Spoon Posted February 26, 2011 Report Share Posted February 26, 2011 [center][IMG]http://img138.imageshack.us/img138/486/gardenbv.jpg[/IMG] [i][b]This card is also treated as a Plant-Type monster while it is face-up on the field or in your Graveyard. If your opponent Special Summons a monster while they control more cards than you do, you can remove monsters in your Graveyard from play whose total ATK is equal to or higher than the ATK of the Summoned monster to destroy that monster and Special Summon this card from your hand or Graveyard in face-up Defense Position. You can only control 1 face-up "Machina Garden". Once per turn, during either player's Main Phase, you can select 1 face-up Attack Position monster your opponent controls and send 1 monster from your hand to the Graveyard to have the selected monster lose ATK equal to the ATK of the sent monster, until the End Phase.[/b][/i][/center] Credit for the Template goes to [url="http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/topic/238263-hd-free-card-template/"]Touma[/url], and by God, this looks so f****** awesome Some Rulings (May need help with that): -If you already control a "Machina Garden", you cannot use the effect of a second one to destroy a Summoned monster because you cannot Summon it. -Cards are counted [i]before[/i] your opponent Summons the monster (do I need to change the wording for that?). -Removing monsters from play (first effect) and sending a monster to the Graveyard (second effect) are both costs. -The first effect doesn't target (again, is the wording correct for that?), the second effect does. -Just to clarify this: The first effect does [i]not[/i] negate the Summon of that monster. Btw., in the beginning this was not a "Machina" monster, but the original name was too long to fit in the Template properly (even though I think "Flower Garden of Self-Indulgent Machines" sounds way cooler ) As always, constructive criticism is much appreciated So long, Spoon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spoon Posted February 27, 2011 Author Report Share Posted February 27, 2011 *bump* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Boss Z Posted February 27, 2011 Report Share Posted February 27, 2011 Brilliant Card... thats all there is to it... its superb Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lexadin Posted February 27, 2011 Report Share Posted February 27, 2011 The effect was too confusing. Nah, just kidding. It was long though. If I got everything right, it is somewhat OP. Just remove 1-2 monsters in your Grave and you can basicly destroy any monster and also get this card out. The second effect doesn't really helps too ballance it. It however, is very original and I praise you for that. A 9.1/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Quiksilver Posted February 27, 2011 Report Share Posted February 27, 2011 Badass card is badass. That is all. Just kidding, I will actually critique it; though there is not much to critique! For one thing, wording and picture are both flawless; in fact, I must ask you were you found that pic, I absolutely love it. The effect is pretty good too, though the first effect could be easily abused. You made that a bit better with the cost and restricting it to Special Summons, but you still might want to restrict it further. However, beyond that, I have no criticism. Nice job. 9.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
endphase Posted February 27, 2011 Report Share Posted February 27, 2011 Image: 10/10 Touma's template is actually great... OCG: 20/20 Balance: 26/30 Creativity: 38/40 Total: 94% [size="5"]What??? You just broke the record![/size] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mysteryman429 Posted February 27, 2011 Report Share Posted February 27, 2011 nice effect (maybe a bit situational) to destroy certain monsters (especially ones that cant be destroyed by battle) while gettin this to ur defense to protect yourself and/or set up combos (or possibly for plant synchro decks) and if your opponent has a bigger ATK monster you can destroy it easier by discarding enough ATK reduction via the other effect.. so i think its nicely balanced... good job Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spoon Posted February 27, 2011 Author Report Share Posted February 27, 2011 [quote name='Boss Z' timestamp='1298826466' post='5038496'] Brilliant Card... thats all there is to it... its superb[/quote] And you do not only say that because of the template? Thanks [quote name='Lexadin' timestamp='1298826735' post='5038508'] The effect was too confusing. Nah, just kidding. It was long though. If I got everything right, it is somewhat OP. Just remove 1-2 monsters in your Grave and you can basicly destroy any monster and also get this card out. The second effect doesn't really helps too ballance it. It however, is very original and I praise you for that. A 9.1/10[/quote] Well, I can't destroy [i]any[/i] monster, only Special Summoned ones I can't deny that it is really powerful, but it is designed to be that way, kind of Anti-Meta-Stun-ish. However, if you consider it broken, I'd have to change it. [quote name='Luxray' timestamp='1298827180' post='5038527'] Badass card is badass. That is all. Just kidding, I will actually critique it; though there is not much to critique! For one thing, wording and picture are both flawless; in fact, I must ask you were you found that pic, I absolutely love it. The effect is pretty good too, though the first effect could be easily abused. You made that a bit better with the cost and restricting it to Special Summons, but you still might want to restrict it further. However, beyond that, I have no criticism. Nice job. 9.5/10[/quote] I actually can't name my source here, because where this comes from, there are also a lot of pictures that aren't... quite suited for younger audiences *cough* With "more restrictions", you mean something like "2 or more cards" instead of "more cards"? That would be doable, but would also make this card even more situational than it already is. I'll think about it, thanks for the review [quote name='Brendan Saux' timestamp='1298827329' post='5038541'] Image: 10/10 Touma's template is actually great... OCG: 20/20 Balance: 26/30 Creativity: 38/40 Total: 94% [size="5"]What??? You just broke the record![/size][/quote] Which record? Anyway, I'm glad you like it [quote name='mysteryman429' timestamp='1298828170' post='5038593'] nice effect (maybe a bit situational) to destroy certain monsters (especially ones that cant be destroyed by battle) while gettin this to ur defense to protect yourself and/or set up combos (or possibly for plant synchro decks) and if your opponent has a bigger ATK monster you can destroy it easier by discarding enough ATK reduction via the other effect.. so i think its nicely balanced... good job[/quote] Thanks for the review, again, glad that this gets such a good reception Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
endphase Posted February 27, 2011 Report Share Posted February 27, 2011 [quote name='Spoon' timestamp='1298830965' post='5038737'] Which record? Anyway, I'm glad you like it [/quote] The record of the highest rating I ever gave since my new rating system. The previous record was 93% Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AsterikcAde Posted February 28, 2011 Report Share Posted February 28, 2011 Flawless card, it is so good that I thought you posted an actual new card. 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spoon Posted March 1, 2011 Author Report Share Posted March 1, 2011 [quote name='Brendan Saux' timestamp='1298834074' post='5038912'] The record of the highest rating I ever gave since my new rating system. The previous record was 93%[/quote] Why thank you, I feel honored [quote name='AsterikcAde' timestamp='1298852553' post='5039788'] Flawless card, it is so good that I thought you posted an actual new card. 10/10[/quote] And now I feel flattered Thank you Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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