Anti-Apocryphal Posted February 27, 2011 Report Share Posted February 27, 2011 [center][img]http://img822.imageshack.us/img822/3872/205642x.jpg[/img] [i]This monster cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by Tributing 3 monsters. This monster cannot attack your opponent directly. Each time your opponent Summons a monster, Special Summon 1 "Beyond Token" (Beast-Type/LIGHT/Level 4/ATK 0/DEF 2000)in Defense Position. This Token cannot attack or change position. If at anytime you control 3 "Beyond" Tokens, you can Tribute them to increase your Life Points by 1300.[/i][/center] [spoiler=Notice] I have used this picture multiple times, so in your ratings, please exclude the picture. Thanks in advance.[/spoiler] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
n8thegr8 Posted February 27, 2011 Report Share Posted February 27, 2011 I think its a really good card but I would mybe make the ATK 4000 cuz I think 5000 is a bit much. OCG is good(I can't find any mistakes but I'm kinda bad at it) but the pic is a little overused but then again every dragon pic is ovreused so 9/10. PS: I think the token thing is clever Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AkatsukiPride! Posted February 27, 2011 Report Share Posted February 27, 2011 [quote name='n8thegr8' timestamp='1298836452' post='5039036'] I think its a really good card but I would mybe make the ATK 4000 cuz I think 5000 is a bit much. OCG is good(I can't find any mistakes but I'm kinda bad at it) but the pic is a little overused but then again every dragon pic is ovreused so 9/10. PS: I think the token thing is clever [/quote] I agree Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Anti-Apocryphal Posted February 27, 2011 Author Report Share Posted February 27, 2011 Thank you both. More comments, please. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AsterikcAde Posted February 27, 2011 Report Share Posted February 27, 2011 At least 4000 ATK and DEF would suffice but 5000 ATK and DEF? Isn't that kinda biting off more you can chew? It's balanced because the monster cannot attack and the token concept is good as well, I'm guessing this card is utilized to defend you right? 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Anti-Apocryphal Posted February 28, 2011 Author Report Share Posted February 28, 2011 Pretty much. If I wanted it to be an attacking monster, I would had lowered the ATK/DEF to about 3500, and the Tokens would hurt your opponent. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Anti-Apocryphal Posted February 28, 2011 Author Report Share Posted February 28, 2011 Can I please get some more reviews? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lukem Posted March 1, 2011 Report Share Posted March 1, 2011 [quote name='n8thegr8' timestamp='1298836452' post='5039036'] I think its a really good card but I would mybe make the ATK 4000 cuz I think 5000 is a bit much. OCG is good(I can't find any mistakes but I'm kinda bad at it) but the pic is a little overused but then again every dragon pic is ovreused so 9/10. PS: I think the token thing is clever [/quote] Me to[quote name='n8thegr8' timestamp='1298836452' post='5039036'] I think its a really good card but I would mybe make the ATK 4000 cuz I think 5000 is a bit much. OCG is good(I can't find any mistakes but I'm kinda bad at it) but the pic is a little overused but then again every dragon pic is ovreused so 9/10. PS: I think the token thing is clever [/quote] i agree to Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Anti-Apocryphal Posted March 1, 2011 Author Report Share Posted March 1, 2011 I mean [b]in-depth[/b] reviews. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RBY Posted March 1, 2011 Report Share Posted March 1, 2011 It looks good, but if you can tribute the tokens to summon another copy of it, it could be a little overkill with 5000 atk and def. You could equip it with the Axe of Fools, which would give it 1000 extra attack and allow it to attack your opponent directly. However, it doesn't seem to be too bad since there would probably be several ways for an opponent to get rid of it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Anti-Apocryphal Posted March 2, 2011 Author Report Share Posted March 2, 2011 I see what you mean. Perhaps then, I could edit the card so that "These tokens cannot be used for a Tribute Summon or a Special Summon." In that case, the monster wouldn't be as OP'ed as before. Thanks for pointing that out. =D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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