Max5644225 Posted March 3, 2011 Report Share Posted March 3, 2011 Hello! This is my first attemp at making a set of cards. this set is the Dark Mistress set and it is supposed to be cards that boost each other while being either in the Field, Graveyard, or removed from play. since this is mi first set i will be really thankfull if you can tell me what is wrong and if a card is too overpowered or too underpowered. also, my english is a little bad so if you could tell me my mistakes i will correct them. okay so now the cards: [img]http://img96.imageshack.us/img96/3259/370085.jpg[/img] Lore: This monster is summoned with the Ritual Spell card "Exile of the Dark Mistresses". You must also offer monsters whose total Level stars equal 8 or more from your hand or Field. Once per turn, you can remove from play 1 "Dark Mistress" in your Graveyard in order to destroy 1 opponent monster. When this card is in the Graveyard, you can pay 100xMonsters destroyed by this cards Effect during your Standby Phase in order to have 2 Normal Summons During oyur Main Phase 1(the bonus is lost once you enter Battle Phase or end your turn) [img]http://img576.imageshack.us/img576/3259/370085.jpg[/img] Spellcaster / Effect Lore: When this card is sent to the Gravyard you can add 2 LV5 or lower "Dark Mistress" monsters from your Graveyard to your hand. While this card is out of play you and your opponent must pay 200 Life Points for each Spell or Trap card they activate. [img]http://img715.imageshack.us/img715/921/370085d.jpg[/img] Spellcaster / Union Lore: Once per turn you can activate this cards effect in order to equip this card to a "Dark Mistress" card, or to unequip it and summon it in Attack Position. When this card is equipped to a monster card, it gains 200 + 100xnumber of "Dark Mistress" cards out of play. When the monster equipped with this card is the target of an Attack, monster Effect, Spell or Trap card, you can remove this card from play in order to cancel its effect(if it was a Spell card, Trap card, or a monsters effect) or destroy the attacking monster(if it was an attack) [img]http://img715.imageshack.us/img715/5641/370085x.jpg[/img] Thunder / Spellcaster / Tuner Lore: A dreadful Dark Mistresss, her strom power have no match, yet her arrogance is he weakness. [img]http://img52.imageshack.us/img52/3259/370085.jpg[/img] Pyro / Spellcaster / Effect FLIP: When this card is sent to the Graveyard as a result of battle, your opponent takes 500 direct damage. If there is a LV3 or lower "Dark Mistress" in your side of the Field, you can change that card with this one in Face-Up Defense Position (this effect can only be activated in your opponent's End Phase in the turn this card was destroyed) [img]http://img824.imageshack.us/img824/3259/370085.jpg[/img] Spellcaster / Tuner Lore:A powerful mage who is also trained in the use of the sword, she will do anything she can to protect her fellow Dark Mistresses. [img]http://img508.imageshack.us/img508/3259/370085.jpg[/img] Windged Beast / Spellcaster / Effect Lore:You can Special Summon this card by tributing "Dark Mistress - Akari the Dark Light". While this card is in your side of the Field, any "Dark Mistress" destroyed will be removed from play instead of sent to the Graveyard. This card gains 200 Attack Points per "Dark Mistress" removed from play (this counts also the "Dark Mistress" cards that were removed from play before this card was played). When this card is in the Graveyard, you gain 200 Life Points per "Dark Mistress" in your side of the field (Face-Down cards not counted), and you will lose 100 Life Points per monster that doesn't have "Dark Mistress" in its name. [img]http://img535.imageshack.us/img535/3259/370085.jpg[/img] Dragon / Spellcaster / Tuner Lore: You can send 1 "Dark Mistress" card in your hand or field in order to control 1 Dragon-Type monster in your opponent's side of the Field. The monster you control must be the same LV or lower than the "Dark Mistress" you Tributed. [img]http://img535.imageshack.us/img535/5866/370085j.jpg[/img] Warrior / spellcaster / Fusion / Effect Lore: "Dark Mistress - Sarissa the Wicked Thief" + "Dark Mistress - Manami the Battlemaid" This card gains 100 Attack & Defense Points for each "Dark Mistress" in your Graveyard. When this card attacks a DARK or EARTH monster you can remove from play 1 "Dark Mistress" in your Graveyard in order to halve the Attack and Defense of the target monster. When this card is sent to the Graveyard or out of play, you can select up to 4 LV6 or lower "Dark Mistress" out of play and add them to your deck. Your deck is then shuffled. [img]http://img852.imageshack.us/img852/5866/370085j.jpg[/img] Warrior / Spellcaster / Tuner / Effect Lore: When this monster attacks your opponent directly, your opponent must select 1 card in his/her hand and remove it from play. When this creature is sent to the graveyard, any card that was removed from play by this card returns to the owners hand. [img]http://img852.imageshack.us/img852/375/370085b.jpg[/img] Warrior / Spellcaster / Synchro / Effect Lore: 1 "Dark Mistress" Tuner + 2 or more non-Tuners This card can only attack if you first discard 1 card from your hand. When this card destroys an opponent monster you gain 500 Life Points. For each "Dark Mistress" in your Graveyard, This card gains 100 Attack Points and 200 Defense Points (applied during damage calculation only). [img]http://img823.imageshack.us/img823/8364/370085o.jpg[/img] Lore: This card is used to summon "Dark Mistress - Hazuki the Deathknight". You must also tribute monsters whose total Level stars equal 8 or more from your field or your hand. Note: if you see the card images are repeated, it is a problem i have when i upload something, instead of putting the right image it just repeats 1 or 2 images. if someone knows how to correct this, please tell me how to (right now i am about to kill my computer after trying to correct this for almost 1 hour, plus all the time i spent in the morning trying to do this). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
n8thegr8 Posted March 3, 2011 Report Share Posted March 3, 2011 To upload images just click on the card when ur in the card maker and an address thing should pop up right below the card.(its a little small) just copy and paste the address to ur post and when u post it it should pop up as a card Um for the first card I think the OCG is pretty good(wording) the second card should be a normal monster not an effect monster. I can't read the last card. The pics aren't that great. Try to get better quality one's next time. Try deviantart.com or photobucket.com Otherwise they're pretty good for a new membe so 5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Max5644225 Posted March 3, 2011 Author Report Share Posted March 3, 2011 thank you for the reply and for telling me how to upload the images. the 2nd card isn't an effect monster it got like this because when i put "Tuner" it ends up like this. EDIT: i'm trying to upload images but my computer seems to like the ritual card since all the images end up looking like her. i'm trying to correct these so if you can tell me how to do it please tell me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
n8thegr8 Posted March 4, 2011 Report Share Posted March 4, 2011 That happened to me 2 so I would try exiting out sand retrying or by using tiny pic.com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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