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Hi, I been fixing the cards I made, please help me fix the text errors if you can, and please give comments and rate the cards.
Also where I can improve.
Thanks

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As long as this card remain face-up on the field, your opponent loose 500 life points during each of your standby phase. Effect will stop when your opponent has 1000 life points or less. This card cannot be destroyed by battle.

[img]http://img231.imageshack.us/img231/6527/166624.jpg[/img]

This card cannot be destroyed by battle. You take no Battle Damage from battles involving this card. If this card is remove from play or send to the graveyard, you can Special Summon this card by paying half of your life points. Once per turn you can destroyed one card on the field, and gain 1000 life point.
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Card 1:

As long as this card remain face-up on the field, your opponent [b]loses[/b] 500 life points during each of your [b]Standby Phase.[/b] [b]This effect is negated if your Opponent has less than 1000 Life Points.[/b] This card cannot be destroyed by battle [b](Battle Damage is calculated normally.)[/b]

A bit OP'ed, mostly because the Drain Effect mixed with not being destroyed by battle.

Card 2:

This card cannot be destroyed by battle. You take no Battle Damage from battles involving this card. If this card is [b]removed[/b] from play or [b]sent[/b] to the graveyard [b]by a card effect[/b], you can Special Summon this card by paying half of your life points. Once per turn you can destroyed one card on the field, and gain 1000 [b]Life Points.

[/b]I'm just trying to fix OCG. Now, they are still OP'ed.
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[quote name='.:TheLooker:.' timestamp='1299530516' post='5058536']
Card 1:

As long as this card remain face-up on the field, your opponent [b]loses[/b] 500 life points during each of your [b]Standby Phase.[/b] [b]This effect is negated if your Opponent has less than 1000 Life Points.[/b] This card cannot be destroyed by battle [b](Battle Damage is calculated normally.)[/b]

A bit OP'ed, mostly because the Drain Effect mixed with not being destroyed by battle.

Card 2:

This card cannot be destroyed by battle. You take no Battle Damage from battles involving this card. If this card is [b]removed[/b] from play or [b]sent[/b] to the graveyard [b]by a card effect[/b], you can Special Summon this card by paying half of your life points. Once per turn you can destroyed one card on the field, and gain 1000 [b]Life Points.

[/b]I'm just trying to fix OCG. Now, they are still OP'ed.
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Thanks for helping me with the OCG, where can you find help to fix the OCG?
how can I fix the second card so its not oped? removing the destryoed one card destroyed and add 1000 life point and add some attack point?
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