azureflame9786 Posted February 3, 2008 Report Share Posted February 3, 2008 these are my first cards i tried to make them as real as possible. Also i didn't want to overpower them. anyway please don't lie tell me what i did wrong and how i can improve. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Junk Raver Posted February 3, 2008 Report Share Posted February 3, 2008 Heyya and welcome to the forums ^_^ Some ppl, do have a tendency to lie to make others not feel bad, and some just rate cards stupidly as they either cant be bothered looking, or are stupid literally, stupid lol ^_^ I can easily spot and warn you of those members ^_^ Now then, the cards ^_^ The errors i see are mainly Grammar related, but there are some OCG errors to, mainly with you using 'T.v' / Old lore speak such as 'Sacrificing'. When writing effects its always best to check official card effects to check Correct grammar and wording ^_^ Even with the multiple Errors these are still good for your first ^_^ Everyone, well most start off with errors, but the more time you spend here, the greater you will become ^_^ Good effort, and welcome ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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