Skymiles Posted March 6, 2011 Report Share Posted March 6, 2011 This is another card I have whipped up. Please tell me what you think [img]http://img64.imageshack.us/img64/9155/362176.jpg[/img] Card Text: This card cannot be normal summoned. This card can only be set. If this monster is attacked while in face down position you may negate the attack. Your opponent must then randomly discard a card from their hand. If this effect is used destroy this card on the end phase of the turn this effect was used. When this card is sent to the graveyard draw 1 card. Thanks for looking. Please comment, thanks.Bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RBY Posted March 6, 2011 Report Share Posted March 6, 2011 There's a tiny error in the lore: "If this effect is used destroy this card on the end phase..." Ad a coma between "card" and "on." This card looks interesting and can be good for gaining hand advantage (your opponent loses a card, while you gain one). To me its a 9/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skymiles Posted March 6, 2011 Author Report Share Posted March 6, 2011 [quote name='RBY' timestamp='1299448901' post='5056317'] There's a tiny error in the lore: "If this effect is used destroy this card on the end phase..." Ad a coma between "card" and "on." This card looks interesting and can be good for gaining hand advantage (your opponent loses a card, while you gain one). To me its a 9/10. [/quote] Thank's for the good feedback. I'll change the OCG error. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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Skymiles Posted March 7, 2011 Author Report Share Posted March 7, 2011 Urgh barely any replies. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chubtoaster Posted March 7, 2011 Report Share Posted March 7, 2011 [font="tahoma, arial, verdana, sans-serif"][color="#1C2837"]Instead of "If this monster is attacked while in face down position you may negate the attack." I would suggest something like "If this monster is attacked while in face down defense position, flip this card face-up and negate the attack." either that or just make this a flip-effect monster.[/color][/font] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MibeR Posted March 7, 2011 Report Share Posted March 7, 2011 This card cannot be [b]N[/b]ormal [b]S[/b]ummoned. This card can only be [b]S[/b]et. If this monster is attacked while it is in face-down Defense Position you may negate the attack [color="#FFFF00"]by flip it face-up[/color]. Your opponent then randomly discard a card from their hand. If you use this effect, destroy this card at the end of the turn. When this card is sent to the [b]G[/b]raveyard, draw 1 card. thats the better OCG, you have some nice idea on modificating an effect Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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