Darnez FC Posted March 4, 2011 Report Share Posted March 4, 2011 [img]http://img684.imageshack.us/img684/4059/48189.jpg[/img] Lore: This card cannot be Special Summoned. When this card is Normal Summoned successfully, discard 3 cards from your hand to the graveyard to destroy 2 cards on the field. When this card battles a face-up Synchro Monster, the Monster is removed from play after the damage step. In addition, for every Monster removed from play by this card's effect, increase the ATK of this card by 300 points. When this card is destroyed by battle, you can remove 4 cards from your hand from play to add this card to the top of your Deck. I'm thinking it MIGHT be a bit overpowered. Thoughts? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Olympian_Guardian Posted March 4, 2011 Report Share Posted March 4, 2011 Yeah.... too overpowered. Some things that you could change are: 1) You need to pay Life Points AND remove 4 of your hand-cards from play to add him. Maybe 1000 Points? 2) Don't make the remove-from-play effect apply to Effect Monsters. Make it SYNCHRO Monsters. Since everyone uses them now (other than me), this card could easily become a good anti-Synchro Monster - with this version of the effect, I'd definitely use it in my Machine Emperor Deck! Also, grammar errors: change 'discard 3 cards' to 'you may discard 2 cards', and change '[color=#1C2837][font=tahoma, arial, verdana, sans-serif]you can send 4 cards from your hand out of play' to 'you can remove 4 cards from your hand from play'.[/font][/color] [color=#1C2837][font=tahoma, arial, verdana, sans-serif] [/font][/color] [color=#1C2837][font=tahoma, arial, verdana, sans-serif]This card has so much potential; make sure not to waste it [/font][/color] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darnez FC Posted March 4, 2011 Author Report Share Posted March 4, 2011 Thanks for the comments! 1) Not sure about the LP deduction. He isn't being Special Summoned back to the field or even added back to your hand. 2) I like the Synchro idea. I'll definitely change it to that. First grammar error - Intentional. If you have 3 or more cards in your hand then they HAVE to be discarded, you don't have a choice. Second grammar error - Cheers. I'll fix that. Rep for you good sir. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Olympian_Guardian Posted March 4, 2011 Report Share Posted March 4, 2011 Yay! I very much wish that this was a real card - Granel + this = epic win Also, maybe you should add another anti-Synchro effect, such as 'Whenever your opponent Synchro Summons a Monster, you may pay 500 Life Points to destroy 1 other Monster your opponent controls.' Enjoy! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Angelius GT Posted March 4, 2011 Report Share Posted March 4, 2011 That card has good picture but its really over-powered lol You need to discard 3 or 4 cards from your hand, pay wtv life points lol, for example dark magician, you only need to discard 2 cards ; ) BTW its confusing but i got your idea, keep working on it ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Olympian_Guardian Posted March 5, 2011 Report Share Posted March 5, 2011 Maybe.... change 'discard TO destroy' to 'discard AND destroy'? It's just better wording in my opinion. I <3 this card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mysteryman429 Posted March 5, 2011 Report Share Posted March 5, 2011 its not op'd it cant be special summoned and to normal summon it requires 2 tributes (since its lvl then u have to discard 3 cards just to destroy 2 cards ("Beast King Barbaros" is better, it takes out all of ur opponents cards with just 1 more tribute and no discarding) removing from play a synchro after a battle is nice (like a d.d. style effect) and who in their right mind would remove from 4 cards in hand just to put it back on deck Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Olympian_Guardian Posted March 5, 2011 Report Share Posted March 5, 2011 Yea, you're right. Make it so that you just pay 1000 or something semi-regainable to return him to the Deck. I still <3 this card, tho Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mysteryman429 Posted March 5, 2011 Report Share Posted March 5, 2011 u wouldnt want a 2 tribute monster returned to the top of your deck.. it would hurt u if u dont have tributes for it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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