happyduke Posted March 5, 2011 Report Share Posted March 5, 2011 Hi, here are two cards I created, I want some comments and feedback on these cards. Hope you guys like the card I create [img]http://img852.imageshack.us/img852/9245/166624f.jpg[/img] This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except when your life point reach 0 while this card is removed from play or in the graveyard. If it happens during your opponent's turn, the turn ends. You life point go back to 4000, and all your cards except this card are send to graveyard. This monster cannot be destroyed by battle, and all damage you receive is transfer to your opponent instead.This monster This card's activation and effect cannot be negated. only the player who have this card at the start of the battle can activate this effect. [img]http://img696.imageshack.us/img696/6527/166624.jpg[/img] This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except when your life point reach 0 while this card is removed from play or in the graveyard. If it happens during your opponent's turn, the turn ends. You life point go back to 4000, and all your cards including this card are reshuffled and go back to your deck, then draw five cards. This card's activation and effect cannot be negated. only the player who have this card at the start of the battle can activate this effect. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
n8thegr8 Posted March 5, 2011 Report Share Posted March 5, 2011 Um I think that these cards are pretty good for a new member however they are waaaaaaay overpowered. You would never lose a duel with this card. Ever. I would definitely change the effects. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
happyduke Posted March 6, 2011 Author Report Share Posted March 6, 2011 [quote name='n8thegr8' timestamp='1299305113' post='5051994'] Um I think that these cards are pretty good for a new member however they are waaaaaaay overpowered. You would never lose a duel with this card. Ever. I would definitely change the effects. [/quote] How about the picture and monster name and stuff? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MibeR Posted March 6, 2011 Report Share Posted March 6, 2011 i know that newbie would make their amazing card, i mean overpowered cards.without realized that the important is to make a cards as real as possible Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RBY Posted March 6, 2011 Report Share Posted March 6, 2011 In addition to them being overpowered, there are several errors in spelling and grammer. You should read the cards' lores over to fix the mistakes. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MibeR Posted March 6, 2011 Report Share Posted March 6, 2011 [quote]In addition to them being overpowered, there are several errors in spelling and grammer. You should read the cards' lores over to fix the mistakes. [/quote] binggo Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
beefman Posted March 6, 2011 Report Share Posted March 6, 2011 There are some sloppy mistakes in these effects, like in the first card... This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except when your life point reach 0 while this card is removed from play or in the graveyard. If it happens during your opponent's turn, the turn ends. [b]You life point [/b]go back to 4000, and all your cards except this card are send to graveyard. This monster cannot be destroyed by battle, and all damage you receive is transfer to your opponent instead.[b]This monster This card's activation[/b] and effect cannot be negated. only the player who have this card at the start of the battle can activate this effect. or in the second... This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except when your life point reach 0 while this card is removed from play or in the graveyard. If it happens during your opponent's turn, the turn ends. [b]You life point[/b] go back to 4000, and all your cards including this card are reshuffled and go back to your deck, then draw five cards. This card's activation and effect cannot be negated. only the player [b]who have this[/b] card at the start of the battle can activate this effect. These aren't the only mistakes, just a couple of them, and you can probably figure out why they're mistakes. They are simple grammatical errors. For the cards, I give 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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