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A Random DARK monster


Darklord Draxon

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[spoiler= INFO]Card Name: "Dark Knight - Guardian of Destiny"
Level: 8 Attribute: [color="#4B0082"](DARK)[/color]
ATK: 2900 DEF: 1800[/spoiler][spoiler= LORE][color="#4B0082"]This card cannot be Special Summon. When this card is Normal Summon, you can discard 1 DARK monster from your Deck to the graveyard. Once per turn, you can remove 1 DARK monster from your graveyard to destroy 1 card on the field. If you use this effect, this card cannot attack this turn. When this card is removed from play, you can add this monster to your hand and 1 level 4 or lower DARK monster from your graveyard to your hand.[/color][/spoiler]
Hope you enjoy this card. I have been updating it for a while and I think it's complete.
[size="5"][font="Impact"]GIVE IN TO THE DARK!![/font][/size]
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This looks nice at first, but you need to correct the lore: Graveyard should be capitalized and you need to change the first two sentences to "This card cannot be Special Summoned. When this card is Normal Summoned, you can discard 1 DARK monster from your Deck to the Graveyard." As for the last part you should reword it so that it says "you can add this card and a Level 4 or lower DARK monster to your hand." The effect just seems like a weaker version of Dark Armed Dragon, which might actually make this a less over powered version of it. I honestly don;t know if it's a good or bad thing. The last effect provides some anti-support for Remove-from-play decks. Overall, this card seems playable and not too overpowered due to limitations on its abilities so I'll give it 8/10.
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thanks I knew I had some OCG errors. and this card is a mix of Armageddon Knight, DAD, and its own special effect but it has limitations and the DAD effect for this card can only be used once per turn. I am glad I made this card cuz cards like this is what people need to get a DARK deck running smoothly it would also be a dead draw if this card is teh only card in your hand that is also why is it good enough to be balanced. its effects its limitations.
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