SunshineSoldier Posted February 27, 2011 Report Share Posted February 27, 2011 [img]http://img52.imageshack.us/img52/8253/342593.jpg[/img] Lore: When this card is Summoned, Draw 1 card. Once per turn, you can pay 700 Life Points to increase this card's ATK by 300 until the End Phase. During your next turn after this Effect is activated, gain 700 Life Points. This card can attack your opponent directly. If this card is attacked, Switch this card to Face-up Defence Position. If this card is Destroyed by battle, Draw 1 card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Smashsquatch Posted February 27, 2011 Report Share Posted February 27, 2011 Pretty good card nicely balanced, you do have a few OCG errors though! 7.5/10 Nice Work! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SunshineSoldier Posted February 27, 2011 Author Report Share Posted February 27, 2011 Thanks for the review! repped. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mysteryman429 Posted February 27, 2011 Report Share Posted February 27, 2011 summon , get a card...then tribute it, get 2 more cards... op'd to me not to mention the additional effects if u dont think so, then look at how this card is better than the BANNED Destiny Hero - Disk Commander, (When this card is Special Summoned from the Graveyard, draw 2 cards.) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SunshineSoldier Posted February 27, 2011 Author Report Share Posted February 27, 2011 Thanks! I will edit it.fixed. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LCÂ Posted February 27, 2011 Report Share Posted February 27, 2011 Good card. the attack is low but, the effect makes up for it. 8.0/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SunshineSoldier Posted February 27, 2011 Author Report Share Posted February 27, 2011 Thankyou! repped. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Symbiote Posted February 27, 2011 Report Share Posted February 27, 2011 It seems really OP to me. I dunno, maybe increase the LP cost, and delete the restoring LP effect. There's not much that balances it out other than the low attack that can be increased for technically no cost. OCG is nice. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SunshineSoldier Posted February 27, 2011 Author Report Share Posted February 27, 2011 Thanks. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
thekazu4u Posted February 27, 2011 Report Share Posted February 27, 2011 [quote name='- Dingo -' timestamp='1298773690' post='5037284'] Thanks. [/quote] I dont know the whole pay LP and gain it back thing does not do it for me. Why not just not do anything at all, or make it so you have to pay once to get the draw or somethin. The effects are a nice fusion of different cards tho. 7.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SunshineSoldier Posted February 27, 2011 Author Report Share Posted February 27, 2011 thanks again for the comments. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
:bcoe Posted February 27, 2011 Report Share Posted February 27, 2011 [quote name='Smashsquatch' timestamp='1298772060' post='5037219'] Pretty good card nicely balanced, you do have a few OCG errors though! 7.5/10 Nice Work! [/quote] This card is really overpowered. 2 card draw for no real cost is way too good, not to mention its defense and attacking directly. Adding an optional weak effect doesn't balance it out. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shadow the Hedgehog fan#1 Posted February 27, 2011 Report Share Posted February 27, 2011 awesome! the attack is low but the defence is high, but the effect makes it awesome!9.999/10! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
thekazu4u Posted February 27, 2011 Report Share Posted February 27, 2011 [quote name='aaaaabbbbb' timestamp='1298775665' post='5037333'] This card is really overpowered. 2 card draw for no real cost is way too good, not to mention its defense and attacking directly. Adding an optional weak effect doesn't balance it out. [/quote] yes you may want to lower def tho. Perhaps 1700/1600. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
:bcoe Posted February 27, 2011 Report Share Posted February 27, 2011 [quote name='thekazu4u' timestamp='1298775838' post='5037342'] yes you may want to lower def tho. Perhaps 1700/1600. [/quote] The def isn't the overpowered part, its the draw 2 cards part. Its such an abusable effect. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
thekazu4u Posted February 27, 2011 Report Share Posted February 27, 2011 Yes, that is powerful. But there are more broken cards than that. The def doesent help balance it out lets put it that way. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
robkill13 Posted February 27, 2011 Report Share Posted February 27, 2011 card is extremely broken, used with limit reverse it's worse than card trooper. this thing gives the use a +2 no matter what, and the card has EXTREMELY high defense. also the pay life points thing is extremely pointless, it just doesn't need it and it's an effect that would never be used. fix those things and it can prob get a better grade. 5.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SunshineSoldier Posted February 27, 2011 Author Report Share Posted February 27, 2011 Thankyou all for the comments. I don't particularly think the DEF is that High though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zauls Posted February 27, 2011 Report Share Posted February 27, 2011 Change the effect to when it is Normal Summoned and it will be perfectly fine. If not it would be like a Destiny Hero - Disk Commander, just not quite as broken and with some minor niggles thrown in. Limite Reverse, Monster Reborn, Debris Dragon, Call of the Haunted and many other things would turn this card into a massive draw engine of doom. I don't want that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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