Weevil Underwood Posted March 6, 2011 Report Share Posted March 6, 2011 [img]http://img845.imageshack.us/img845/3166/373969.jpg[/img] This card cannot be Normal Summoned except by sending 1 Spell card to the Graveyard.If there is "The Spirit of The Four Mountains" on the field ,this Monster can't be destroyed by a Spell ,Trap or a Monster Effect.You can pay 500 Life Points to return the tributed Spell Card from the Graveyard to the top of your Deck. [img]http://img852.imageshack.us/img852/3166/373969.jpg[/img] Img thanks to Jazin Kay Are these good ? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
beefman Posted March 6, 2011 Report Share Posted March 6, 2011 I don't understand how you made those errors in your card effects... all the capitals are correct, the phrasing is perfect, and then you mess up on the commas? You put commas directly after the word, THEN a space, THEN the next word. The comma goes before the space. I feel like I'm teaching grade 1 english. Anyways, overall, both cards get an 8/10, which is pretty good considering my standards. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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