Skymiles Posted March 6, 2011 Report Share Posted March 6, 2011 A weaker take on Lava Golem. I checked and I think the OCG is near perfect. [img]http://img824.imageshack.us/img824/4482/362176f.jpg[/img] Card Text: This card cannot be normal summoned or set. This card can only be special summoned on your opponents side of the field by tributing 1 monster they control. You cannot normal summon or set the turn you special summon this card. The controller of this card takes 700 points of damage during each of his/her standby phases. Tell me what you think. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Olympian_Guardian Posted March 6, 2011 Report Share Posted March 6, 2011 This is basically a worse version of Lava Golem. Your opponent loses less Monsters and they lose less Life Points. The only combo I can think of with this card is the same Nightmare-Wheel thing that I use with Lava Golem. Unless you make a Synchro or Fusion Monster that requires this card, you haven't really accomplished anything by making this card. Im sorry. I just see no point in this card at the current time. Please please PLEASE create a card that makes this card more useful than Lava Golem. [img]http://public.yugiohcardmaker.net/public/style_emoticons/default/sad.gif[/img] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ieyasu Tokugawa Posted March 6, 2011 Report Share Posted March 6, 2011 [quote name='Olympian_Guardian' timestamp='1299441676' post='5056028'] This is basically a worse version of Lava Golem. Your opponent loses less Monsters and they lose less Life Points. The only combo I can think of with this card is the same Nightmare-Wheel thing that I use with Lava Golem. Unless you make a Synchro or Fusion Monster that requires this card, you haven't really accomplished anything by making this card. Im sorry. I just see no point in this card at the current time. Please please PLEASE create a card that makes this card more useful than Lava Golem. [img]http://public.yugiohcardmaker.net/public/style_emoticons/default/sad.gif[/img] [/quote] It's a weaker version, not a worse version. Unlike Golem, this can be used on people who only have 1 monster at the end of their turn, a situation that would make Golem completely useless. It can also still be used to tribute off your opponent's crazy monsters (stardust dragon), then procede to kill this guy. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skymiles Posted March 6, 2011 Author Report Share Posted March 6, 2011 [quote name='Tsukasa Hiiragi' timestamp='1299442011' post='5056047'] It's a weaker version, not a worse version. Unlike Golem, this can be used on people who only have 1 monster at the end of their turn, a situation that would make Golem completely useless. It can also still be used to tribute off your opponent's crazy monsters (stardust dragon), then procede to kill this guy. [/quote] Thanks for clearing that up. Yeah I made it with one thing in mind. A weaker lava golem. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
endphase Posted March 6, 2011 Report Share Posted March 6, 2011 [quote name='Tsukasa Hiiragi' timestamp='1299442011' post='5056047'] It's a weaker version, not a worse version. Unlike Golem, this can be used on people who only have 1 monster at the end of their turn, a situation that would make Golem completely useless. It can also still be used to tribute off your opponent's crazy monsters (stardust dragon), then procede to kill this guy. [/quote] But then this monster needs less ATK unless you have a card effect that can destroy it. Rating: Picture: 8/10 OCG: 17/20 Balance: 27/30 Originality: 30/40 Total: 82% Good. OCG correction: [font="Arial"][size="2"]This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned to your opponent's side of the field by Tributing 2 monsters they control. You cannot Normal Summoned or Set the turn you Special Summoned this card. The controller of this card takes 1000 points of damage during each of his/her Standby Phases.[/size][/font] [color=#3A3A3A][font="Arial"][size="2"] [/size][/font][/color] [color=#3A3A3A][font="Arial"][size="2"]I think that's correct.[/size][/font][/color] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skymiles Posted March 6, 2011 Author Report Share Posted March 6, 2011 [quote name='Brendan Saux' timestamp='1299443170' post='5056098'] But then this monster needs less ATK unless you have a card effect that can destroy it. Rating: Picture: 8/10 OCG: 17/20 Balance: 27/30 Originality: 30/40 Total: 82% Good. OCG correction: [font="Arial"][size="2"]This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned to your opponent's side of the field by Tributing 2 monsters they control. You cannot Normal Summoned or Set the turn you Special Summoned this card. The controller of this card takes 1000 points of damage during each of his/her Standby Phases.[/size][/font] [color=#3A3A3A][font="Arial"][size="2"] [/size][/font][/color] [color=#3A3A3A][font="Arial"][size="2"]I think that's correct.[/size][/font][/color] [/quote] It is meant to be one monster and 700 life points on this card as it is weaker and is a level 6 monster. lava golem is level 8. The ocg you put is the same as lava golem itself. This is slightly different. Thanks for the feedback though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
beefman Posted March 7, 2011 Report Share Posted March 7, 2011 The OCG is near perfect indeed, however, you missed a couple of capitals that were stated above. This card is nicely done, the pic is okay, and it deserves an overall 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skymiles Posted March 7, 2011 Author Report Share Posted March 7, 2011 Bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
endphase Posted March 7, 2011 Report Share Posted March 7, 2011 [quote name='Skymiles' timestamp='1299443415' post='5056108'] It is meant to be one monster and 700 life points on this card as it is weaker and is a level 6 monster. lava golem is level 8. The ocg you put is the same as lava golem itself. This is slightly different. Thanks for the feedback though. [/quote] Yeah, sorry for the OCG. I knew there was something wrong with the capitalization, so (because I was too lazy), I searched it's original version, but I forgot to change some things. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MibeR Posted March 7, 2011 Report Share Posted March 7, 2011 This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned to your opponent's side of the field by Tributing 1 monsters they control. You cannot Normal Summoned or Set the turn you Special Summoned this card. The controller of this card takes 700 points of damage during each of his/her Standby Phases. this is what the Skymiles want,. This is the weaker version of Lava Golem, but has more usefulness and make we dont worry about its ATK. I mean Lava Golem with his 3000, this card 2300. Eventhough we dont have any MoP or LLA - A, we dont have to much worry Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skymiles Posted March 7, 2011 Author Report Share Posted March 7, 2011 [quote name='Maha Guns' timestamp='1299518985' post='5058062'] This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned to your opponent's side of the field by Tributing 1 monsters they control. You cannot Normal Summoned or Set the turn you Special Summoned this card. The controller of this card takes 700 points of damage during each of his/her Standby Phases. this is what the Skymiles want,. This is the weaker version of Lava Golem, but has more usefulness and make we dont worry about its ATK. I mean Lava Golem with his 3000, this card 2300. Eventhough we dont have any MoP or LLA - A, we dont have to much worry [/quote] Spot on. That's what I was aiming for. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MibeR Posted March 7, 2011 Report Share Posted March 7, 2011 thanks Miles - - - - Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skymiles Posted March 7, 2011 Author Report Share Posted March 7, 2011 [quote name='Maha Guns' timestamp='1299521805' post='5058168'] thanks Miles - - - - [/quote] you're welcome. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Obliterador Posted March 8, 2011 Report Share Posted March 8, 2011 NICE CARD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AsterikcAde Posted March 8, 2011 Report Share Posted March 8, 2011 Taking damage to your life points each turn is never a good idea, especially when OTKing is very common nowadays in the game, bad design but your OCG is there. 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ieyasu Tokugawa Posted March 8, 2011 Report Share Posted March 8, 2011 [quote name='AsterikcAde' timestamp='1299622409' post='5061090'] Taking damage to your life points each turn is never a good idea, especially when OTKing is very common nowadays in the game, bad design but your OCG is there. 6/10 [/quote] The controller of the card is the person who has it on their side of the field. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AsterikcAde Posted March 8, 2011 Report Share Posted March 8, 2011 [quote name='Tsukasa Hiiragi' timestamp='1299622496' post='5061100'] The controller of the card is the person who has it on their side of the field. [/quote] Oh, wait....nevermind...I reread the effect...my mistake! ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
judedudemude Posted March 8, 2011 Report Share Posted March 8, 2011 [quote name='Tsukasa Hiiragi' timestamp='1299442011' post='5056047'] It's a weaker version, not a worse version. Unlike Golem, this can be used on people who only have 1 monster at the end of their turn, a situation that would make Golem completely useless. It can also still be used to tribute off your opponent's crazy monsters (stardust dragon), then procede to kill this guy. [/quote] i agree with this you can get rid of 1 strong monster on your oppenent side of the field then use shadow spell and or nigthmare wheel and or miniaturize and or cursed armaments and or discord and or Mask of Restrict (give a weak monster to destory in battle or a useless monster that keeps drain life points every turn) first special summon lava golem dragon then activate discord and mask of restrict and nightmare wheel (sure it takes up 3 spell/trap spots but it worth it) = for two or threee turn a uselless monster and 1200 direct damage to your opponent life point every turn so even though it weak it balanced because lava golem is lv 8 so it has a more powerful effect but lava golem dragon is a lower lv monster there for a weaker effect but i think it is good anyways Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skymiles Posted March 8, 2011 Author Report Share Posted March 8, 2011 Wow, this is my most discussed card. Thanks guys Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
judedudemude Posted March 8, 2011 Report Share Posted March 8, 2011 you are welcome sky miles (better than nikes ???) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skymiles Posted March 8, 2011 Author Report Share Posted March 8, 2011 Nikes? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
judedudemude Posted March 9, 2011 Report Share Posted March 9, 2011 sky miles sounds like a brand of tennis shoes (like nikes) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
beefman Posted March 9, 2011 Report Share Posted March 9, 2011 [quote name='judedudemude' timestamp='1299629610' post='5061404'] sky miles sounds like a brand of tennis shoes (like nikes) [/quote] No offense skymiles, but its true Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skymiles Posted March 9, 2011 Author Report Share Posted March 9, 2011 It actually means miles as in a measure of distance. And my name is Miles, it's six miles up to space so that's the origin of the username. Eh, I can always change it later anyway but I'm not too bothered. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Flare909 Posted March 9, 2011 Report Share Posted March 9, 2011 over - used pic, I used that pic for my card set before........ (just for your knowledge) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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