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This card cannot be used as a Synchro Material Monster, except for the Synchro Summon of a Psychic-Type Synchro Monster. When this card is Normal Summoned, you can pay 500 Life Points to Special Summon 1 monster from your Graveyard. That monster cannot attack or be Tributed. During the End phase of this turn,destroy that monster.

BTW the photo is from Jazin Kay
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Pretty good for a first card. Okay where to start....

First of all the Typ which is Phsycic should be capitalized. Second I'm pretty sure life points isn't capitalized but I'm not positive. Thridly it is pretty underpowered. Maybe make it have an effect like miracle egg except with phsycics. I think that would be cool. But for a first card that is really dood so 9/10
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[quote name='n8thegr8' timestamp='1298794267' post='5037803']
Pretty good for a first card. Okay where to start....

First of all the Typ which is Phsycic should be capitalized. Second I'm pretty sure life points isn't capitalized but I'm not positive. Thridly it is pretty underpowered. Maybe make it have an effect like miracle egg except with phsycics. I think that would be cool. But for a first card that is really dood so 9/10
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-o yeah I think the type should be all capital
-I think lits capital
-and what is miracle egg ?
-thanks for rating my card a 9 :)

[quote name='AsterikcAde' timestamp='1298796050' post='5037867']
Not bad for a first card, imagine having this card out and there's a awesome card in your Graveyard and you can Special Summon it onto the Field to protect yourself or go on the offensive. This card is legit and a nice start for a new member. 9/10
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I think you misunderstood the effect, how can it protect you when its destroyed at the end phase and it cannot attack
It's designed for synchro summoning easily.

but anyways thank you for the rating

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[quote name='n8thegr8' timestamp='1298794267' post='5037803']
Pretty good for a first card. Okay where to start....

First of all the Typ which is Phsycic should be capitalized. Second I'm pretty sure life points isn't capitalized but I'm not positive. Thridly it is pretty underpowered. Maybe make it have an effect like miracle egg except with phsycics. I think that would be cool. But for a first card that is really dood so 9/10
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Underpowered? Learn to play the game first before you use words like that, it's broken. Maybe give it a specific synchro clause?
Apart from that, capitalize Psychic and good card for a first.
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[center]woah! good card for your first

Other then the small p for Psychic, there's nothing much to say as it's balance and not oped at all.

nieway, do check out my first card as well

http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/topic/240356-first-card/page__p__5033556__fromsearch__1#entry5033556[/center]
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Would be pretty broken if released IRL. If you say it's underpowered, then you clearly don't know how to play the game. Would see so much abuse. However I like the card and think it is a very good idea, and it is a splashable Level 1 Tuner that can be used for an instant Synchro. Just capitalize the "P" in Psychic and it becomes an immense card.
9/10
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[quote name='}~Gob~Zom~{' timestamp='1298800099' post='5037984']
Would be pretty broken if released IRL. If you say it's underpowered, then you clearly don't know how to play the game. Would see so much abuse. However I like the card and think it is a very good idea, and it is a splashable Level 1 Tuner that can be used for an instant Synchro. Just capitalize the "P" in Psychic and it becomes an immense card.
9/10
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what do you mean broken?
and what is IRL?
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IRL = In Real Life
It would be broken because it is a generic Level 1 Tuner that can revive anything you want from the Grave and create an instant Synchro of pretty much anything you want. It is like a more overpowered version of Blackwing - Blizzard the Far North or Debris Dragon, which actually have drawbacks (type/archtype specific, specific Synchro requirements etc). And those cards have had a huge impact on the game recently. If I am misunderstanding the question, Broken means overpowered.
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[quote name='}~Gob~Zom~{' timestamp='1298801697' post='5038015']
IRL = In Real Life
It would be broken because it is a generic Level 1 Tuner that can revive anything you want from the Grave and create an instant Synchro of pretty much anything you want. It is like a more overpowered version of Blackwing - Blizzard the Far North or Debris Dragon, which actually have drawbacks (type/archtype specific, specific Synchro requirements etc). And those cards have had a huge impact on the game recently. If I am misunderstanding the question, Broken means overpowered.
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oh now i get it
thanks
it looks better now I think
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