' monsters. Change this to ''If you control any ''Eternal'' monster other than (name)..'' or ''If you control any ''Eternal'' monster other than this card..''
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