cool_boy_jon1313 Posted March 7, 2011 Report Share Posted March 7, 2011 hey!!!! this is my second set ive put up on this site! hope you like it! [img]http://img852.imageshack.us/img852/9316/375582.jpg[/img] Lore^:To summon this card you must have at least 2 water type monster in the graveyard or in your hand.When you summon this card and its the only monster on your side of the field you can draw 2 cards and destroy one of your opponents spell cards on the field. [img]http://img703.imageshack.us/img703/9316/375582.jpg[/img] [img]http://img703.imageshack.us/img703/4679/375582c.jpg[/img] Lore^:To Special summon this card you must sacrifice 2 water type monster from your hand or the field. When this card is attacked by a water type monster its attack is negated and this monster gains ATK points equal to the Water monster that attacked it. [img]http://img821.imageshack.us/img821/9316/375582.jpg[/img] Lore^:Once this card is summoned it gains 300 ATK points for every fire type monster on the field but looses 100 DEF points for every water type monster on the field. Thanks for lookin at my cards! ill keep on posting new ones !! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cool_boy_jon1313 Posted March 13, 2011 Author Report Share Posted March 13, 2011 PLZ comment everyone!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chroneos Posted March 13, 2011 Report Share Posted March 13, 2011 [quote name='cool_boy_jon1313' timestamp='1300044079' post='5071652'] PLZ comment everyone!!!! [/quote] For the first 2 effect monsters, I would take out the mention of having/sacrificing cards in your hand as a requirement for its effect as they would be OP otherwise. And for land dragon specifically, maybe it gains only half of the attack of the attacking water monster. And I would change scorching's first effect to be that it gains 200 atk for every fire monster you control and change its type for Pyro. Also ask some of the senior members on advise for OCG (official card grammar) Otherwise they are good ; 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
August101 Posted March 13, 2011 Report Share Posted March 13, 2011 cool but u should probably make "The Scorching Dragon" a fire-type monster if it's "Scorching". Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cool_boy_jon1313 Posted March 20, 2011 Author Report Share Posted March 20, 2011 haha! thnx guys! ill fix them as soon as i can! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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