The Truth Posted March 1, 2011 Report Share Posted March 1, 2011 Been messing around with the cards a bit, and gotta say, I love this forum! I've been a member for I don't know how long, but this is my first post. [spoiler=Heroes][img]http://img717.imageshack.us/img717/7724/182843w.jpg[/img] Gains 500 Attack Points when "Alphonse Elric" is on the field. [img]http://img717.imageshack.us/img717/4997/182843c.jpg[/img] The brother of Edward Elric, he lost his body in an alchemical ritual gone wrong. [img]http://img96.imageshack.us/img96/4997/182843c.jpg[/img] Roy's Lieutenant, she has a very long past with the man. [img]http://img854.imageshack.us/img854/7933/182843.jpg[/img] Gain 500 Attack and Defense points when "Riza Hawkeye" is on your side of the field.[/spoiler] [spoiler=Hero Magic Cards][img]http://img717.imageshack.us/img717/3347/182843wt.jpg[/img] All Machine types gain 1000 Attack points.[/spoiler] [spoiler=Villains][img]http://img534.imageshack.us/img534/7933/182843.jpg[/img] 1. When this monster is destroyed as a result of battle, you can pay 100 lifepoints to send it to your hand instead of the graveyard. 2. Once per turn, this card can adopt the attack and defense of any card on the field. It cannot attack this turn. [img]http://img845.imageshack.us/img845/4997/182843c.jpg[/img] 1. When this monster is destroyed as a result of battle, you can pay 100 lifepoints to send it to your hand instead of the graveyard. 2. Once per turn, this monster can destroy a level 4 or lower monster without damage calculation. [img]http://img845.imageshack.us/img845/8736/182843i.jpg[/img] When this monster is destroyed as a result of battle, you can pay 100 lifepoints to send it to your hand instead of the graveyard. [img]http://img291.imageshack.us/img291/7933/182843.jpg[/img] 1. This monster can only be Ritual Summoned with the Ritual Spell Card, "Greed's Philosopher's Stone". 2. When this monster is destroyed as a result of battle, you can pay 100 lifepoints to send it to your hand instead of the graveyard. [img]http://img263.imageshack.us/img263/4997/182843c.jpg[/img] When this monster is destroyed as a result of battle, you can pay 100 lifepoints to send it to your hand instead of the graveyard. [img]http://img695.imageshack.us/img695/7933/182843.jpg[/img] The Fuhrer King, this man was chosen as a young adult to be consumed by the stone, and ascended the ranks to the top of the Amestris government. He doesn't know if the last soul is his own, or a soul the philosopher's stone granted him. [img]http://img849.imageshack.us/img849/7430/182843n.jpg[/img] This card can only be summoned if all of your Homunculus cards are in the graveyard. After which, they are removed from play. Once per turn you can pay 500 lifepoints to negate your opponent's attack. [img]http://img849.imageshack.us/img849/6933/182843l.jpg[/img] This monster can only be Ritual Summoned with the Ritual Spell Card, "The Truth". Once per turn you can pay 500 lifepoints to negate your opponent's attack. [/spoiler] [spoiler=Villain Magic Cards][img]http://img849.imageshack.us/img849/1276/182843s.jpg[/img] All Homunculus types gain 500 Attack and Defense. [img]http://img339.imageshack.us/img339/7933/182843.jpg[/img] Can only be equipped to "Envy". Adds 1000 Attack and Defense to their existing Attack and Defense. Envy's second effect cannot be used. [img]http://img849.imageshack.us/img849/4997/182843c.jpg[/img] At the end of your opponent's turn, they must send the first card on top of their deck to the graveyard. [img]http://img202.imageshack.us/img202/7933/182843.jpg[/img] This can only be equipped to "Greed" or "Greedling". This card adds 1000 Defense points. [img]http://img64.imageshack.us/img64/6834/182843r.jpg[/img] This card is used to Ritual Summon "Greedling". You must also Tribute "Greed" from the field or the graveyard. [img]http://img163.imageshack.us/img163/7933/182843.jpg[/img] Can only be equipped to "Lust". Adds 1000 attack points. [img]http://img64.imageshack.us/img64/9614/182843y.jpg[/img] This card is used to Ritual Summon "Father (Truth Absorbed)". "Amestris Transmutation Circle" must also be on the field. [img]http://img163.imageshack.us/img163/9940/182843h.jpg[/img] Can only be equipped to "Wrath." At the end of your opponent's turn, you can take a look at your opponent's hand. You may also sacrifice a card from your hand to look at any face-down cards in your opponent's deck.[/spoiler] Pride and Sloth will be making an appearance as soon as I learn more about them. Father will also make an appearance. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Homunculus Gluttony Posted March 2, 2011 Report Share Posted March 2, 2011 Isnt the Card That you called Wrath really Pride? (I love the show) Wrath was Teacher's Child who grew up behind the gate. Otherwise. AWESOME CARDS 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Truth Posted March 2, 2011 Author Report Share Posted March 2, 2011 [quote name='ESh' timestamp='1299034254' post='5044949'] Isnt the Card That you called Wrath really Pride? (I love the show) Wrath was Teacher's Child who grew up behind the gate. Otherwise. AWESOME CARDS 10/10 [/quote] Thanks a million, I really appreciate it! And actually, my cards are based off of the manga and second anime, so no, he is correctly named. I know I included a few 2003 pictures in there, but that's only because I couldn't find any good pictures of the brotherhood anime. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Truth Posted March 2, 2011 Author Report Share Posted March 2, 2011 Updated, all cards have been given Set IDs, and proper Circulations. These cards have been added: Amestris Transmutation The Truth Father Father (Truth Absorbed) Things to Look Forward to: Envy (True Form) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RoxasReaper Posted March 2, 2011 Report Share Posted March 2, 2011 not bad, they could use a little work on a few minor errors but i give a 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Truth Posted March 3, 2011 Author Report Share Posted March 3, 2011 [quote name='RoxasReaper' timestamp='1299080577' post='5045770'] not bad, they could use a little work on a few minor errors but i give a 7/10 [/quote] Thanks for the rating! Could you please elaborate on the minor errors? If there are any errors, I'd like to know which so I can improve. On another note, I've added Envy's True Form as a magic card. Like the others, it can be equipped to Envy. I've also corrected a few errors pertaining to the description of some of the cards, mainly the Ritual Summons. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Truth Posted March 4, 2011 Author Report Share Posted March 4, 2011 Cards have been added: Edward Elric Alphonse Elric Riza Hawkeye Roy Mustang Winry's Mechanics I would love to have critique in all fields, especially in the descriptions of the cards. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Holofoil Posted March 4, 2011 Report Share Posted March 4, 2011 Great job on these cards, they all look fantastic. The effects on the Villian cards seem rather unfair, though. Being able to add a card that was destroyed in battle back to your hand pretty much makes the monster immortal, unless your opponent happens to have Mirror Force or some other monster destroying Spell/Trap card on the field. I'd sure hate to be on the other end of those Villian monsters. But... they're made-up cards, I guess that's one of the major reasons to make them. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Truth Posted March 4, 2011 Author Report Share Posted March 4, 2011 [quote name='StitchMayhem' timestamp='1299222846' post='5050077'] Great job on these cards, they all look fantastic. The effects on the Villian cards seem rather unfair, though. Being able to add a card that was destroyed in battle back to your hand pretty much makes the monster immortal, unless your opponent happens to have Mirror Force or some other monster destroying Spell/Trap card on the field. I'd sure hate to be on the other end of those Villian monsters. But... they're made-up cards, I guess that's one of the major reasons to make them. [/quote] Thanks! You're right... I [i]could[/i] make them so you have to pay a penalty each time. Perhaps 100 lifepoints each turn? After all, homunculi are supposed to run out of regenerative abilities eventually. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Truth Posted March 5, 2011 Author Report Share Posted March 5, 2011 Tweaks have been added to the homunculus cards. Bringing them to your hand now requires 100 lifepoints. Critique is always welcome, I would like critique in all fields. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skymiles Posted March 6, 2011 Report Share Posted March 6, 2011 Yeah! GO FMA! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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