thekazu4u Posted February 26, 2011 Report Share Posted February 26, 2011 [img]http://img5.imageshack.us/img5/3038/358064.jpg[/img] When this card is Normal or Special Summoned, you can add the bottom Spell Card of your Graveyard to your Hand. Increase the ATK of this monster by 300 points for each "Dark Magician" or "Magician of Black Chaos" in either player's Graveyard. If this face-up card is destroyed or removed from the field, it is removed from play. Well, the thing that makes it a bit broken is that it is only one tribute. I could bump the star level up one to fix its OPdness if it is OPd. A good card for a Spellcaster Deck. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Boss Z Posted February 26, 2011 Report Share Posted February 26, 2011 [center]Thats more of a "Dark Magician Girl Palidan" kind of picture plus this thing seems a little OP'd for what it is make it that you can only tribute summon it by tribute summoning a level 5 or higher Spellcaster-Type monster. then it is more like chaos, and while being harder to summon, its more fair I'm not sure about the wording of the first sentence of the effect, but it seems decentlt worded, idk[/center] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
thekazu4u Posted February 26, 2011 Author Report Share Posted February 26, 2011 Lol its the best picture I could find You can only select the bottom spell card, so that makes it balanced. I think I should just make it 7 stars. I think I should do that because I want to keep its effect very similar to DMOC's Would that not make it better? [img]http://img842.imageshack.us/img842/9876/358064g.jpg[/img] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Boss Z Posted February 26, 2011 Report Share Posted February 26, 2011 But its UPed for a 7 star Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
thekazu4u Posted February 26, 2011 Author Report Share Posted February 26, 2011 [quote name='Boss Z' timestamp='1298740431' post='5036249'] But its UPed for a 7 star [/quote] So its OPd for a 6 star, UPd for a 7 star. Meh, we are in a bind here. I think that this is actually more powerful than the lvl5 or higher spellcaster card phrase. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shadow-Master Posted February 26, 2011 Report Share Posted February 26, 2011 Nice card. The OCG is good, the picture looks good, but I can't determine whether it is OP or UP. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Starrk Posted February 26, 2011 Report Share Posted February 26, 2011 [quote name='Shadow-Master' timestamp='1298741652' post='5036283'] Nice card. The OCG is good, the picture looks good, but I can't determine whether it is OP or UP. [/quote] Make an actual rate of the card will you? OCG: When this card is Normal or Special Summoned, you can add the bottom Spell Card [b]from[/b] your Graveyard to your Hand. Increase the ATK of this monster by 300 points for each "Dark Magician" or "Magician of Black Chaos" in either player's Graveyard. [s]When this card is summoned[/s] If this face-up card is destroyed or removed from the field, it is removed from play. I only had to fix a few things. I think it's pretty good. I mean the pic is great, but I agree that it is more of a paladin type monster pic. It's kind of bland; the effect. But overall, I think it is a well done card. However, the name isn't original. Good help me every time I see one of these. ;D Great work. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
thekazu4u Posted February 26, 2011 Author Report Share Posted February 26, 2011 [quote name='Cōyōté Stárrk' timestamp='1298744284' post='5036362'] Make an actual rate of the card will you? OCG: When this card is Normal or Special Summoned, you can add the bottom Spell Card [b]from[/b] your Graveyard to your Hand. Increase the ATK of this monster by 300 points for each "Dark Magician" or "Magician of Black Chaos" in either player's Graveyard. [s]When this card is summoned[/s] If this face-up card is destroyed or removed from the field, it is removed from play. I only had to fix a few things. I think it's pretty good. I mean the pic is great, but I agree that it is more of a paladin type monster pic. It's kind of bland; the effect. But overall, I think it is a well done card. However, the name isn't original. Good help me every time I see one of these. ;D Great work. 8/10 [/quote] Epic fail OCG on my side, can't believe I did not see that. Now fixed tho, thanks for pointing it out. [img]http://img5.imageshack.us/img5/3038/358064.jpg[/img] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheGenuine Posted February 27, 2011 Report Share Posted February 27, 2011 Picture doesn'y work with card and Up'ed i am srry Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
thekazu4u Posted February 27, 2011 Author Report Share Posted February 27, 2011 Hmm. I liked it at six stars better. [img]http://img64.imageshack.us/img64/1990/358064m.jpg[/img] I think it is not too broken. I mean, it is the BOTTOM spell. You cannot exactly have much control. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rias Gremory Posted February 27, 2011 Report Share Posted February 27, 2011 [quote name='thekazu4u' timestamp='1298776113' post='5037357'] Hmm. I liked it at six stars better. [img]http://img64.imageshack.us/img64/1990/358064m.jpg[/img] I think it is not too broken. I mean, it is the BOTTOM spell. You cannot exactly have much control. [/quote] ' [img]http://www.deviantart.com/download/134509998/Dark_Magician_Girl_of_Chaos_by_neodragon55.jpg[/img] Here's a pic that fits the card just fine. Cause yours is more like "Dark Paladin Girl" I think the card is nice 7.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
thekazu4u Posted February 27, 2011 Author Report Share Posted February 27, 2011 [img]http://img823.imageshack.us/img823/4513/358064u.jpg[/img] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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